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Forum: Warriors For Hire 18th December 2014, 05:19 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,924
Posted By MaksP
Re: [WSO Sales Pages] Not your Arm or Leg! :: Fast Turnaround Time

Hello I am looking for a muscle building sales page and i sent you a message :)
Forum: Copywriting 26th November 2014, 04:19 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,577
Posted By MaksP
Re: Should I set up a squeeze page instead?

That is my concern because all my traffic comes from my YT vids in which I show people exercises for jumping higher.

For the past 8 months the conversion rate has always been 1.3-2%
Sometimes...
Forum: Copywriting 26th November 2014, 03:06 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,577
Posted By MaksP
Should I set up a squeeze page instead?

Hello,

I have gotten awesome advice on here before and would love some more...

So all my traffic comes from my YouTube videos.

Should I set up a squeeze page based on your experiences and...
Forum: Conversion Rate Optimization 14th August 2014, 02:07 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,471
Posted By MaksP
Re: How Can I Improve My Site?

Thank you I am in the process of repackaging my product. For now I increased my price and will add instructional videos too.
Forum: Conversion Rate Optimization 11th August 2014, 08:53 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,109
Posted By MaksP
Increasing price to $37 vs. $39?

Hello my fellow warriors,

I am going to increase the price of my product.

I was thinking of increasing it to $37 but have read a couple threads on here that say to go with $39.

Which would...
Forum: Conversion Rate Optimization 21st July 2014, 01:06 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,471
Posted By MaksP
Re: How Can I Improve My Site?

Thank you for your advice.

I agree that I feel that I low ball my self with such a low price.

Should I start off by adding videos with exercise descriptions and market it as DVD + Ebook program...
Forum: Conversion Rate Optimization 20th July 2014, 02:45 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,471
Posted By MaksP
How Can I Improve My Site?

Hello I have a program that is the best in the world.

What can I do to improve my conversion?

Any advice is appreciated.

Thank you in advance.
Forum: Copywriting 20th July 2014, 02:35 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 957
Posted By MaksP
Re: Is LESS really MORE?

Thank you I appreciate it.

And thank you to everyone for your replies.
Forum: Copywriting 14th July 2014, 12:44 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 957
Posted By MaksP
Is LESS really MORE?

Hello my fellow warriors,

I just wanted to start of by saying thank you to everyone who takes time to look at this thread.

I have a YT channel with 14k subscribers and do a lot of workout...
Forum: Copywriting 3rd May 2014, 07:46 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,220
Posted By MaksP
Re: Which Sales Video Do You Like Better?

Thank you for the amazing reposnses I really appreciated guys.

What if i redo my video in the same format but use myself being an undersized post player with bad jumping genetics.

Will that...
Forum: Copywriting 6th April 2014, 01:48 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,220
Posted By MaksP
Re: Which Sales Video Do You Like Better?

Thank you for your advice. I really appreciate it.

I am thinking of starting off the video on my sales page by getting the viewer pumped up and asking them if they want to jump high.

Than...
Forum: Copywriting 6th April 2014, 01:36 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,220
Posted By MaksP
Re: Which Sales Video Do You Like Better?

Ok thanks I edited the numerous amount to numerous trial and error for now.

I will redo the video again on Monday and be more specific.
Forum: Copywriting 5th April 2014, 02:18 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,220
Posted By MaksP
Re: Which Sales Video Do You Like Better?

Wow. Thank you very much for your resposne. You made me open up my eyes as to what I need to change.

Would you think it would be better to change the intro to:

Did you know?

A pro...
Forum: Copywriting 3rd April 2014, 01:20 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,220
Posted By MaksP
Re: Which Sales Video Do You Like Better?

So should I use maybe 3 things that are holding someone back from jumping high to start the video then lead into what I have now?

What about just using a video with motivational music and only...
Forum: Copywriting 3rd April 2014, 05:07 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,220
Posted By MaksP
Which Sales Video Do You Like Better?

