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Forum: Copywriting 4th October 2015, 12:30 PM
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Posted By CopyKen
Re: My first-ever 2 copys. Critique needed. Doesn't catch attention.

I see where ewenmack is coming from. I definitely gave the wrong reason at first (discovering main pain points and putting the audience in segments) and yes it's much easier and time-efficient to do...
Forum: Copywriting 4th October 2015, 11:47 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 946
Posted By CopyKen
Re: My first-ever 2 copys. Critique needed. Doesn't catch attention.

Yes, copyassassin ;). Right now I haven't got much success with it, because people haven't answered my survey yet, although I've distributed my content to 8 FB Groups, 4 forums and to 30 social media...
Forum: Copywriting 4th October 2015, 08:46 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 946
Posted By CopyKen
Re: My first-ever 2 copys. Critique needed. Doesn't catch attention.

Yup, I get your point Ewenmack! ;)

But with survey, you can put the respondents into 3-4 major customer segments, thus creating e-mail lists and autoresponders that directly talk to them.

With...
Forum: Copywriting 3rd October 2015, 04:51 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 946
Posted By CopyKen
Re: My first-ever 2 copys. Critique needed. Doesn't catch attention.

The point of the survey was to find business owners / social media marketers and target their main pain points, so I could have a better imagination of my target customer (ideal prospect and how to...
Forum: Copywriting 3rd October 2015, 04:49 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 946
Posted By CopyKen
Re: My first-ever 2 copys. Critique needed. Doesn't catch attention.

By the way, the homepage sales copy was done after Kevin Rogers sales copy. But when I finished my sales hook, I immediately felt that something is off and it was definately not 60 seconds.
Forum: Copywriting 3rd October 2015, 10:54 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 946
Posted By CopyKen
Re: My first-ever 2 copys. Critique needed. Doesn't catch attention.

Great points, Angie!

I will rewrite those stories tomorrow and let's see what happens :)
Forum: Copywriting 3rd October 2015, 09:17 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 946
Posted By CopyKen
Re: My first-ever 2 copys. Critique needed. Doesn't catch attention.

I'm glad I shared this publicly :).

What do you think about Marcias commentary about being a victim, could this resognate with business owners in a positive manner? I think it should somehow......
Forum: Copywriting 3rd October 2015, 09:08 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 946
Posted By CopyKen
Re: 3 and a half minutes to better copy.

Love the humor, gjabiz. It's funny that before writing I knew all the theory, that you must talk about the customer.. and after writing... it's nowhere to be seen.
Forum: Copywriting 3rd October 2015, 08:11 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 946
Posted By CopyKen
Re: My first-ever 2 copys. Critique needed. Doesn't catch attention.

Seems like a case of overthinking. Thanks for your input :).
Forum: Copywriting 3rd October 2015, 08:09 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 946
Posted By CopyKen
Re: My first-ever 2 copys. Critique needed. Doesn't catch attention.

Interesting suggestion. In my mind I thought I was portraying a picture of "not giving up and succeeding", which would require the reader to feel the pain and see that we've come a long way, thus...
Forum: Copywriting 3rd October 2015, 05:55 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 946
Posted By CopyKen
My first-ever 2 copys. Critique needed. Doesn't catch attention.

Struggling to help people with my product which is going to be built around survey data...

Can't seem to spark interest of people with this kind of copy, what do you think? Give me the real deal. ...
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