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Forum: Copywriting 27th July 2010, 01:05 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 874
Posted By K.serrattan
Re: Zero risk or No risk?

Two Words...

SPLIT TEST

When it comes to little things that make big differences you want to split test it. People on here may say, "Yeah I like this better", or "This sounds cooler"; however,...
Forum: Mind Warriors 24th June 2010, 05:11 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 514
Posted By K.serrattan
Tip Tid Bit on Fear~

Seneca once said: “It is not because things are difficult that we do not dare. It is because we do not dare, that things are difficult”

So, in other words, dance as though no one is watching ;)
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Forum: Copywriting 22nd June 2010, 06:16 PM
Replies: 40
Views: 1,937
Posted By K.serrattan
Re: How Important Are Testimonials?

Hey Randal,

Everything in a project has to come together and at least be on par if you want to see any success.

For example, your salescopy may be expertly done, but your preselling may be...
Forum: Copywriting 22nd June 2010, 05:45 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,051
Posted By K.serrattan
Re: Please Punch My Copy In the Face, $ Reward

Changed most of the script to fit my style. The tone is pretty formal and I've gone the safe route without being too original. Had fun doing it. Looking forward to going out for sushi! Haha. MMmmmm...
Forum: Copywriting 22nd June 2010, 04:35 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,056
Posted By K.serrattan
Re: Please critique this email!

Firstly, you've come a long way Prawn. And don't thank me, you did the work and soaked up the information in order to create a very convincing script. Being a good student in all aspects is the hard...
Forum: Copywriting 21st June 2010, 07:59 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,056
Posted By K.serrattan
Re: Please critique this email!

Was going good until we got to here. I almost laughed out loud, it was like I was listening to a real guy ( I really got into the script you had before the above quoted paragraph, I thought it was...
Forum: Copywriting 21st June 2010, 04:22 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,056
Posted By K.serrattan
Re: Please critique this email!

Glad I could help! Just a couple more pointers here:

An understanding of Pathos, represents an appeal to the audience's emotions (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Emotion).

Spend some time thinking...
Forum: Copywriting 21st June 2010, 03:15 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,056
Posted By K.serrattan
Re: Please critique this email!

Hey Prawn,

I've tested some copywriting conversion and such, I am no pro, but here is my input.

I would use: Like many suffering to lose weight

Are you saying that your system allows one to...
Forum: Mind Warriors 19th June 2010, 08:00 AM
Replies: 194
Views: 12,072
Posted By K.serrattan
Re: The Single Most Important Thing That Brings Success

Love.

You need to love what you do and love the people you do it for. the Real value at the end of the day is wither or not the people you do business with love you or not. Money follows love.
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Forum: Mind Warriors 19th June 2010, 06:55 AM
Replies: 50
Views: 2,614
Posted By K.serrattan
Re: Materialistic $UCCESS

Hmm, I wouldn't know what to do with a huge house or 1 million dollars.

Honestly I just do not define success as something that is materialistic. It is nice to have stuff, I totally agree with...
Forum: Mind Warriors 19th June 2010, 06:27 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,195
Posted By K.serrattan
You all Know Will Smith?

Most people know this man for being on the red carpet. But I know him more personally as being a fantastic teacher of life and well-being. Here is a snippet from an interview when Will is asked about...
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