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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 30th November 2016, 06:48 PM
Replies: 64
Views: 2,055
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: FIRST SALE!!

Why you feel the need to defend this guy is beyond me.

Go for it, Erick.

You look like a fool.

Bill

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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 30th November 2016, 10:51 AM
Replies: 64
Views: 2,055
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: FIRST SALE!!

So, you're OK with someone out and out lying about their income claims? Pretty disgusting of you.

Obviously you check your ethics in the garbage when you do business.

And you're wrong again. ...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 30th November 2016, 09:57 AM
Replies: 64
Views: 2,055
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: FIRST SALE!!

This place is hilarious.

This guy got totally busted. Lying. He's a liar.

From him saying this is his first sale to his signature where he has screen shots claiming he's making $6,953.32 in...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 29th November 2016, 09:34 AM
Replies: 64
Views: 2,055
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: FIRST SALE!!

This is interesting.

He claims he just found out he made his first sale yesterday.

In this thread on March 19th post #105 he claims he made his first $100 with ClickBank.
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 24th November 2016, 11:18 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 448
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: Self-Taught Marketers are the Best Marketers

I don't know where you've read this.

Most of the top internet marketers will clearly admit that they've borrowed little nuggets of information from the people that have come before them.

Frank...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 22nd November 2016, 10:37 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 280
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: What do you think about Costa Coffee's smart marketing move?

That it never happened.

A simple search detailed they stopped selling their tinned coffee for a short period of time. Nothing about their stores.

So, you're wrong.

Maybe you should do...
Forum: Copywriting 17th November 2016, 05:17 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 344
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: As a Copywriter, would you work on an election campaign?

If you looked at it the right way, it would be no different than any other copy job.

It requires you to persuade, compel and seduce someones emotions to obtain a desired outcome.


Bill

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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 17th November 2016, 09:07 AM
Replies: 51
Views: 877
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: Client using my content. No payment. Should I just let it go?

I think you should take the advice you gave yourself in your post about Nikola Tesla.

And..."put the petal to the metal and get over it."


Bill


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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 16th November 2016, 03:33 PM
Replies: 60
Views: 1,406
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: How are all these people $$$ in IM - it seems a little unbelieable...

Just because you can't fathom it doesn't mean it's not happening.

Some people believe they are million dollar people and some people believe they are 5 figure people.

There's nothing wrong with...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 15th November 2016, 03:31 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 701
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: Million Dollar Marketer Seeking Advice

I don't think he's coming back.

And I think it's safe to safe to say about my Dr. Oz question the answer is yes.

What ever works for ya. Until you get caught.

Bill


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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 8th November 2016, 11:32 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 582
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: Who knows the best web content writting service?

I always find it interesting when someone comes to this forum looking for a service.

And so many people want to send them somewhere else.

Bill

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Forum: Copywriting 4th November 2016, 04:26 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 276
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: Why you should think of yourself as 'sales-detective' rather than just a copywriter?

Does each "copies" come with a tetanus shot.

Sorry dude, had too. Pretty mediocre headline. To be honest. I'm sure you could come up with something better.

Bill

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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 4th November 2016, 09:36 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 437
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: A Blast from the Past... "I liked it so much I bought the Company"

That's a good example of incorporating part of one slogan to make it your own

Nice idea.

Bill

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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 2nd November 2016, 04:46 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 242
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: Don't cry over spilled milk and a client lost!

You got it.

Sucks to be them. Onto the next one. Keep going!

Bill

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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 2nd November 2016, 12:22 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 242
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: Don't cry over spilled milk and a client lost!

I'm guessing you are a content writer. And the gist I get from most content writers on this forum.

Is they're very fragile people.

What did you do wrong? Did it ever occur to you maybe they...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 2nd November 2016, 11:58 AM
Replies: 97
Views: 1,978
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: can a 50 years old man learn how to do website design and internet online marketing

Hello, certainly you can become an expert on web design and internet online marketing
cheers

Bill

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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 2nd November 2016, 10:52 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 144
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: The WORST Clients Pay The BEST: True or False?

I treat my clients with respect and I assume to get that in return. And I've never had a problem.

I also think it boils down to your interaction with them.

If it's through Skype or email if...
Forum: Copywriting 1st November 2016, 02:36 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 121
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: Some tips for your content marketing strategy

Hey Dave,

Welcome to The Copywriting Forum. Not sure what all that was but...

Who's your favourite copywriter? Mine? Oh, that would have to be Gary Halbert. I have all his stuff. Top of...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 31st October 2016, 04:24 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 212
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: 99% of all NDAs are like this!

Okay, I'll put it a different way so my post doesn't get deleted this time. Do you have any actual figures that substantiate your claims?

