Forum: Copywriting 
26th August 2011, 03:47 PM
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Forum: Copywriting
15th August 2011, 08:44 PM
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Replies: 35
Views: 1,734  Re: The Death of Copywriting Part Three
It doesn't really matter how many copywriters are out there Dave. There's plenty enough work to go around.
I think a lot of people in the IM niche must be going around with blinkers on their...
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Forum: Copywriting
15th August 2011, 12:55 PM
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Replies: 11
Views: 1,148 Re: Copywriting Is Alive -- Part 1
What a refreshing topic change :)
I totally agree that copywriting isn't dead - but far from it alive and kicking.
And like I mentioned in another post, copywriting is in a constant state of...
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Forum: Copywriting
15th August 2011, 12:30 PM
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Replies: 11
Views: 1,148 Copywriting Is Alive -- Part 1
Some talk lately about the death of copywriting.
I say baloney.
It’s alive and well, and now more than ever, good copywriters are needed.
I’m sitting here typing this at my $6500.00 desk,...
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Forum: Copywriting
12th August 2011, 04:38 AM
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Replies: 40
Views: 1,727 Re: Do I need to fire this copywriter?
Val,
I actually was drawn in by the story of the Asian gentleman who became the "mentor." However, this theme got lost later and I did not see any attempt to establish credibility by...
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Forum: Copywriting
9th August 2011, 08:34 PM
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Replies: 18
Views: 1,589 |
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Forum: Copywriting
9th August 2011, 12:20 PM
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Replies: 50
Views: 2,772 Re: Critique My "Hypnotic" Sales Letter
Harlan harshly criticized your copy, because he was embarrassed that your copy did not look like something he would have written himself...
The ass kissers jumped on board when Harlan criticized...
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Forum: Copywriting
9th August 2011, 11:56 AM
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Replies: 50
Views: 2,772 Re: Critique My "Hypnotic" Sales Letter
Harlan,
typical dorkish behavior.
This fellow looks up to you so you rip him apart?
You have a very questionable reputation to begin with so you would think it is really something when someone...
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Forum: Copywriting
9th August 2011, 11:49 AM
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Replies: 68
Views: 4,179 Re: Copywriting Is Dead Part One
Hmm, if copywriting is dead, I wonder why I constantly have old clients coming back requesting additional work. Three just this week, in fact, when the media are talking about nothing other than...
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Forum: Copywriting
9th August 2011, 11:35 AM
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Replies: 68
Views: 4,179 Re: Copywriting Is Dead Part One
Copywriting is the same as it's always been.
What's changed is all the internet "get rich quick" copywriters are feeling the pinch of the internet correcting itself - the days of writing some...
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Forum: Copywriting
9th August 2011, 10:02 AM
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Replies: 3
Views: 1,086 Free NLP copywriting presentations
I have no financial or other inside interest in this, am just passing along info...
Learning Strategies has announced an "NLP Mindfest" that includes two relevant presentations for folks here,...
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Forum: Copywriting
9th August 2011, 06:34 AM
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Replies: 3
Views: 713 Whoppers - Seven of the Biggest Beasts of All Time
"Seven of the Biggest Beasts of All Time" the original headline read. I clicked on it thinking I might see Dolly Parton or Sabrina or the latest Penthouse Pet or some other endangered species.
Did...
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Forum: Copywriting
8th August 2011, 07:01 PM
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Replies: 50
Views: 2,772 Re: Critique My "Hypnotic" Sales Letter
I would not recommend you spend any money to drive traffic to either page.
Both versions need a lot of work before they are ready.
(I will focus my critiques on the 2nd version)
There is one...
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Forum: Copywriting
8th August 2011, 02:33 PM
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Replies: 11
Views: 798 Want to write good copy?
Here's an excellent article written by Clayton Makepeace. (If you don't know who he is, Clayton is one of the top guys in the game.)
It includes "14 ... rules for creating winning direct response...
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Forum: Copywriting
8th August 2011, 07:56 AM
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Replies: 50
Views: 2,772 |
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Forum: Copywriting
7th August 2011, 08:29 PM
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Replies: 50
Views: 2,772 Re: Critique My "Hypnotic" Sales Letter
Since you are targeting the unsuspecting, then it would be great
if you can come up with statistics and more horror stories
to rattle their cage.
It needs to be done because they don't know...
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Forum: Copywriting
7th August 2011, 03:41 AM
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Replies: 50
Views: 2,772 Re: Critique My "Hypnotic" Sales Letter
Hi Matt,
I don't know who your are targeting, the person who has been already ripped off,
or the person who has no idea he's at risk.
Letter doesn't tell me.
Will need a different approach...
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Forum: Copywriting
7th August 2011, 12:39 AM
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Replies: 50
Views: 2,772 Re: Critique My "Hypnotic" Sales Letter
Ross nailed it, as always... but I'm gonna add something further...
Why you?
What makes you someone with advice I should follow - or even listen to?
What's your story? What, if anything,...
