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Forum: Copywriting 23rd March 2012, 12:49 PM
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Posted By knish
Re: Promised I wouldn't do this, but can I get a critique?

You need to work on the headline. The rest of your copy is good. Certainly clear, concise and straight to the point. The basic layout and colour are nice. Good look!
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