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Forum: Internet Marketing Product Reviews & Ratings 14th October 2008, 10:44 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,288
Posted By maurice
Re: Need a review of my sales page - please

You should post this over at the copywriting forum.
Forum: Copywriting 14th October 2008, 09:41 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 581
Posted By maurice
Re: What do you think of this headline?


Creating headlines can be a tricky thing.

I find that readers are turned off by hype. Saying "Build 100,000 List Without
Spending A Single Penny" doesn't sound real. Have you built a...
Forum: Copywriting 3rd October 2008, 12:53 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 710
Posted By maurice
Re: Please provide feedback on my sales draft


I say ship it.

Let it go...Give it a test run. You can always do split tests to get
your copy better.

Don't get caught up into perfection. Perfect sales letter don't exist.

Forum: Copywriting 3rd October 2008, 12:45 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 830
Posted By maurice
Re: I Need An Honest Sales Letter Review

Here's what I would do if I was paid to re-write this sales letter...

1. Re-do the headline. I liked the suggested headline by AnarchyAds.
2. Create a more grabbing opening phrase.
3. Write...
Forum: Copywriting 1st October 2008, 06:51 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 650
Posted By maurice
Re: Here's how I write copy... plus FREE copywriting cousre

Nice strategy! Sales letter reads well too!

Forum: Copywriting 30th September 2008, 07:48 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 605
Posted By maurice
Re: How To Know If Sales Letter Is Good

>>>but how will I know that the work is great, average, or even bad?

You have to test it. A lot of folks like to get sales letter critiques. Not sure why.

The best way to know is to test it. I...
Forum: Copywriting 20th September 2008, 06:58 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,479
Posted By maurice
Re: Sales Copy Software


I agree and disagree.

>>>While I understand what you're saying, Maurice, cookie-cutter sales
>>>copy "formulas" are the reason why I don't read sales copy anymore.

I agree. But...
Forum: Copywriting 20th September 2008, 01:21 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,479
Posted By maurice
Re: Sales Copy Software


I disagree.

How do you get the personal touch if you don't know where to even start?

When I started out years ago I tried copying Corey Rudl's sales letter and
failed miserably.
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