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Forum: Copywriting 13th May 2009, 07:02 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 806
Posted By elsvirtual
Re: Do sales copy formula turn you off?

Really? Because nothing makes me more ready to click that little red "x" and get the heck off of a website more than seeing a video that's more then 1-2 minutes long.

Maybe it's just me but...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 1st May 2009, 08:44 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 597
Posted By elsvirtual
Re: Newbie Requesting a Site Review please!

Hi Debbie...I've got a few comments for you:

1. The graphic header doesn't jive with what the content is all confuses me.

2. The pop-up comes up so fast. It asks me if I want more...
Forum: Copywriting 5th April 2009, 02:35 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 548
Posted By elsvirtual
Re: Please critique my salesletter - much appreciated

Hi Kelly,

I think you should look at this article about marketing to women
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It's got a lot of great points that you could really benefit from.
Forum: Copywriting 2nd April 2009, 08:02 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 668
Posted By elsvirtual
Re: I amn't a copywriter....

Hi Izzy,

I'm going to have to agree with everyone here and I'll tell you why.

I took a peek at your copy and I didn't even get past the headline. And that's because you have a feature-based...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 19th November 2008, 10:08 AM
Replies: 181
Views: 14,846
Posted By elsvirtual
Re: Hopefully, this doesn't happen to the Warrior Forum... Michel Fortin's Copywriters Board closes

What??? Live without the board? I feel withdrawl coming on!

I do agree though that the off-topic section should be cut out. It's really where all the trouble began. It opens up too many...
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