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Forum: Copywriting 24th January 2018, 10:20 PM
Replies: 24
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RE: Which names do you like the most?

That's a good idea, to ask why they like the name. I could ask a few people yes :- ) thanks.
Forum: Copywriting 24th January 2018, 04:46 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 288
RE: Which names do you like the most?

That's a good question. I didn't think much about that.

Most of the polls were via PickFu and Amazon Mechanical Turk. I think the people who answer those polls are random people, maybe who are a...
Forum: Copywriting 23rd January 2018, 09:10 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 288
RE: Which names do you like the most?

That's a good point. I'm not sure if it will :- / At the same time, names like "Slack" works ok so ... I think Talkyard can be worth giving a try. I suppose I can rename it again if I come up with a...
Forum: Copywriting 23rd January 2018, 07:38 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 288
RE: Which names do you like the most?

Well yes I'm worried about both. The 's' not 'z' domains were unavailable though.

I had a look at talkyard.com — nothing, no server replies. I checked this before I decided on Talkyard, and also...
Forum: Copywriting 23rd January 2018, 07:35 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 288
RE: Which names do you like the most?

Ok thanks for the feedback :- )
In some online polls, Talkyard did quite well, but Somesense and words with "sense" weren't so popular. Also Talkyard gives a hint that it's about ... gathering and...
Forum: Copywriting 23rd January 2018, 07:33 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 288
RE: Which names do you like the most?

Yes, already someone accidentally typed `talkyard.com` instead of `.io`. Oh well. Maybe I can get the .com later.
Forum: Copywriting 13th January 2018, 09:08 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 288
RE: Which names do you like the most?

Hi @jessegilbert! Thanks for the tips & ideas :- )

I also don't like the z letters. The reason for them is that the 's' spelled "real" words, were unavailable.

Personally I want to avoid words...
Forum: Copywriting 13th January 2018, 09:02 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 288
RE: Which names do you like the most?

Followup comment:

My 60-70 year old parents came up the name "Talkyard" :- ) and, in some polls I ran, via PickFu, Amazon Mechanical Turk and via Facebook, Talkyard has been the most popular...
Forum: Copywriting 13th January 2018, 09:00 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 288
RE: Which names do you like the most?

Deleting this. I clicked the wrong reply button.
Forum: Copywriting 13th January 2018, 08:58 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 288
RE: Which names do you like the most?

I ran some online polls, via PickFu and Amazon Mechanical Turk, + asked via a Facebook polls, and turns out Idealoft is popular, so seems it's a good name indeed.

About ideasgalore etc: Hmm I...
Forum: Copywriting 11th January 2018, 10:11 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 288
RE: Which names do you like the most?

Hi! 'creamX.com' domains are actually available, however I'm worried the names would make people think about food, or hand cream or something like that. Thanks anyway :- )
Forum: Copywriting 11th January 2018, 10:07 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 288
RE: Which names do you like the most?

Thanks! I like 'idealoft' and 'nooffense'. The .com domains are taken already, but ... maybe there's some combination, like 'ideayard' or ... hmm. Something I can think about :- )

The software is...
Forum: Copywriting 11th January 2018, 09:58 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 288
RE: Which names do you like the most?

Hi, thanks for the feedback. Actually the reason for the 'z' is not fashion or trends — instead, the only reason is, that the "real" domain names, the ones with 's', are taken already. For example,...
Forum: Copywriting 10th January 2018, 11:57 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 288
Which names do you like the most?

Hi! Choosing a good name, is part of marketing? Can I ask here?

Which names below do you like the most? Your 1st, 2nd and 3rd choice? (or dislike the least)

It's for a domain name, for a...
Forum: Website Design 10th January 2018, 11:46 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 107
RE: Please review my games site

I think lots of small icons aren't helpful, when finding a game to play. I would need to look at larger screenshots, + read a brief description of the game. Maybe rework the page completely, so you...
Forum: Website Design 10th January 2018, 11:40 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 129
RE: Help for my daughter's new web page

I think it's not obvious what the website is selling. Is it individual coaching, per person (per child)? Or is it some mobile app that helps with keeping one's child dry somehow? Or is it maybe a PDF...
Forum: Copywriting 28th October 2017, 12:37 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 397
RE: Critique this title & tag line? (online discussion platform)

> Then say so

Thanks that's a good idea. I agree that the stuff I wrote initially is a bit vague (right?), I mean "helps find good answers". I have since changed to "Create a discussion forum...
Forum: Copywriting 25th October 2017, 11:55 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 397
RE: Critique this title & tag line? (online discussion platform)

Aha yes making "shape the future" more specific, is an interesting idea, didn't think about that.

