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Forum: Wanted - Members Looking To Hire You 21st September 2014, 12:18 PM
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Posted By MichaelCo
Re: [Reviewers Wanted] 30 Days to Internet Abundance

Thanks RVS3 for letting me review 30 Days to Internet Abundance.

I would like to keep this short and simple just like this great EBook. I love how from the start it gets you into the right...
Forum: Wanted - Members Looking To Hire You 20th September 2014, 11:28 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 602
Posted By Chris Gylseth
Re: [Reviewers Wanted] 30 Days to Internet Abundance

Perhaps the part I found the most interesting about this report is how it starts out by guiding your mindset. You can find a lot of literature supporting the importance of what thoughts you harbor,...
Forum: Wanted - Members Looking To Hire You 20th September 2014, 09:18 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 602
Posted By millionairesandie
Re: [Reviewers Wanted] 30 Days to Internet Abundance

Thanks RVS33 for allowing me to review 30 Days to Internet Abundance

30 Days to Internet Abundance is a 28 page PDF that walks you through 30 steps, which are actually days, to setting up &...
Forum: Mind Warriors 8th August 2014, 05:33 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 743
Posted By Zodiax
You can move mountains!

Yes, it is true. You can move mountains.

Mt. Everest, one of the largest mountains on the face of this planet weighs a staggering 357 trillion pounds.

Forget everything you were taught about...
Forum: Mind Warriors 23rd June 2014, 07:50 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,194
Posted By writeaway
Make FEAR work for you

Step 1: Remember the things that caused you so much pain and embarrassment

Step 2: Pick the WORST memory of pain, embarrassment, ridicule... Pick the one that just makes you SICK to your stomach...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 26th March 2013, 09:22 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 570
Posted By Malcolm Thomas
Re: What do you think of my sales copy?

As others have already stated you need to try to target a more smaller, more specific niche if your goal is to make as much money as quickly as possible.

The sales copy seems alright but i think...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 26th March 2013, 09:15 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 570
Posted By Woodward82
Re: What do you think of my sales copy?

Not very compelling from a customer standpoint



The font runs together doesnt stand out, and frankly just doesnt grab my attention. I think the headline is to many words. Get short straight to...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 26th March 2013, 08:57 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 570
Posted By Randall Magwood
Re: What do you think of my sales copy?

Your whole site needs a re-design. At least throw some borders around the sales copy. For a motivational book, dont make it sound like something in the internet marketing niche. And lose the price of...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 26th March 2013, 07:56 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 570
Posted By ejullya
Re: What do you think of my sales copy?

Hi RV,

I was thinking that you could also check out the copywriting section of the WF. I just went there and there are some good discussions about sale pages that may be of help to you.

You can...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 26th March 2013, 07:39 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 570
Posted By travlinguy
Re: What do you think of my sales copy?

Okay, wealth creation/entrepreneurship isn't a niche. It's a multi-billion, if not trillion dollar market. You need to break it down to something more manageable.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 26th March 2013, 07:29 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 570
Posted By travlinguy
Re: What do you think of my sales copy?

Your hook will depend on who you're trying to reach.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 26th March 2013, 07:24 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 570
Posted By ejullya
Re: What do you think of my sales copy?

Hi RV,

I am sorry to disappoint you but I don't like it.

First I did not like the fact you had a paypal button right smack under the headline. Even before you explain what the offer is all...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 26th March 2013, 07:21 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 570
Posted By travlinguy
Re: What do you think of my sales copy?

Good effort though it needs polish. Who is your audience? What demographic are you trying to reach? A video series of wealth secrets for only $7? I don't know. People like a bargain but they're going...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 26th March 2013, 07:17 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 570
Posted By writeaway
Re: What do you think of my sales copy?

It doesn't have an emotional hook

Format/font is off

No graphic cues

Coloring is off

You can try buying format sales templates off Fiverr BUT you need to work on your copywriting skills
Forum: Mind Warriors 8th February 2013, 01:47 PM
Replies: 64
Views: 20,146
Posted By Mousumi
Lightbulb 10 Things You Should Give Up To Be Happy

Sometimes giving up and letting things go can make us the happiest.
Turning over the pages of time you are quite likely inviting depression,
stress and excuses, all leading you to an unhappy and...
Forum: Mind Warriors 21st May 2012, 03:52 AM
Replies: 86
Views: 9,099
Posted By brute77
Lightbulb Story of my first decent success online, $160 to $13,000

This happened way back in 2006, I was already making money from other sources online.. but was definitely under financial stress as I was starting from scratch, living by myself. Then I was not a...
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