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Forum: Copywriting 20th January 2012, 10:38 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 633
Posted By Andrew Gould
Re: Final sales page adjustements

Hi Yasser,

Nice to see you've kept plugging away at it, and this is definitely another step in the right direction.

The header looks more professional but it's taking up too much of the screen,...
Forum: Copywriting 19th December 2011, 05:16 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 633
Re: Final sales page adjustements

Hi Yasser,

Yes it is brave to post your promo - and your second version is better.

Andrew knows his stuff so do take his advice.

What did strike me was the layout - it's shouting and...
Forum: Copywriting 19th December 2011, 03:55 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 633
Posted By Andrew Gould
Re: Final sales page adjustements

Hi Yasser,

Nice to see you took the criticism and have come back with a better page.

You're still not there yet though, so here's a few more thoughts for you:

Your header's serving no...
Forum: Copywriting 12th December 2011, 01:51 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 821
Posted By Treborrevo
Re: I want suggestions to improve my pitch page

Yasser,

Yes, you could use some design help... But you could have the most professionally designed site in the world and it can still fail.

On the other hand, there are plenty of Ugly sites...
Forum: Copywriting 11th December 2011, 06:19 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 821
Posted By Andrew Gould
Re: I want suggestions to improve my pitch page

Hi Yasser,

As others have said, your header needs a complete redesign, for now I'd just scrap it.

Your headline is all about you, it wants to be about your prospect.

Your photo gives the...
Forum: Copywriting 11th December 2011, 11:40 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 821
Posted By salahprint
Re: I want suggestions to improve my pitch page

Hello Yasser
I suggest you to work for a logo or pay a graphic designer to do it for you
And also your text must respect your template limits (approximative wide is 500 px)
I have create a picture...
Forum: Copywriting 11th December 2011, 11:20 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 821
Posted By max5ty
Re: I want suggestions to improve my pitch page

I'll leave your critique to those who are better at it than me.

One thing I've always wondered though...

Why do all the sales letters I see online, always start out with, "From the desk of...?"...
Forum: Copywriting 11th December 2011, 11:13 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 821
Posted By Ledux
Re: I want suggestions to improve my pitch page

Just few things that I would change:
1. leave some space near the borders.
2. Create a better header, the red line is kinda strange.
3. Correct the mistakes "With just a few hrs of work"
4. The...
Forum: Copywriting 11th December 2011, 11:04 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 821
Posted By travlinguy
Re: I want suggestions to improve my pitch page

Okay, you've got a novel at the top of the page. There's way too much up there. Get a compelling headline and leave the copy for the body of the letter. I didn't go much past that because I was...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 20th November 2010, 12:55 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 532
Posted By Gerald Arno
What Moves You Forward?

Everybody knows about it, everybody is talking about it, although who really has the willpower and consistency to permanently work on his attitude? The answer is very few people have it.

What...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 9th November 2010, 02:23 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 897
Posted By Muhammad Hassan
Other Warriors said they have not done this - well I DID - here's why

Yesterday (November 8) there was a thread about
the new Warrior forum banner ads where a number
of Warriors said they did not click and some said that
they would not click.

Well, I clicked one:...
Forum: Affiliate Program Database 30th October 2010, 04:16 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 73,187
Posted By admin
Affiliate Program Database Listing Rules & Listing Fees

This section is for all members who wish to list their Affiliate Program.

Please list:

Business Name
Product Name
Product Description
Product Price
Affiliate Commission Percentage
URL...
Forum: Off Topic Forum 21st October 2010, 02:00 AM
Replies: 160
Views: 7,350
Posted By KevinBurns
Re: As of 5:00 pm yesterday, I became homeless.

First...

I have been where your at now, so I'm in a good position to give you some advice.
I know it seems like the end of the world, but trust me it's not.

You say that you believe that...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 19th October 2010, 04:28 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 556
Posted By NicoleBeckett
Re: what is the best timing for new blog posts

Absolutely. If you try to update your blog once a day (or even more), make sure you can keep up with the schedule. Once you do get steady traffic, your loyal readers will start to depend on you. ...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 19th October 2010, 04:13 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 556
Posted By Roey Pimentel
Re: what is the best timing for new blog posts

The big thing is consistency. That being said, don't make it exact! What I mean is, don't schedule it for the same day and time. That will look automated. Instead, decide on a reasonable...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 19th October 2010, 08:05 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 537
Posted By jfstraw
What business should you get into?

I get hundreds of emails each month asking, "What business should I get into?"

Who is the most beautiful woman in the world?? -- Depends upon who's looking, doesn't it?

The same holds true in...
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