I don't know who's the villain :- P

.... Hmm, in your example: governments and private...
Forum: Copywriting 25th October 2017, 11:50 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 397
RE: Critique this title & tag line? (online discussion platform)

It looks at a comment's Like votes, and compares with how-many-*read*-the-comment, to find out if it's probably a good comment, and then shows it higher up on the page. — This works fine & finds good...
Forum: Copywriting 25th October 2017, 11:38 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 397
RE: Critique this title & tag line? (online discussion platform)

Yes, ... and this time, I did things in the wrong order. At the time, I didn't know anything other that how to write source code. So that's what I started doing, and built a minimum-viable-product....
Forum: Copywriting 25th October 2017, 11:36 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 397
RE: Critique this title & tag line? (online discussion platform)

Thanks yes those are good questions. I'm going to create a dedicated landing page for non-profits a bit later, and the stuff you wrote, seems like an outline for what could be on that landing page.
Forum: Copywriting 25th October 2017, 11:35 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 397
RE: Critique this title & tag line? (online discussion platform)

Ok yes the title, ... currently it is "EffectiveDiscussions". It's maybe a bit a slogan at the tame time ... it's a bit too long though maybe, and maybe sounds a bit too serious :- /

Thanks for...
Forum: Website Design 30th September 2017, 11:07 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 125
RE: What do you guys think about my website?

Right now when I open the homepage I see "Two ways to save: Fre shipping ..." and I wonder: save what? and ship what? ... I suggest add a title & tagline that explains what the website is about,...
Forum: Copywriting 28th September 2017, 12:50 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 397
RE: Critique this title & tag line? (online discussion platform)

Agree, time to start talking with them :- )
(which I should have done looooong ago yes.)
Forum: Copywriting 28th September 2017, 12:48 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 397
RE: Critique this title & tag line? (online discussion platform)

Hi John, thanks for the reply. I like the tagline you suggested, it feels friendly and seems to me it'd work for companies & schools & other stuff too, not just non-profits.

Ok, maybe I should...
Forum: Copywriting 28th September 2017, 12:37 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 397
RE: Critique this title & tag line? (online discussion platform)

Hi SAR, thanks for the reply. I did things in the wrong order, and started with building something, rather than finding customers and asking them what features / benefits the wanted. At least...
Forum: Copywriting 27th September 2017, 11:46 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 397
RE: Critique this title & tag line? (online discussion platform)

Maybe I should add a plain text link to a demo forum, so you can, if you're interested, see how it looks. You'll need to remove the spaces between "https://" and the rest:

question-answers: (finds...
Forum: Copywriting 27th September 2017, 11:40 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 397
RE: Critique this title & tag line? (online discussion platform)

Hi Steve, thanks for the question :- )

Hmm the benefit is rather that the software finds the good / best answers, among the answers people have posted. Otherwise the best answer tends to get lost...
Forum: Copywriting 27th September 2017, 11:38 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 397
RE: Critique this title & tag line? (online discussion platform)

Maybe the following is a benefit? It's the main tagline, but rephrased a bit so the meaning is different:

Create a discussion forum that finds good answers and ideas for your organization and its...
Forum: Copywriting 26th September 2017, 09:55 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 397
RE: Critique this title & tag line? (online discussion platform)

I don't understand a thing. I first thought that was a spam post, but I cannot find any link elsewhere, so ... what is it? No offence intended.
Forum: Copywriting 26th September 2017, 09:53 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 397
RE: Critique this title & tag line? (online discussion platform)

Thanks for the feedback. Maybe the main feature is "all you need for your community".

The forum works like a question-answers software: it helps people find good answers and ideas. There's other...
Forum: Copywriting 26th September 2017, 01:02 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 397
Critique this title & tag line? (online discussion platform)

Hi, I'm developing an online discussion platform. Initially the target customer/user group will be non-profits looking to improve people's lives / help people / change the world. With that in mind,...
Forum: Copywriting 26th September 2017, 01:01 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 473
RE: Please help: I am trying to come up with a good headline

To me, 1) is unclear. You might as well be doing source code optimization ("full speed"), or provide high-availability services ("all systems running").

2) sounds to me as if you sell hardware.
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