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Forum: Copywriting
5th August 2011, 11:59 PM
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Replies: 50
Views: 2,772 Re: Critique My "Hypnotic" Sales Letter
There's a spot where you repeat "Everything you need to know" 5 times in a row without a break. That ruined the flow for me and interjected a pause strong enough have me switch back to this tab to...
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Forum: Copywriting
5th August 2011, 11:37 PM
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Replies: 50
Views: 2,772 Re: Critique My "Hypnotic" Sales Letter
Matt, you've got some awesome chops!
The only thing I want to nitpick is that there's no specificity in the headline... yes, you say what you're offer is going to do, but I think you could...
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Forum: Copywriting
5th August 2011, 04:35 PM
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Replies: 50
Views: 2,772 Re: Critique My "Hypnotic" Sales Letter
Matt,
A couple things.
The pre-head "5 Years In The Making" is not adequately resolved in the copy. The reader is left wondering, what happened during those 5 years? At least make a reference...
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Forum: Copywriting
5th August 2011, 04:12 PM
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Replies: 50
Views: 2,772 Re: Critique My "Hypnotic" Sales Letter
Matt,
Good effort.
Death by Digital Products isn't a good title. Not benefit or solution orientated at first glance. Just very negative.
You might be burying the lead here a bit. That...
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Forum: Copywriting
5th August 2011, 03:44 PM
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Replies: 50
Views: 2,772 Re: Critique My "Hypnotic" Sales Letter
Your sales letter is a good start.
You need a clear call to action at the end of your sales letter. I would even have one or two order buttons from half way down the sales letter to the...
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Forum: Copywriting
5th August 2011, 03:42 PM
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Replies: 50
Views: 2,772 Re: Critique My "Hypnotic" Sales Letter
You're more than welcome, not bad since I'm running a high temperture, got the shivers, sneezing non-stop, coughing my guts up and have the flu.
I'm feeling bloody terrible! :D
Thank you ever...
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Forum: Copywriting
5th August 2011, 03:27 PM
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Replies: 50
Views: 2,772 Re: Critique My "Hypnotic" Sales Letter
I thought you could labor the pain felt slightly more, really drill it home the worst case scenario of losing everything. Agitate it massively...
"Imagine the look in your spouses face, the shock,...
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Forum: Copywriting
27th July 2011, 03:40 AM
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Replies: 13
Views: 1,365 Why People Really Buy ... Art
I know we've had several threads on this topic, but here is a post about the real reasons people buy art that truly made me stop and think:
Why People Buy Art...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
7th May 2011, 08:19 PM
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Replies: 50
Views: 1,711 |
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
18th April 2011, 01:06 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 523 Re: writing articles
Automatic Writing (http://paranormal.about.com/cs/automaticwriting/ht/auto_writing.htm)
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
18th April 2011, 12:34 PM
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Replies: 66
Views: 2,067 Re: Intelligence of an internet marketer.
I can think of several (unnamed) examples to prove income and intelligence or education are not necessarily correlated. In fact, intelligence as it's usually defined often hinders business success.
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
18th April 2011, 02:33 AM
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Replies: 43
Views: 2,781 Re: 2 important reason why NOT to steal content
Thanks Harjos,
I'll go ahead and clone the sites in your signature and steal, sorry, share your business with you.
Let me know when you post some new content on your sites too. I'll come along...
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Forum: Copywriting
8th April 2011, 04:24 PM
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Replies: 27
Views: 1,291 |
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Forum: Copywriting
8th April 2011, 02:22 PM
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Replies: 27
Views: 1,291 |
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
6th April 2011, 12:15 PM
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Replies: 48
Views: 4,945 New Clickbank Regs!
Hey, look at the new CB regs! :)
We wanted to share some of the most important guidelines to keep in mind when creating your Pitch Page, upsells and other sales material. To ensure that ClickBank...
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Forum: Articles
9th November 2010, 07:35 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 103,244 |
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Forum: Copywriting
3rd August 2010, 07:25 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 769 Re: The Great Wombat Debate
It depends on the market. For IM you can get away with a lot. For copywriting dealing with professions like the law, medicine, education, investing, etc., you're going to have to get most of it right...
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Forum: Copywriting
2nd August 2010, 03:08 PM
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Replies: 29
Views: 1,642 |
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Forum: Copywriting
2nd August 2010, 10:24 AM
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Replies: 20
Views: 1,308 Re: Why make things complicated?
Hi Howard,
You gotta be kidding me.
Easy? As in:Simple, plain, obvious, readily comprehensible or learnable, effortless, clear, smooth sailing, easy as pie, easy or as simple as..., piece...
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Forum: Copywriting
2nd August 2010, 09:26 AM
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Replies: 13
Views: 1,713 |
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Forum: Copywriting
29th July 2010, 05:28 PM
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Replies: 10
Views: 702 Re: "average time on site" what attributes?
This is also how Google treats anyone whose time on the site can't be calculated, for whatever reason. For example, if they click through to your site, then type another URL in their browser - Google...
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