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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 31st March 2012, 09:50 PM
Replies: 334
Views: 53,564
Posted By maggie2
Re: Is anybody actually making money with Kindle books?

I sell one for $0.99 and the others for $2.99. Did you do any research on your books to find out if books in those categories actually sell? While it is really important to write about things that...
Forum: Copywriting 24th February 2012, 06:47 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 753
Posted By peptone
Re: Awesome info on Conversion Optimization

Tests have shown that on banners you usually get a bigger CTR if you have a picture of a person in the banner and you usually get a higher CTR with a picture of a woman rather than a picture of a man.
Forum: Copywriting 23rd February 2012, 04:07 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 753
Posted By ewenmack
Re: Awesome info on Conversion Optimization

The late Gary Halbert bought it to the attention of the marketing world.

His fiance was a model.

Gary tested 3 looks...
sultry
nice girl, no smile
nice girl, smile

It was the last one...
Forum: Copywriting 23rd February 2012, 03:56 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 753
Posted By sashagilberg
Re: Awesome info on Conversion Optimization

Shoemoney did some extensive testing and found that cute girls in Facebook ads performed the best too (in almost every market). FaceBook Advertising – Soup To Nuts Guide - Shoemoney - Skills To Pay...
Forum: Copywriting 12th February 2012, 04:47 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 848
Posted By RickDuris
Rick Duris' Copywriting Research Using Twitter

Some copywriters struggle finding the relevant up-to-date research they need for their copywriting projects. They'll resort to dated swipe files for ideas.

Try using Twitter and hashtags for your...
Forum: Copywriting 9th February 2012, 07:49 AM
Replies: 34
Views: 1,138
Posted By The Copy Nazi
Re: Please, Critique My Page :)

Dietary supplement - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dietary_supplement)

Under "The Formula" on Marshall Supplements site they say -
There's also a breakdown of...
Forum: Copywriting 9th February 2012, 06:42 AM
Replies: 34
Views: 1,138
Posted By Mark Andrews
Re: Please, Critique My Page :)

David, you are indeed a very good copywriter,
one of the best here in fact however...

I just find it highly unusual providing a critique
for this particular product and almost no others ...
Forum: Copywriting 8th February 2012, 04:55 PM
Replies: 34
Views: 1,138
Posted By Mark Andrews
Re: Please, Critique My Page :)

Call me daft Nick but I don't for a split second believe everything I read or see on the Internet.

I've checked at Companies House for this 'company', no mention of them there in the slightest....
Forum: Copywriting 8th February 2012, 03:55 PM
Replies: 34
Views: 1,138
Posted By The Copy Nazi
Re: Please, Critique My Page :)

"Snake-Oil pure and simple. You're headed for trouble" was my original comment. But looking further into it, it's probably OK. See my comments further down.
Forum: Copywriting 8th February 2012, 03:09 PM
Replies: 34
Views: 1,138
Posted By David Raybould
Re: Please, Critique My Page :)

R-

First up, congrats. You've got version 1.0
up and running. May not be doing so well
now, but concentrate on the fact that
everything from here should be an increase
or improvement on...
Forum: Copywriting 8th February 2012, 05:56 AM
Replies: 34
Views: 1,138
Posted By Mark Andrews
Re: Please, Critique My Page :)

Well, I'm certainly not about to give you any copywriting or marketing advice.

Reason?

Question...

Do you have a license to sell these in the UK?

Does your local trading standards...
Forum: Copywriting 1st February 2012, 05:49 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,280
Posted By joe golfer
How the P90X Guys Got Rich

Paul Gram posted on the main forum how the p90X company made all their dough. The guys behind it are direct marketers who partnered with a personal trainer. I'll just link to Paul's post and you can...
Forum: Copywriting 31st January 2012, 02:23 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 753
Posted By Mark Andrews
Re: Awesome info on Conversion Optimization

Hot smiling women? You might enjoy this site run by another member here and a fellow copywriter...

Welcome to EnchantedNLP.com (http://archive.enchantednlp.com/)

Believe it or not this guy can...
Forum: Copywriting 12th January 2012, 06:11 AM
Replies: 27
Views: 669
Posted By helisell
Re: Take 2 : Please Critique My Landing Page

As 'thehorizon' said, people are searching for something that is an 'immediate' problem/solution so some wishy washy claim about some 'possible future risk of cancer' will simply bomb.

I reckon...
Forum: Copywriting 12th January 2012, 01:58 AM
Replies: 27
Views: 669
Posted By thehorizon
Re: Take 2 : Please Critique My Landing Page

I think you can improve on the hook more. You see, people are motivated by fear in the present, not so much of fear in the future. That's the reason why sales for prevention lose significantly to...
Forum: Copywriting 11th January 2012, 05:11 PM
Replies: 27
Views: 669
Posted By helisell
Re: Take 2 : Please Critique My Landing Page

That headline is still miles off.