Bill


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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 31st October 2016, 01:29 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 212
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: Ive finally learnt how to say no to clients - and its driving more business my way.

You've made a huge breakthrough right there. It kind of sounded like people were taking advantage of you before.

And I think you'll find with this new demeanor you'll have more confidence in your...
Forum: Copywriting 26th October 2016, 01:54 PM
Replies: 42
Views: 965
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: Show me it's more than just semantics: Copywriter vs Content Writer

neshaword,

You know what content writing is. And that's what you do. That's good, there's nothing wrong with that. But you have to understand the difference between copywriting and content...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 26th October 2016, 10:16 AM
Replies: 26
Views: 265
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: Hourly vs. Fixed Rate: Where do you Stand?

Per project. When I write a sales letter I know how much time I need for research, crafting the sales letter and editing. Copywriters charge on a per project basis.

Bill

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Forum: Copywriting 25th October 2016, 11:20 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,042
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: Every Client Will Appreciate If You Use These 4 Tools For Writing

neshaword,

This may come in handy for you.

Content writer: A website content writer or web content writer is a person who specializes in providing relevant content for websites. Every website...
Forum: Copywriting 24th October 2016, 09:04 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 171
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: Experienced copywriters - how did you end up in your niche?

In my opinion you should be able to write copy for any subject.

And this is achieved through the research process.

I've written copy for everything from seniors home care to home alarm...
Forum: Copywriting 19th October 2016, 10:21 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 165
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: What Mary Pope Osborne Taught Me About Writing and Success

Does anyone moderate the copywriting forum anymore.

If Brian Mcleod was still around this dog sh*t would of been zapped in a few minutes.

Seriously.


Bill
Forum: Copywriting 1st October 2016, 04:16 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,141
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: Staple?

Do what I said above. And of course have the order form last in the sequence.

That's all you have to do. Never any staples.

Bill


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Forum: Copywriting 23rd September 2016, 09:57 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 324
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: STOP! Insanely Wicked Headlines Suck Bored Readers into Catatonic Click Frenzy?

Not only should the headline get the prospects attention and promise a big benefit.

It should create curiosity and remember the prospect is always thinking ...”what's in it for me.”

The...
Forum: Copywriting 20th September 2016, 06:59 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 966
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: How To Use a P.S. In a Sales Letter

I don't do it and I'll tell you why. It's too easy to confuse the prospect that has skimmed the page. Also, the PS isn't enough space to sell a whole other product. I'd keep it for a back end...
Forum: Copywriting 19th September 2016, 01:29 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 966
Posted By Bill Jeffels
How To Use a P.S. In a Sales Letter

I want to talk about the P.S. In a sales letter because a lot of the sales message critiques I see on here either have one that isn't very good or don't have one all together.

The PS in a sales...
Forum: Copywriting 16th September 2016, 09:10 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,484
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: How hard is copywriting

You ask this question like your ordering a topping for ice cream. Those other things you mentioned and copywrting are completely different animals.

To become a real copywriter you have to put in...
Forum: Copywriting 6th September 2016, 09:05 AM
Replies: 41
Views: 649
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: When is copywriting...lying?

If the product you are writing copy for is really that great and it will do what it claims there is no reason to embellish the truth or lie anyway. If the product is subpar you should be asking...
Forum: Copywriting 31st August 2016, 08:49 AM
Replies: 28
Views: 332
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: Please critique my first copy

I'm going to be very honest. So, take this as you will.

I find 3 things wrong with this piece. 1) You're obviously not a copywriter so the copy is terrible. 2) English is not your first...
Forum: Copywriting 30th August 2016, 01:24 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 135
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: Essential Content for Sales Page?

The number of words are not Important. What's Important is what you do with the words you use.

The basic sales page opens with the headline which should show your prospect the big benefit and...
Forum: Copywriting 6th November 2015, 05:41 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,005
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: looking for a gary halbert swipe.

“NOW YOU CAN ACTUALLY CURE BALDNESS! (EVEN IF IT
RUNS IN YOUR FAMILY!) “

Closest I could find...

Vincent James Swipe...Vincent James - The 12 Month Millionaire - 77 Million in 24 Months...
Forum: Copywriting 24th November 2014, 09:51 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,107
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: "How Do You Become A Man Women Lust After?" Email Copy [Open for Critique]

I couldn't even get past the headline...

Change it to...How Do You Become A Man That Women Lust After?

Adding that one word will make a huge difference.


Bill

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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 20th November 2014, 02:17 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 577
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: What Internet Marketing Strategies are TIMELESS?

Prospect has a problem. Provide a product that gives them a solution.


Bill

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Forum: Copywriting 16th November 2014, 05:10 PM
Replies: 34
Views: 3,145
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: Can you guys help me make a life decision?

Interesting. The positive feedback was met with a contemptuous reply.

