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Forum: Copywriting 23rd March 2012, 12:40 PM
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Posted By KimboJim
Re: Promised I wouldn't do this, but can I get a critique?

I like that headline. I might even use it if I can't think of a better one.
Forum: Copywriting 23rd March 2012, 04:39 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 761
Posted By KimboJim
Re: Promised I wouldn't do this, but can I get a critique?

A lot of great suggestions here, and I am definitely going to put them into practice. I'm happy some people touched on the design, because I am terrible with HTML/CSS.

I know the languages, but...
Forum: Copywriting 21st March 2012, 10:00 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 761
Posted By KimboJim
Re: Promised I wouldn't do this, but can I get a critique?

That was sarcasm at the beginning, not me being arrogant. If you aren't going to critique the content then don't bother posting.
Forum: Copywriting 21st March 2012, 09:49 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 761
Posted By KimboJim
Promised I wouldn't do this, but can I get a critique?

I promised myself I wouldn't do this. I said, "no way, I'm a professional writer and I won't bother others with my copy."

But, it sat there, asking to be critiqued. I pleaded and begged, but it...
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