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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 28th July 2015, 02:13 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 801
Posted By chillheart
Re: Aweber Links being Reported as Attack Pages

https://twitter.com/AWeberSupport/status/626087610268585984




:cool:
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 28th July 2015, 08:55 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 801
Posted By chillheart
Re: Aweber Links being Reported as Attack Pages

Can confirm; it's happened in the emails I get from a trusted source.

Did they get hacked or something?
Forum: Copywriting 3rd July 2015, 06:50 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,105
Posted By chillheart
Forum: Copywriting 21st June 2015, 03:16 PM
Replies: 86
Views: 5,714
Posted By chillheart
Re: 4 postcards mailed, which was the winner?

This whole thread is a lie! Ewen made this stuff up as a case study for the Zeigarnik Effect (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bluma_Zeigarnik#The_Zeigarnik_effect)!




:P
Forum: Copywriting 19th June 2015, 03:32 PM
Replies: 86
Views: 5,714
Posted By chillheart
Re: 4 postcards mailed, which was the winner?

Heh. No one is saying #3 :D

#1 is plain but it's the most clear in its message—no images as a distraction, better readability, and CONTACT INFO right to the side. Plus the headline doesn't have...
Forum: Copywriting 16th June 2015, 07:13 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,450
Posted By chillheart
Re: Puh-lease, "Killer Copy" — Let Me LIVE!

Agreed. Despite her prose being... otherwordly :P... I could easily see that transferring to certain niches that would make the copy POP like a fire cracker.

Princess B, no foul was meant in my...
Forum: Copywriting 16th June 2015, 03:10 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,450
Posted By chillheart
Re: Puh-lease, "Killer Copy" — Let Me LIVE!

All right, I just got to know...

What's your background, Princess Balestra?

I'm guessing a long time honing Creative Writing skills? Specifically, novels or poetry maybe?

Not trying to diss,...
Forum: Copywriting 13th June 2015, 09:00 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,236
Posted By chillheart
Re: Sales Page Critique?

■ Everything at the top looks like something for a squeeze page... then it goes straight into a sales pitch from there. One or the other, brother.

■ Next up is this thing...
wut?

Exhibit #458...
Forum: Copywriting 13th June 2015, 08:27 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,720
Posted By chillheart
Re: Judge this sales letter please?

Who was it who said "Bad copy looks like content"...
Forum: Copywriting 13th June 2015, 08:15 AM
Replies: 26
Views: 3,388
Posted By chillheart
Re: Where can I get good copy writer?

Read the sticky: http://www.warriorforum.com/copywriting/47866-tips-if-youre-looking-copywriter-difference-between-copywriter-article-writer.html


We get this question often. But you know what? I...
Forum: Copywriting 7th June 2015, 02:27 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,386
Posted By chillheart
Re: Wait, what? No, thanks! (NSFW)

Maybe it was done deliberately to get some media buzz?

http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/f/f0/Tin_foil_hat_2.png

:)
Forum: Copywriting 6th June 2015, 04:13 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,747
Posted By chillheart
Re: Please critique my sales page when you get a spare moment

Oi. The whole thing needs to be scrapped and rewritten.

* The headline you have right now is actually just a pre-header/call out.

* Is it "FINISHED in 3 months" ...or... "FIRST DRAFT in 3...
Forum: Copywriting 5th June 2015, 05:19 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,387
Posted By chillheart
In addition to what the others said...

Americans tend to spell that as "Favorite." No tacked-on u in there.


Why?

Bullets need some work. Example: You jumped from saying "Now includes:" to "We'll do X, which will give you Y".

...
Forum: Copywriting 26th May 2015, 09:40 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,350
Posted By chillheart
Re: Honest and Objective Review of Sales Letter Please

I was JUST lurking at some dude's site (http://jmflad.com/stayawa/) that talks about this -- and why NOT to say "automation" as a key point.

If you're going to say "It's Automated!", then back up...
Forum: Copywriting 19th May 2015, 11:37 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,578
Posted By chillheart
Tip Re: here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

1) The pic at the top-left... That's a pretty jarring disconnect from where they are now to where they (might?) want to be. A simple before-and-after would work better. Also, get rid of the website...
Forum: Copywriting 15th May 2015, 11:09 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,243
Posted By chillheart
Yikes...

Aw man. The mechanics are there as you said, but I can't help but think about how horrifying the product was. :eek:

Also...
...
Forum: Copywriting 3rd May 2015, 09:58 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,927
Posted By chillheart
Post Re: Critique - Hold nothing back - Meetup Group

It sucks.








Okay okay, I'll be helpful.
Forum: Copywriting 3rd May 2015, 08:39 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 1,973
Posted By chillheart
Tip I got a bad feelin' about this...

Is this Wagenheim 2.0?


tooleyweed,

The most important elements to a sales page...

Are the elements that come before a word of copy is written.

Like, for example, figuring out if there...
Forum: Copywriting 3rd May 2015, 07:21 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 2,459
Posted By chillheart
Lightbulb AHA!

So that was his name... Mel Martin.

I thought for SURE there was a copywriter known for ads that are mostly bullets.

This was haunting me for MONTHS. :eek:
Forum: Copywriting 1st May 2015, 11:06 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,206
Posted By chillheart
Re: Sales Page Review - Please

Ya, this would need a complete makeover.