Hello warriors once again.

First the advice I get here is AMAZING and i take everything into deep consideration and testing.

Here is my current page with a new video: The Vertical Jump Truth...
Forum: Copywriting 16th March 2014, 11:47 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,066
Posted By MaksP
Re: Which Sales Page Do You Like Better?

Thank you for your reply.

I post here because I have gotten AMAZING feedback and always want to get better.

My copy is doing a lot better than expected and many probably will find the...
Forum: Copywriting 14th March 2014, 04:55 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,066
Posted By MaksP
Re: Which Sales Page Do You Like Better?

Thank you for your comment :)
Forum: Copywriting 14th March 2014, 12:32 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,066
Posted By MaksP
Re: Which Sales Page Do You Like Better?

Thanks for watching my youtube videos.
I appreciate you having the time to check out my channel.

Very good points.

So I will work on my title, make it flow better and add more emotional aspect...
Forum: Copywriting 14th March 2014, 12:40 AM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,066
Posted By MaksP
Re: Which Sales Page Do You Like Better?

Thank you.

Where would you advice to add more testimonials?

In which section?

I have myself going from nothing to dunking at the 1:18 mark of the video.

Would you advice making the video...
Forum: Copywriting 14th March 2014, 12:36 AM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,066
Posted By MaksP
Re: Which Sales Page Do You Like Better?

Thank you.

I will work on the title again and try to make it flow better.

So add more testimonials as mentioned previously.

But in which spot would you advise to add testimonials?
Forum: Copywriting 14th March 2014, 12:35 AM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,066
Posted By MaksP
Re: Which Sales Page Do You Like Better?

No need to apologize I appreciate the constructive criticism :)

I am thinking of adding more proof like facebook messages/youtube comments and maybe cell phone emails.

But where do you think I...
Forum: Copywriting 13th March 2014, 10:12 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,066
Posted By MaksP
Which Sales Page Do You Like Better?

Hey whats up fellow warriors.

I have just gotten into this forum 6 months ago and learned a lot.

So before I start I just want to say thank you.

Thank you in advance.
Forum: Copywriting 25th February 2014, 01:53 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,313
Posted By MaksP
Re: Would this hurt or increase conversions?

Ok thanks I appreciate it.

Have you seen increase in conversion by doing this or heard about an increase?

Would it be better if I added "Limited Copies Available"
Forum: Copywriting 24th February 2014, 03:24 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,313
Posted By MaksP
Would this hurt or increase conversions?

Hello fellow warriors :)

I would like to know if you think having the picture of the product and a small header in the left corner of the PayPal check out window would hurt or increase conversions...
Forum: Copywriting 16th December 2013, 07:16 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,761
Posted By MaksP
Re: Go From Nothing To Dunking In 12 Weeks!

Thank you very much I really appreciate it.

I feel that my biggest accomplishment is that everyone who buys this program always sees an increase in their jumping ability.

Honestly 32 years old...
Forum: Copywriting 15th December 2013, 02:43 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,761
Posted By MaksP
Re: Go From Nothing To Dunking In 12 Weeks!

Thanks you very much for the feedback on the title.

Previously I was told that hitting them with a feature of the program right away would help.

What is your opinion on this title:

Here's...
Forum: Copywriting 12th December 2013, 03:42 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,761
Posted By MaksP
Re: Go From Nothing To Dunking In 12 Weeks!

Wow, thank you for your constructive response :)

So you are saying that I should send them to an email squeeze page and get their emails.

Then the reader gets the free offer in his email which...
Forum: Copywriting 12th December 2013, 01:39 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,761
Posted By MaksP
Go From Nothing To Dunking In 12 Weeks!

Hello my fellow Warriors and happy holidays!

I have received some amazing advice on here and would like to know what you guys think of my current sales page.

In the past month I changed the...
Forum: Copywriting 3rd November 2013, 06:05 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 894
Posted By MaksP
Re: Is My Sales Page Adwords Ready?

