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Forum: Copywriting 22nd March 2012, 07:57 AM
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Re: Promised I wouldn't do this, but can I get a critique?

I don't like your headline, because it has too many mental images. First my wallet's busting... then my bank account's fattening... then my account's gasping for air... all in a span of 15 words.
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