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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 28th May 2009, 08:33 AM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,165
Posted By BillOliver
Re: Critique my site please

No No No1 I like Times New Roman!

Yes, congrats for getting started. Keep going.

MAIN PROBLEM: Lack of credibility.
What should reader believe you?
Why you instead of someone else?...
Forum: Copywriting 22nd May 2009, 11:58 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 680
Posted By BillOliver
Re: Squeeze page feedback please - a newsletter on learning

1) NEVER put your name up the top.
2) Test this headline!
Here's How To Free Up More Time To Socialize
... without sacrificing your grades!

WHY? I think it was Dan K who discovered that at...
Forum: Copywriting 21st May 2009, 05:11 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 640
Posted By BillOliver
Re: Please help review my copy

1) The major mistake product developers make is to first think "product" then "market". Gary Halbert said: "Find a starving crowd." That is, FIRST look at the market, THEN tailor make the product...
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