Forum: Copywriting 
8th September 2014, 09:58 AM
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Forum: Copywriting
6th September 2014, 08:38 AM
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Forum: Copywriting
5th September 2014, 06:23 AM
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Replies: 15
Views: 1,192  Re: Please, help critique my copy
Ummm yeah, I'm not feeling this. The letter or the offer.
You say it's free.
I read this as a potential client, and I'm thinking it could just possibly, by judging from what you've wrote,...
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Forum: Copywriting
4th September 2014, 02:41 PM
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Replies: 15
Views: 1,192 Re: Please, help critique my copy
Hi Michael,
I like what you're aiming for with the metaphor.
Couple big problems though, let's start with your headline...
A Lethal Weapon and an Offer No Smart Marketer Should Refuse
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Forum: Copywriting
4th September 2014, 10:07 AM
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Replies: 15
Views: 1,192 Re: Please, help critique my copy
TL;DR.
I got through the first part and was immediately turned off.
What if your prospect doesn't get the movie reference? What if they're not a fan of guns or killing animals? There are a lot...
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Forum: Copywriting
4th September 2014, 10:02 AM
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Replies: 4
Views: 638 Critique requesters: help us help you
There's a tool that you can use to help protect yourself from getting skewered when asking for a critique. It's an easy way to protect the nads, fellas. And ladies, it'll help you make sure you've...
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Forum: Copywriting
4th September 2014, 06:55 AM
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Replies: 15
Views: 1,192 Re: Please, help critique my copy
Hi Michael,
Hope you're well.
Here's a bit of what I think, starting with your headline...
"A Lethal Weapon and an Offer No Smart Marketer Should Refuse"
It's not specific enough... what...
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Forum: Copywriting
4th September 2014, 04:23 AM
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Replies: 15
Views: 1,192 Re: Please, help critique my copy
Michael, it lacks specifics, curiosity and building value.
Now if you were to talk about a advertising
method widely used in the 60's by ad agency Olgivy And Mather,
$350,000 worth of Facebook...
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Forum: Copywriting
14th August 2014, 07:44 AM
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Replies: 27
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
27th July 2014, 03:35 AM
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Replies: 129
Views: 8,553 Re: I suck at making money online
Please excuse the "contrary" tone but I disagree 100%. :o
We get that cartoon pasted in to this forum regularly. I think it's hugely misleading, misinformative and unhelpful.
It implies that a...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
25th July 2014, 10:27 AM
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Replies: 27
Views: 831 Re: What makes a good WSO?
What makes for a good WSO is the exact same thing that makes and product or service good, whether it'a a WSO or not.
That exact same thing? Ask and answer this simple question... Does it solve the...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
24th July 2014, 09:38 PM
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Replies: 27
Views: 831 Re: What makes a good WSO?
Actually I have seen dozens of WSO's that are very viable ways to make $10K a month. The problem many times is the buyer not the product. You see you actually have to take action.
This is just...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
24th July 2014, 11:21 AM
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Replies: 27
Views: 831 Re: What makes a good WSO?
What makes a good WSO headline? Wild claims of big money without working.
What makes a good WSO? A viable plan for a reasonable and workable business model.
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
24th July 2014, 10:57 AM
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Replies: 27
Views: 831 Re: What makes a good WSO?
No - I run a mile from anything with an income claim, and I advise others to do the same. :eek: :mad:
A respected vendor, a product/service in demand, a non-hyped-up sales-post, and...
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Forum: Warrior Forum News
14th July 2014, 03:22 PM
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Replies: 220
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Forum: Warrior Forum News
14th July 2014, 03:16 PM
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Replies: 220
Views: 31,993 Launching something big in 7 days
Thanks to you, Warrior Forum is the #1 Internet marketing community and marketplace in the world. For those of you that don't know, in April this year Warrior Forum was acquired by Freelancer.com and...