Yea these are the ads that I see on google with a products like mine.

I believe my page has more tabs compared to theirs.

What do you think?

NaturalLeap.com | (http://naturalleap.com/)
...
Forum: Copywriting 3rd November 2013, 02:56 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 894
Posted By MaksP
Re: Is My Sales Page Adwords Ready?

Thank you very much for the calculator it is awesome!

My conversion rate is 1% of my utube videos. So if I spend $100 for 850 clicks than my conversion rate would need to be .6 at the lowest for...
Forum: Copywriting 3rd November 2013, 02:52 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 894
Posted By MaksP
Re: Is My Sales Page Adwords Ready?

Thanks for the reply I appreciate it.

I have a phone call meeting with a Google rep and he should tell me if it is clear. I thought Google was only against squeeze pages? And as long as I got my...
Forum: Copywriting 3rd November 2013, 05:39 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 894
Posted By MaksP
Is My Sales Page Adwords Ready?

Hello my fellow warriors.
Firstly I just want to thank you for the awesome advice you give on here.
It is amazing how much an individual could learn by reading up on this forum.

So I made a...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 26th October 2013, 03:19 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 550
Posted By MaksP
Re: Should I build a list if I sell 1 product?

Thank you I appreciate all the support :)
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 23rd October 2013, 02:10 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 550
Posted By MaksP
Should I build a list if I sell 1 product?

Hello my fellow Warriors.

I rebuilt my website last month and have seen some progress.
All of my traffic comes from my Youtube videos.
My conversion rate currently is about 1% and I get around...
Forum: Copywriting 22nd October 2013, 06:33 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 568
Posted By MaksP
Should I make a squeeze page if I only have one product?

Hello my fellow Warriors.

I rebuilt my website last month and have seen some progress.
All of my traffic comes from my Youtube videos.
My conversion rate currently is about 1% and I get around...
Forum: Copywriting 17th October 2013, 01:04 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,050
Posted By MaksP
Re: Dunk Like A Boss in 12 Weeks! Please critique my sales page.

Thanks and I would appreciate it if you gave me wording examples. Do you think that changing the title and getting rid of vertical jump truth on the top will also help?
Forum: Copywriting 17th October 2013, 12:54 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,050
Posted By MaksP
Re: Dunk Like A Boss in 12 Weeks! Please critique my sales page.

Im thinking of changing it from nothing to dunking or just saying here's how you can increase your vertical instantly.

Do you think $27 sounds better?
Forum: Copywriting 17th October 2013, 12:05 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,050
Posted By MaksP
Re: Dunk Like A Boss in 12 Weeks! Please critique my sales page.

I appreciate your reply. So where would I place the first 500 get it for that price? Instead of crossing out the 69 just put the first 500 people get it for this price. The offer will raise!

Most...
Forum: Copywriting 17th October 2013, 11:58 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,050
Posted By MaksP
Re: Dunk Like A Boss in 12 Weeks! Please critique my sales page.

Why do you think I should remove that?

What if I get rid of Vertical Jump w and change the title to something simple like Here's how you can increase your vertical instantly?
Forum: Copywriting 17th October 2013, 11:54 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,050
Posted By MaksP
Re: Dunk Like A Boss in 12 Weeks! Please critique my sales page.

What makes you say that?

Would cutting out the intro and build hurt me? I see that is where I show video results of me dunking. So maybe I should make a smaller attention grabber and skip how I...
Forum: Copywriting 17th October 2013, 12:08 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,050
Posted By MaksP
Re: Dunk Like A Boss in 12 Weeks! Please critique my sales page.

Wow thank you all for the amazing replies.

I was actually thinking of changing the titile to just "Here's How You Can Increase Your Vertical Jump Instantly" because I had 1-2 more sales. However,...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 15th October 2013, 11:34 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 333
Posted By MaksP
How many add to cart buttons should a sales page have?