You say you were coached by Scott Haines. I'm sure he could tell you a couple stories about making sacrifices.

You work...
Forum: Copywriting 16th November 2014, 04:24 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,141
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: Staple?

What I've found works best is numbering all the pages. And like you say...next page please. I don't staple them together.

It looks more professional and it's easier for the prospect to read that...
Forum: Copywriting 14th November 2014, 04:59 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 2,167
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: [Critique request] Please give me your expert and BRUTALLY HONEST opinion.

You have some real issues with the pre-headline, headline and subhead. First the font sizes need to be restructured.

And what I mean is the pre head should be smaller than the headline. ...
Forum: Copywriting 2nd September 2014, 09:00 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 784
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: Any good books or websites on Landing Page Copy Writing

The same principles in copywriting are the same today as they were years ago.

It's all about seducing,compelling and persuading your prospect to buy your product.

Through the headline subhead...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 2nd September 2014, 08:20 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 639
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: help on how to integrate my magento site with my stripe.com merchant account

It's about half way down...

Configuration
You will only need to enter your stripe API keys and enable the module before it appears on the checkout page. The module's configuration section is at...
Forum: Copywriting 29th August 2014, 04:11 PM
Replies: 26
Views: 2,783
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: The Gary Halbert Letters All-Star Audio Series...

I have to say I could of listened to 2 more hours of that greatness!

"Amazing"... I mean "Awsome" Lol
Forum: Copywriting 28th August 2014, 10:20 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,256
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: [Critiques appreciated] - Direct Response Sales Letter

You do have something here. It's a little rough.

Remember: star, story, solution.

The problem: Michael is a garbage collector who is on his feet all day. Describe all the pain that he...
Forum: Copywriting 27th August 2014, 09:55 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,014
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: Printed Direct Mail Sales Letter or Postcard?

Wrong. If you do it correctly the print and postage will cost you nothing.

A long form sales letter allows you to interact with your prospect. If you write it correctly you will be answering all...
Forum: Copywriting 27th August 2014, 08:35 PM
Replies: 26
Views: 2,783
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: The Gary Halbert Letters All-Star Audio Series...

Amazing. Win, win situation all around.

I know just the gold I've learned from Bond my self is priceless.

This is obviously a cornucopia of legends and obviously a once in a lifetime...
Forum: Copywriting 6th March 2014, 04:34 PM
Replies: 43
Views: 2,733
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: Is it time to reconsider your copywriting career?

No I don't.

It's self explanatory to anyone who possess any intellectual capacity.


Bill


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Forum: Copywriting 6th March 2014, 10:34 AM
Replies: 43
Views: 2,733
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: Is it time to reconsider your copywriting career?

Precisely.

However, it can become disenchanting with the day to day dealings with tiresome clients.


Bill


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Forum: Copywriting 6th March 2014, 10:24 AM
Replies: 43
Views: 2,733
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Forum: Copywriting 5th March 2014, 02:47 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,064
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: Perry Belcher looking for copywriters...

I'm sure you have an insider hypothesis why this is occurring.


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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 6th February 2014, 10:02 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,974
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: Clickbank Niche- How to choose best product?

You have to think about human nature and the psychology of people. Some things never change. What was popular in the past will be popular now and In the future.

People will always want to better...
Forum: Copywriting 30th January 2014, 11:55 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 770
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: Getting Into Copywriting

Just because I buy a toolbox and a wrench set doesn't make me a mechanic.

Get an education on what you are trying to do first. Read as many books as you can and take notes. Investigate the rhythm...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 25th January 2014, 04:22 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 657
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: Experience Matters Online Too

You could use this as your opener. Do you have any pieces of work that you could show someone.

Show your prospect a very good example of your website design and let them know that you will give...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 25th January 2014, 01:51 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 360
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: Starting With A Freebie Or Sales

Definitely offer a free report first and develop a relationship. If you try to hit them with an opt out form they've already had a chance to hear your offer and don't want it.

The free report...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 23rd January 2014, 05:47 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 645
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: Review Site Requirements

Yes, It'll go like this. ''I have reviewed none of these products of which I'm talking about.''

'' I have not bought , tested or used these products. Everything Is absolute hearsay and conveyed...
Forum: Copywriting 21st January 2014, 06:54 PM
Replies: 32
Views: 1,671
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: Any feedback on this video salesletter?

Okay, I did a Direct Mail letter In 2011. I had it go through the usual concept of a weight loss letter that we've all seen time and time again. The company I was working for weren't getting the...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 21st January 2014, 02:34 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 537
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: Dietplan & workout programs marketing

If I understand you correctly you're talking custom-made diet plan. That would be modeling your plan to the specifications of each individual purchaser.

If you are getting a lot of traffic of...
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