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Forum: Copywriting
4th June 2014, 12:41 PM
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Replies: 17
Views: 1,439 |
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Forum: Copywriting
31st May 2014, 04:47 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 1,187 |
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Forum: Copywriting
31st May 2014, 03:58 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 1,187 Joe, you know I'm a Hollywood wannabe....thanks.
Thanks Joe, I think it is great stuff. I watch at least a movie a day. Then, on Sunday's, race through them and take notes.
I had a hard time with Gravity, had everything I could do not to watch...
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Forum: Copywriting
30th May 2014, 05:27 PM
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Replies: 56
Views: 3,317 |
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Forum: Copywriting
30th May 2014, 04:52 PM
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Replies: 56
Views: 3,317 |
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Forum: Copywriting
30th May 2014, 04:34 PM
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Replies: 56
Views: 3,317 |
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Forum: Growth Hacking
22nd May 2014, 11:49 AM
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Replies: 53
Views: 17,792 |
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Forum: Growth Hacking
22nd May 2014, 09:08 AM
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Replies: 53
Views: 17,792 |
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Forum: Copywriting
9th May 2014, 10:31 PM
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Replies: 31
Views: 2,332 |
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Forum: Copywriting
9th May 2014, 09:47 AM
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Replies: 21
Views: 1,242 Re: Thoughts on this guarantee, please?
Good points.
Money isn't the only thing the client is risking. In fact, it's the smallest risk in most cases.
The biggest risk, which none of them will tell you about out loud, is the fear...
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Forum: Copywriting
9th May 2014, 07:48 AM
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Replies: 7
Views: 1,039 A couple of answers.
Lately, I've been giving the benefit of the doubt when it comes to searching WF for answers because I was looking for information and even though there is a dedicated thread (an all in one) on the...
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Forum: Copywriting
6th May 2014, 05:43 PM
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Replies: 0
Views: 565 |
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Forum: Copywriting
6th May 2014, 08:31 AM
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Replies: 31
Views: 2,332 |
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Forum: Copywriting
5th May 2014, 09:26 PM
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Replies: 31
Views: 2,332 Easy Steps to Writing Sales Copy That CONVERTS
Here is an easy to follow outline to help you write sales copy that converts.
STEP ONE: Develope your avatar. That is, define who you're writing to.
STEP TWO: Write a short story about how...
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Forum: Copywriting
5th May 2014, 05:24 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 665 Re: Snake Oil or a Scientific Process?
While I wouldn't suggest outright recommending plagarism, we would all be lying if we said we've never used some source material as inspiration. These are great landing pages for a reason and likely...
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Forum: Copywriting
5th May 2014, 04:40 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 665 Re: Snake Oil or a Scientific Process?
I'm not sure it makes any difference whether you do it by hand or by typing, but having the actual text of well-constructed sales letters go through your mind and your hands, slowly, does teach you....
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Forum: Copywriting
5th May 2014, 02:50 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 665 Re: Snake Oil or a Scientific Process?
It's very effective. Eventually you pick up the concepts and methods which made the copy great and then it's incorporated into your mind on an unconscious level. It influences your creativity in the...
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Forum: Copywriting
5th May 2014, 02:15 PM
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Replies: 11
Views: 1,128 My copy's sold millions: here's a quick tip
When writing first drafts, rather than sit at the computer, I go old-school and either:
a) get out of the house, to a starbucks or library or park, to write (longhand on pad of paper w/pen)
or...
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Forum: Copywriting
2nd May 2014, 05:35 PM
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Replies: 11
Views: 1,099 Do you find this ironic?
How many times have you heard a copywriter say, "My family and friends still don't understand what I do..."?
I've heard it a lot and find it ironic.
Really? You're a copywriter and can't...
