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Forum: Offline Marketing 12th September 2015, 11:00 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,031
Posted By savidge4
Re: what to sell in a shop in a small seaside town center?

Ok, lets take a step back a moment. The REASON you moved into the space to begin with? o REMOVE the distractions correct? and here you are wanting what? a constant flow of retail customers...
Forum: Offline Marketing 10th September 2015, 07:20 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,031
Posted By savidge4
Re: what to sell in a shop in a small seaside town center?

Lets start with an obvious question. What is it you do from behind the desk? I understand it is "Online" but is there any aspect of what you do that could translate to an offline environment?
Forum: Offline Marketing 10th September 2015, 08:06 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,031
Posted By Oziboomer
Re: what to sell in a shop in a small seaside town center?

As Jason mentioned you should have this worked out before leasing a space.

But....

If there is traffic...

Why not sell advertisements in the window?

Much like a 9x12 but just the whole...
Forum: Offline Marketing 10th September 2015, 07:19 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,031
Posted By Jason Kanigan
Re: what to sell in a shop in a small seaside town center?

I--hmm. I really don't understand how you have done this.

If you can sublet the space, I would get a tenant in there who pays you a comfortable margin on either your lease or your mortgage,...
Forum: Copywriting 10th May 2013, 11:23 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,072
Posted By Alex Cohen
Re: Looking for feedback on sales copy and potentially a copywriter with proven track record

Google won't approve it... no terms of use or privacy policy.

Alex
Forum: Copywriting 10th May 2013, 10:00 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,072
Posted By Loren Woirhaye
Re: Looking for feedback on sales copy and potentially a copywriter with proven track record

Your price is going to restrict the appeal of the
product.

You have layout problems and the sales letter
is not specific enough, but the primary hurdle
I think you'll need to overcome is price...
Forum: Copywriting 10th May 2013, 09:44 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,072
Posted By Jonwebb
Re: Looking for feedback on sales copy and potentially a copywriter with proven track record

i agree with the above the font is to small, the price is reveled far to soon and the headline isn't attention grabbing something like

"FINALLY - A White Label Live Chat Business-in-a-box for the...
Forum: Copywriting 10th May 2013, 08:52 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,072
Posted By Jason_V
Re: Looking for feedback on sales copy and potentially a copywriter with proven track record

In my opinion, you need a strong headline, I'm not saying to use this exact one, this is just off the top of my head:

"Who Else Wants an Extremely Profitable Easy to Run Live Chat White Label...
Forum: Social Media 8th February 2013, 12:21 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 707
Posted By Morgan Westerman
Re: ideas for a viral video which works

I've taught this for years in coaching programs and speaking engagements. What makes a video go viral is emotion. That's it in one word. If your message is funny, inspiring, enraging,...
Forum: Copywriting 7th February 2013, 02:59 AM
Replies: 27
Views: 1,881
Posted By Moriarty
Re: Price of 1 email copy written? (professionally copywritten)

It all depends on what you want. What's more it's not always the case that you get what you pay for.

If you're looking to hire, make sure that the person you're hiring is confident and chatty in...
Forum: Copywriting 23rd October 2012, 12:29 AM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,079
Posted By masterpaintingnow
Re: I turned a $2,000 per week Offline business into an Online business. Is it going to work?

I'm not sure if fear is the way to go, or at least to express it as a negative. What if you said the same thing in a positive way?

Protect Your Children From Social Media that Can Harm Them.
...
Forum: Copywriting 22nd October 2012, 10:53 AM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,079
Re: I turned a $2,000 per week Offline business into an Online business. Is it going to work?

The problem I see is, you're trying to do 2 things at once.

Highlighting the real dangers of social media making it a "get rich quick" business opportunity.

Without meaning to, it reeks a...
Forum: Copywriting 22nd October 2012, 10:12 AM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,079
Posted By markpocock
Re: I turned a $2,000 per week Offline business into an Online business. Is it going to work?

There's a disconnect between the headline and the sub headline.

First you're telling me about dangers. Then you're saying there's a
biz op.

Then you're going into cyber bullying.

Could this...
Forum: Copywriting 22nd October 2012, 07:45 AM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,079
Posted By max5ty
Re: I turned a $2,000 per week Offline business into an Online business. Is it going to work?

Congratulations on your success!

Couple of thoughts in my opinion...

1. You're headline is not good. You have too many multi syllable words that make the reader pause too long. I thought the...
Forum: Copywriting 21st October 2012, 06:05 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,079
Posted By ewenmack
Re: I turned a $2,000 per week Offline business into an Online business. Is it going to work?

Yes you would be right.

My headline only had one emotionally charged negative word.

Just using the same term used in the news media to first of all grab attention.

Then to attract those who...
Forum: Copywriting 21st October 2012, 05:02 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,079
Posted By ewenmack
Re: I turned a $2,000 per week Offline business into an Online business. Is it going to work?

Cyber Bullying: Join The Crusade Against It And Be Paid

Best,
Ewen
Forum: Copywriting 21st October 2012, 04:41 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,079
Posted By Mark Andrews
Re: I turned a $2,000 per week Offline business into an Online business. Is it going to work?

"Are these social media dangers
potentially harming your child?"


Amazing Business Opportunity
Suitable for All Parents

Could this be the answer you're looking for
to help protect...
Forum: Copywriting 21st October 2012, 04:27 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,079
Re: I turned a $2,000 per week Offline business into an Online business. Is it going to work?

Hi kornelkathi,

The headline and subheads aren't good - they're all over the place - they must be concise. And easy to read.

Also how can a prospect do this in their summer holidays when the...
Forum: Copywriting 21st October 2012, 03:26 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,079
Posted By Mark Andrews
Re: I turned a $2,000 per week Offline business into an Online business. Is it going to work?

No time for a full detailed critique right now since I'm bang in the middle of writing a piece of sales copy for a Brazilian TV celebrity.

Just popping in here for a quick 5 minute breather.
...
Forum: Copywriting 21st October 2012, 03:24 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,079
Posted By matchoo77
Re: I turned a $2,000 per week Offline business into an Online business. Is it going to work?

I would say you need to lay out the benefits of what this business opp would allow people to enjoy. It's not hype to talk about financial freedom, paying off debt, going on vacation etc. Those are...
Forum: Copywriting 21st October 2012, 03:09 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,079
Posted By dosapati
Re: I turned a $2,000 per week Offline business into an Online business. Is it going to work?

Hi Kathi, i reviewed your sales page ..it looks good at the top of sales page you said Its FRee when i drag down there is price tag..which i feel odd.

one suggestion you can consider ..put one...
Forum: Offline Marketing 21st October 2012, 06:16 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 2,844
Easy, Quick and Fun Cold Calling

Sincere apologies if this has already been covered.

Many years ago I was selling advertising space, it was all done by cold calling.

Here was my technique.

I wrote a 30 second script that...
Forum: Offline Marketing 18th October 2012, 04:56 PM
Replies: 68
Views: 3,524
Posted By kenmichaels
How to build a sales force on a shoe string budget.

I get a couple PM's about this semi regularly,
There are two other off liners who have asked me about this
that are currently looking for offices.

also i owe an explanation from another post...
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