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Forum: Copywriting 24th April 2011, 02:34 AM
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Re: Warrior Forum Copywriter Directory

Real Name: Peter Wise
Warrior Name: Ideaswise
Areas of Expertise: Website copywriting, SEO, advertising copywriting, sales collateral
Areas of Interest: consumer, IT, financial, travel
Forum: Copywriting 11th April 2011, 02:59 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 770
Posted By Ideaswise
Re: Critique This Hostel's Sales Copy Please? :)

Just a quick response from a UK copywriter perspective:

You could beef up the natural SEO. Just rearranging the headline would be a start: 'Hostel in Taormina Sicily: do you want the best?'
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