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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 6th March 2009, 09:28 AM
Replies: 20
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Posted By antmen
Re: My very first Website! - feedback please -

Hey Bruce,

I threw something together for you real quick... it's a template for you to use. All I did was take some of the color theme of your target page and the text area panel's style.

Go...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 6th March 2009, 07:09 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 709
Posted By Prashant_W
Re: My very first Website! - feedback please -

really bad...

1) learn the art of paragraphing or i guarantee you will lose your viewers.

2) get rid of the banner at the top of your site. replace it with a headline which will
actually grab...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 6th March 2009, 06:49 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 709
Posted By hotlinkz
Re: My very first Website! - feedback please -

Please accept this critique in the spirit in which it is given... :)

I agree with others, the header is a bit of a strain and the copy needs to be cleaned up.

Your bio information would...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 6th March 2009, 05:52 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 709
Posted By artwebster
Re: My very first Website! - feedback please -

Presumably you want an honest opinion and you have had some already but, really, this is not a very good start, is it?

The header graphic is awful and the elements are too small.

The text is...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 5th March 2009, 05:03 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 709
Posted By thegadgetblogger
Re: My very first Website! - feedback please -

Hey! Good site in general, again, I'd say the header banner needs looking at and maybe some more eye catching graphics down the page to promote the parts you want people to read.

I'm a...
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