Hello I would like to know how many add to cart buttons do you guys think a sales page should have?

Here is my sales page and do you think it's too many?

The Vertical Jump Truth - Dunk in 12...
Forum: Copywriting 15th October 2013, 05:48 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,050
Posted By MaksP
Re: Dunk Like A Boss in 12 Weeks! Please critique my sales page.

Thank you for your advice. Could you please v tell me where you saw the typos? So should I get rid of a few add to cart buttons? Should I make the page shorter? What parts of the page do you think I...
Forum: Copywriting 15th October 2013, 05:09 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,050
Posted By MaksP
Dunk Like A Boss in 12 Weeks! Please critique my sales page.

Hello my fellow warriors. Firstly I just wanted to say thank you for the awesome advice that I get on here.

I recently did a lot of changes to my sales page.

Could you tell me what you think?
...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 10th October 2013, 11:05 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 562
Posted By MaksP
Re: Should I raise the price?

Thanks bro and yea I'm contemplating raising it since my competition has prices from $27 to $67 and every person that bought it has been able to dunk within the first 8 weeks.

There's no magic...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 10th October 2013, 11:01 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 562
Posted By MaksP
Re: Should I raise the price?

Hahah yes bro that's one of my most popular videos over 100k views right behind my dunk progress video almost 150k views.

I will look into maybe doing small adjustments.

The program itself...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 8th October 2013, 06:53 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 562
Posted By MaksP
Re: Should I raise the price?

So you would raise it to $27 ?
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 8th October 2013, 06:38 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 562
Posted By MaksP
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 8th October 2013, 06:25 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 562
Posted By MaksP
Should I raise the price?

First I wanted to say thank for awesome feedback that I always get here.

All my traffic comes from my Youtube videos and I get about 1,300 visitors per month.

The Vertical Jump Truth - Dunk in...
Forum: Copywriting 3rd October 2013, 02:39 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,007
Posted By MaksP
Re: Get Abs with 2 Dumbbells! Please Critique My Sales Page.

Thank you very much Tim.

I am very glad that you took the time to reply.

You made me realize just how much more work I have to do.

Should I add a header that says "Benefits of INSANE HOME...
Forum: Copywriting 2nd October 2013, 11:34 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,007
Posted By MaksP
Get Abs with 2 Dumbbells! Please Critique My Sales Page.

Hello fellow warriors.

I would like to say thank you very much because I received really good advise in my previous thread.

I took notes on all of your replies.

I have edited my sales page...
Forum: Copywriting 25th September 2013, 04:20 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,626
Posted By MaksP
Re: ANYONE Can Dunk A Basketball! Please critique my sales page

Good catch I accidentally uploaded the rough draft and re-uploaded it now.

Thanks for the feedback and I thought I made the headline better?
Forum: Copywriting 25th September 2013, 03:05 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,626
Posted By MaksP
Re: ANYONE Can Dunk A Basketball! Please critique my sales page

UPDATE!

Thank you so much for all of your feedback I appreciate it.

What do you guys think of my new header?
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 22nd September 2013, 09:46 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 905
Posted By MaksP
Should I build a squeeze page or stick to my sales page?

Hello my fellow warriors.

I would really appreciate your valuable advice.

I am selling a vertical jump training program.

All of my traffic comes from YouTube videos.

In your opinion, will...
Forum: Copywriting 19th September 2013, 09:16 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,626
Posted By MaksP
Re: ANYONE Can Dunk A Basketball! Please critique my sales page

Hey guys thank you very much for each one of your responses. It really helped me a lot and I appreciate it. Here are notes of things I could improve that I gathered from the thread.

1. Change...
Forum: Copywriting 13th September 2013, 05:53 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,626
Posted By MaksP
ANYONE Can Dunk A Basketball! Please critique my sales page

Hello my fellow warriors.

Could you please critique my vertical jump training sales page.

All of my traffic is from my youtube channel.

I get around 1.5k visitors per month and just changed...
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