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Forum: Copywriting 27th May 2015, 03:22 AM
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Views: 1,357
Posted By TypingPandas
Re: Honest and Objective Review of Sales Letter Please

Hey there,

Try to back up everything you're saying with more arguments. You want to convince the audience and this piece is not that convincing. Tell the readers why should they use the system and...
Forum: Copywriting 27th May 2015, 01:53 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,357
Posted By Nordstrom
Re: Honest and Objective Review of Sales Letter Please

A couple of things I've noticed that you can fix:

1.Your tonality in the video is horrible. It is important to show in the first 3 seconds that I as a customer can trust that you are smart,...
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