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Forum: Copywriting
28th April 2014, 07:14 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 1,814 |
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Forum: Copywriting
28th April 2014, 02:05 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 1,814 |
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Forum: Copywriting
24th April 2014, 10:16 AM
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Views: 1,814 |
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
23rd April 2014, 10:30 AM
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Replies: 14
Views: 1,141 Re: Dangers of exploring the HEALTH niche!
That's what I'm talking about we are no longer free to say even what is true so those who are selling bad medicine don't have to loose marketshare. That is what the law is about it's not to protect...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
23rd April 2014, 10:17 AM
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Replies: 14
Views: 1,141 Re: Dangers of exploring the HEALTH niche!
You also have to be careful if you're marketing in other countries. I once wrote an ebook for someone about treating a specific liver disease. It's possible that the suggestions I outline could...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
23rd April 2014, 10:05 AM
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Replies: 14
Views: 1,141 Re: Dangers of exploring the HEALTH niche!
Be careful most countries have Medical/Parma industrial complexes and and are working hard to keep a monopoly so anyone competing is harasses with thousands of laws that "protect" the people. In...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
23rd April 2014, 08:24 AM
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Replies: 14
Views: 1,141 Re: Dangers of exploring the HEALTH niche!
Hi Michael! How are you?
Providing disclaimers and avoiding phony claims will help. Check out ftc.gov (Federal Trade Commission site). The Federal Trade Commission works for consumers to...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
22nd April 2014, 04:28 AM
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Replies: 14
Views: 1,141 Re: Dangers of exploring the HEALTH niche!
I would always practice common sense - Visable disclaimers and so on, and don't make any wild claims ect.
But, I am not a legal rep or anything, so don't take my word for it!
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
22nd April 2014, 03:11 AM
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Replies: 14
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
22nd April 2014, 03:01 AM
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Replies: 14
Views: 1,141 Re: Dangers of exploring the HEALTH niche!
This thread and sites might help.
http://www.warriorforum.com/main-internet-marketing-discussion-forum/632044-hey-guys-question-selling-supplements-legalities.html
Know What You Can...
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Forum: Copywriting
21st April 2014, 12:35 PM
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Replies: 15
Views: 1,125 Do You Want To Be The Best... Or Not?
There are a lot of copywriters. More everyday.
But when you actually get some controls under your belt, you're in the company of an elite few.
In other words...
The copy world is pretty...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
18th April 2014, 05:44 PM
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Replies: 27
Views: 1,227 |
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
18th April 2014, 01:10 PM
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Replies: 27
Views: 1,227 Re: If you had a magic wand...
I am rather allergic to writing copy.
But I love networking with my fanbase.
Product Creation is something that I find very soothing.
HATE FB advertising, mind you.
Did I mention product...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
18th April 2014, 01:08 PM
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Replies: 27
Views: 1,227 |
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
18th April 2014, 12:19 PM
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Replies: 27
Views: 1,227 |
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
18th April 2014, 10:48 AM
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Replies: 27
Views: 1,227 Re: If you had a magic wand...
1) traffic
2) traffic
3) traffic
I wrote a blog once that said "Traffic is more important than content".
It's my far my most popular piece, and resulted in boatloads of response and hatemail....
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
18th April 2014, 10:24 AM
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Replies: 27
Views: 1,227 |
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
18th April 2014, 10:09 AM
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Replies: 27
Views: 1,227 |
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
18th April 2014, 09:57 AM
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Replies: 27
Views: 1,227 Re: If you had a magic wand...
I totally agree! Most people start to follow one business model such as List building, Affiliate Marketing, Offline, Mobile, SMS, Youtube Video, SEO, etc. And they try it for a little while and...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
17th April 2014, 04:59 PM
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Replies: 27
Views: 1,227 |
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
17th April 2014, 04:09 PM
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Replies: 27
Views: 1,227 Re: If you had a magic wand...
1) Having a reliable network (list, Fb group, mastermind, etc.)
2) Your ability to get help from other and create win-win situations in order to reach higher levels quicker
3) Copywriting skills
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