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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 27th December 2010, 10:17 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,216
Posted By impact-productions
Re: Affiliate Marketing vs Product Owner

My opinion - you should do both.

However, you need some way to get people onto your list first - so that you can sell them affiliate products. The best way to do that is to have your own product...
Forum: Copywriting 26th December 2010, 11:57 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 623
Posted By ARSuarez
Re: Thanks To The Copywriters In This Forum

If your friends won't give you video testimonials, then just ask for written ones and get their permission to polish them up without changing the meaning. Maybe just expanding on the story.
...
Forum: Copywriting 26th December 2010, 10:17 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 623
Posted By ewenmack
Re: Thanks To The Copywriters In This Forum

Hi Lennox,

It isn't doing your reputation here any good by adding another
fake testimonial when it was mentioned last round.

All the best,
Ewen

kristylynn: I will make a Short Video...
Forum: Copywriting 26th December 2010, 12:33 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 851
Re: 2 Quick & Easy Steps To Writing Headlines

Interesting…

For countless years I tended to write “positive” headlines.

I think I originally learnt it from Caples (Tested Advertising Methods).

But living in the UK – people tend to be...
Forum: Copywriting 24th December 2010, 10:26 AM
Replies: 27
Views: 1,046
Posted By Alex Cohen
Space Ads

For those of you new to copywriting, I recommend (with one caveat) that you study successful space ads. Specifically, space ads that ran in magazines years ago.

As you read them, pick out the...
Forum: Copywriting 23rd December 2010, 11:10 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 3,220
Posted By indexphp
Re: Your Favorite Copywriter...and Maria Veloso's Copywriting

John Caples

http://g-ecx.images-amazon.com/images/G/01/ciu/61/ac/6cc292c008a01183e7d19010.L._SL500_AA300_.jpg
Forum: Copywriting 23rd December 2010, 08:37 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 3,220
Posted By Daniel Scott
Re: Your Favorite Copywriter...and Maria Veloso's Copywriting

I read Maria's book "Web Copy That Sells"... didn't think much of it.

Kevin Rogers has written some brilliant seduction letters, but he charges a lot. Not sure who the 'best" is though... but my...
Forum: Copywriting 21st December 2010, 10:32 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 623
Posted By Collette
Re: Thanks To The Copywriters In This Forum

Lennox - Being an entrepreneur (even on the Internet) can be quite discourgaging at times.

And if you want to be in business for yourself you HAVE to learn to take, and deal with, information...
Forum: Copywriting 21st December 2010, 08:53 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 623
Posted By Nathan Alexander
Re: Thanks To The Copywriters In This Forum

If you're like me, your ego is clear and present when showing your copy. But uh,…that's dangerous. (But don't feel bad about it. It's good to have pride in something you've worked hard on.)

When...
Forum: Copywriting 21st December 2010, 03:32 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 623
Posted By Ross James
Re: Thanks To The Copywriters In This Forum

Well your doing the right thing.. your working on your site. We don't intend to hurt you, that is the byproduct of us reviewing your work. Stop imagining yourself being hurt by it, replace the image...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 21st December 2010, 01:38 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 707
Posted By jasonmorgan
Re: Affiliate, Super Affiliate, Product Owner

in this post you link to your site in the body and twice in your signature, each time using a different anchor text. Pick you're desired keyword and always use it when you link to your site.

Here...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 21st December 2010, 01:33 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 707
Posted By CDarklock
Re: Affiliate, Super Affiliate, Product Owner

You're new.

Of course you don't know what you're doing.

Of course you are going to screw it up.

And all the people "discouraging" you on this forum are really just trying to find all...
Forum: Copywriting 21st December 2010, 01:03 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 496
Posted By Vadym
Re: Signature, Opt-in, Sales Page

Headline. If they don't scroll past the headline because it's poor - you won't have to worry about your other copy.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 21st December 2010, 01:02 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 707
Posted By jasonmorgan
Re: Affiliate, Super Affiliate, Product Owner

a) Why are you linking to your site 3 times with 3 different anchor text. Pick 1 and stick with it if SEO means anything to you.

b) You already gave us the answer, if your copy does suck, fix it....
Forum: Copywriting 21st December 2010, 12:54 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,688
Posted By Bruce Wedding
Re: Mark Joyner's Copywriting

They're testing headlines too. I got a different one on my phone than I did on my home PC.

There are a lot of good lessons in that copy:

They are stealing credibility from people like the Video...
Forum: Copywriting 21st December 2010, 12:42 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,688
Posted By Ross James
Re: Mark Joyner's Copywriting

Awesome swipe, I was just in another thread talking about how I like to read copy with real information. This swipe is a perfect example of that.