As a visitor am I going to be shown how to reduce my risk of cancer as you say in the headline...

I doubt that many people are looking for this as a...
Forum: Copywriting 11th January 2012, 12:16 PM
Replies: 27
Views: 669
Posted By Centurian
Re: Take 2 : Please Critique My Landing Page

I really like the new sales page layout! Much more interesting.

The news clips are VERY powerful third party credibility for your message! But...

Get rid of the stupid "TV remote clicking"...
Forum: Copywriting 11th January 2012, 11:51 AM
Replies: 27
Views: 669
Posted By Centurian
Re: Take 2 : Please Critique My Landing Page

Agreed.

I'd do a powerpoint video showing the sales page text as you talk through the copy. It's just not engaging enough.

If you really want to increase conversion, consider finding a graphics...
Forum: Copywriting 11th January 2012, 08:20 AM
Replies: 27
Views: 669
Posted By Brendanm
Re: Take 2 : Please Critique My Landing Page

Looks good though as David said use your authority in a different way.
Forum: Copywriting 10th January 2012, 06:17 PM
Replies: 27
Views: 669
Posted By David Franklin
Re: Take 2 : Please Critique My Landing Page

I agree with Rick, you need to use your authority as a doctor in a much bigger way. Also, your headline is about prevention. People will do a lot more to cure an ailment or problem in their life than...
Forum: Copywriting 10th January 2012, 02:56 PM
Replies: 27
Views: 669
Posted By Azarna
Re: Take 2 : Please Critique My Landing Page

"Dear Friends,
You don’t know me, I realize…"

Friends are people who DO know you.

Plus referring to people who don't know you as 'friends' is always a bit annoying.
Forum: Copywriting 10th January 2012, 02:06 PM
Replies: 27
Views: 669
Posted By helisell
Re: Take 2 : Please Critique My Landing Page

The headline isn't right (I'll come back to it) but it seems to be unrelated to the opening copy.

Will I learn about cancer risks or not feeling sluggish. I know where you are going with it but I...
Forum: Copywriting 10th January 2012, 02:39 AM
Replies: 27
Views: 669
Posted By RickDuris
Re: Take 2 : Please Critique My Landing Page

1. As you are probably well aware, you have a lot of competition. You need to differentiate your product much more. It could use a "hook."

One thing that might work, is enhancing your authority...
Forum: Copywriting 9th January 2012, 09:52 PM
Replies: 27
Views: 669
Posted By adammaxum
Re: Take 2 : Please Critique My Landing Page

I think it looks good.

Comments..
- the video took a little longer then I'd prefer to load.
- Some of the rotating images cut off the green check marks if you care
- I'm still not sure...
Forum: Copywriting 12th December 2011, 03:57 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 881
Posted By bankableResults
Arrow Re: Please Critique My Landing Page

Well, there are some good points on your landing page. For example:

You have a picture of the product, which is great. You have 2 free bonuses... and it also says "limited time offer". PLUS you...
Forum: Copywriting 11th December 2011, 08:34 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 881
Posted By bankableResults
Arrow Re: Please Critique My Landing Page

First of, Im just coriuos... who is your target market?

Second, you make a very common mistake (even the "pros" do it every now and then) in your headline. And it does not pass the "Yehe Right"...
Forum: Copywriting 10th December 2011, 04:00 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 881
Posted By NickN
Re: Please Critique My Landing Page

The OP doesn't have enough posts to post links.

http://www.healthenclave.com/publications/detoxify_ (http://http://www.healthenclave.com/publications/detoxify_)

There ya go.
Forum: Copywriting 10th December 2011, 01:33 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 881
Posted By Azarna
Re: Please Critique My Landing Page

The article reads oddly and has a lot of claims with no indication of where the 'facts' came from.
Forum: Copywriting 10th December 2011, 11:51 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 881
Posted By Andrew Gould
Re: Please Critique My Landing Page

Here's a few quick thoughts:

Your headline's a bit boring, it doesn't stand out, and "for cancer" wants to be "from cancer".

Have you got permission to use the TV clips at the start of your...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 4th November 2011, 08:17 AM
Replies: 334
Views: 53,564
Posted By JamieSEO
Re: Is anybody actually making money with Kindle books?

Yes



Wrong question - you need to be focusing on ROI (money and time)

Here are some tips on making profit from Kindle:

1 - Don't bother re-labeling and selling PLR eBooks - most are...
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