Best,

Ross
Forum: Copywriting 21st December 2010, 12:19 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,688
Posted By Bruce Wedding
Re: Mark Joyner's Copywriting

That's an excellent, swipe-worthy, sales letter. But, Joyner doesn't write his own copy. Mike Morgan used to write for him but I'm pretty sure that's not Morgan's copy… he's not that good ;)
Forum: Copywriting 20th December 2010, 08:41 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,262
Posted By Collette
Re: New Clickbank Product Launch => Sending offer to 10,000 subscribers

Look at your meta-tags. Now look at your headline. Now back to your meta-tags. Now back to your headline.

See the major disconnect?

Your meta-tags imply that this is a "how to get and keep...
Forum: Copywriting 20th December 2010, 07:20 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,262
Posted By ewenmack
Re: New Clickbank Product Launch => Sending offer to 10,000 subscribers

Sorry to break the news, but your
product doesn't have a lot of credibility
using a fake testomonial.

YouTube - I will record a realistic video testimonial for your product or website for $5! On...
Forum: Copywriting 20th December 2010, 05:05 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,262
Posted By Nick Brighton
Re: New Clickbank Product Launch => Sending offer to 10,000 subscribers

As above, the headline doesn't make sense... and if you're going to try and sell someone within a few paragraphs and then present the buy now button before I've even been told your name, then you...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 20th December 2010, 12:06 PM
Replies: 69
Views: 3,502
Posted By Mo Faisal
I am in the mood of GIVING...My CHRISTMAS present to warriors!!

With a plethora of ‘help me’, ‘I can’t make money’ threads cropping up in recent days, something was needed to help the struggling warriors ASAP. To put it bluntly, it sucks to be in such position....
Forum: Copywriting 20th December 2010, 07:54 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,262
Posted By sethczerepak
Re: New Clickbank Product Launch => Sending offer to 10,000 subscribers

I agree, the introduction is too ambiguous...not to mention quite a bit on the negative side. It needs to drill down to the end result benefit of buying the product right off the bat...without...
Forum: Copywriting 20th December 2010, 07:08 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,262
Posted By virginiad
Re: New Clickbank Product Launch => Sending offer to 10,000 subscribers

Hi,

As an unmarried woman, I am totally turned off by the negativity of this letter.

You have to give your readers hope that they can find a good man.

You appear to be totally disgusted...
Forum: Copywriting 20th December 2010, 06:44 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,262
Posted By Chris Worner
Re: New Clickbank Product Launch => Sending offer to 10,000 subscribers

Hello, apart from a completely ambiguous headline, and the general messiness of the layout, are you aware that if somebody clicks the buy now button it takes you to that down-sell page where you...
Forum: Copywriting 20th December 2010, 06:41 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,262
Posted By Alexa Smith
Re: New Clickbank Product Launch => Sending offer to 10,000 subscribers

The headline doesn't "speak to me" at all, and gives me no reason to keep reading. No benefit is addressed. I can't tell what you're selling from it, who it's for, or why it should/might interest me....
Forum: Copywriting 20th December 2010, 05:01 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,262
Posted By The Copy Nazi
Re: New Clickbank Product Launch => Sending offer to 10,000 subscribers

hard to know where to start with this one, it's such a mess.

But lets start with the headline. Know what it's function is? It's an Ad for your Ad. Its meant to quickly attract your attention and...
Forum: Copywriting 20th December 2010, 02:45 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,262
Posted By Dave Lianelli
Re: New Clickbank Product Launch => Sending offer to 10,000 subscribers

Another few tips:

drop the amount of stock photo's in your letter. Most are there without clear purpose. They attract my attention, but don't make me want to buy the product.

Same goes for the...
Forum: Copywriting 20th December 2010, 02:19 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,262
Posted By Ross James
Re: New Clickbank Product Launch => Sending offer to 10,000 subscribers

One quick thing I'd change if I was trying to sell this product would be to remove the silly belcher button after the headline.

You haven't done this yet:

tell me who you are
what your even...
Forum: Copywriting 20th December 2010, 01:41 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,262
Posted By 247Copywriter
Re: New Clickbank Product Launch => Sending offer to 10,000 subscribers

Would you mind explaining to me the main headline?

What are you trying to say?

What emotion are you trying to evoke in my mind?

Also, if you would be so kind... why have you introduced the...
Forum: Copywriting 13th December 2010, 10:30 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,134
Posted By iSoftware
Tip Long vs. Short Copy? Clayton Makepeace Finally Answers. Read Here

Clayton Makepeace answers this question!

The next time someone says to me "oh that looks too long no one will read that"...I'll know that

a) they aren't that attuned to the true direct response...
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