P.S. What's with the lonesome "PS" at the very bottom of the page?
Forum: Copywriting 28th April 2015, 05:48 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,161
Posted By chillheart
Re: What do you think about my squeeze page?

Needs More JPEG (http://needsmorejpeg.com/) :smilies_rolleyes:

No -- no -- that is LITERALLY the lowest-quality picture I have ever seen in Internet Marketing.

All credibility would be slain...
Forum: Copywriting 24th April 2015, 01:24 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,931
Posted By chillheart
Tip Re: Titans DVD Sales letter. Your opinions requested

Roy Furr wrote it.

“There’s a reason I was chosen to write the sales copy for Titans — the biggest direct response event of the decade.” Source....
Forum: Copywriting 24th April 2015, 06:56 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,249
Posted By chillheart
Re: Cops need to step up their ad game

Not true. An anonymous tip is not sufficient evidence to aquire a search warrant.

If the police did raid someone's house on just a tip alone, anything they'd find would be inadmissable in court.
...
Forum: Copywriting 23rd April 2015, 11:03 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,249
Posted By chillheart
Post Cops need to step up their ad game

http://i.imgur.com/T8AbMr3.jpg

Apparently it's from a real police department in a sleepy part of Georgia.
Forum: Copywriting 23rd April 2015, 10:50 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,365
Posted By chillheart
Lightbulb Aw crap...

Welp, I've been slacking in that training procedure.

Haven't done that in weeks.


I recall handwriting David Ogilvy's Rolls-Royce ad. It was only from writing it out by hand where a certain...
Forum: Warriors For Hire 23rd April 2015, 05:37 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 626
Posted By chillheart
Forum: Copywriting 22nd April 2015, 08:28 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,576
Posted By chillheart
Re: Who is your Jimi Henrix of copywriting?

*Jimi Hendrix. You spelled his name wrong three times.

Also: John Carlton.
Forum: Copywriting 22nd April 2015, 05:33 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,264
Posted By chillheart
Re: Financial / Bizop Copywriter Needed

Hey wizard,

First person who popped into my mind was Len Bailey. Don't know if he still posts here or not.

If you need someone who hits a bit harder, try contacting Doug D'Anna. I KNOW he's...
Forum: Copywriting 22nd April 2015, 08:18 AM
Replies: 28
Views: 2,478
Posted By chillheart
Re: The 5-Minute Copywriting "Challenge" - Do You Know Which Ad Is Better?

This is a bogus challenge.

We don't know what the images are.

That can be a HUGE factor in conversions.
Forum: Copywriting 13th April 2015, 07:29 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,273
Posted By chillheart
Re: A Thought On Serif And Sans Serif Fonts

If readability isn't an issue...

I'd say a well-liked font would still matter. But that's presuming the reader/target audience would even give a hoot about the minutiae of font choice.
...
Forum: Copywriting 11th April 2015, 10:39 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,523
Posted By chillheart
Lightbulb Re: How do they not catch these things?...

Giving this thread a second look. All I have to say is--

Ohhhhh, okay.

Yeah, that IS confusing. :(

AARP made it seem like it's two different companies. WTF.

Good catch, Timothy.
Forum: Copywriting 11th April 2015, 04:32 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,523
Posted By chillheart
Re: How do they not catch these things?...

Maybe going from this...

To this...

...Would be better?
Forum: Copywriting 9th April 2015, 04:07 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,448
Posted By chillheart
.....

Oh come on max5ty. I mean, he used three exclamation points in a row. Twice.

Doesn't that prove he's the real deal?
Forum: Copywriting 9th April 2015, 03:50 PM
Replies: 36
Views: 2,249
Posted By chillheart
Re: Copy done by HUGELY respected forum Copywriter... Review please...

kevd10, looks like we have a consensus:

1. The copy isn't good, but it may or may not be a bag of crap.
2. Test it anyway.
Forum: Copywriting 9th April 2015, 03:37 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 3,824
Posted By chillheart
Re: [Need A Critique] Clothing Store Website Sales Letter

Is this for direct mail or is this going on your website home page?

If it's the latter then why state the name of the website while they're already on the website?
Forum: Copywriting 8th April 2015, 03:08 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,313
Posted By chillheart
Re: Need Advice On An Ebook Title

The first thing I think of when I hear "prose" is books. Like, literature. A Tale Of Two Cities an' stuff like that. Book books. Not ebooks---or ebooks for a business.

Anyone else?

So I...
Forum: Website Design 8th April 2015, 02:47 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 845
Posted By chillheart
Re: Please take a quick glance at my site

DAMN THAT FONT IS HUGE

Okay... getting that out of the way...

Move those social media icons elsewhere, 'cuz they get in the way of your article.

The copy for your newsletter needs some...
Forum: Website Design 8th April 2015, 02:20 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 764
Posted By chillheart
Re: Please review my website

To be fair, he isn't trying to make some money from web design. Now then he'd be a hypocrite. :P

And I'm glad you tossed that weird clip-art lion thing.
Forum: Website Design 7th April 2015, 10:42 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,218
Posted By chillheart
Re: Any advice on my new site?

You know you can post a new thread, right?

http://www.warriorforum.com/newthread.php?do=newthread&f=45
Forum: Copywriting 6th April 2015, 11:54 AM
Replies: 42
Views: 2,216
Posted By chillheart
Re: Long Sales Copy

ATTENTION NerdyGuy365, while you were busy viewing this thread...

Your Wife Just Had a Baby! Congratulations!
That's right, we -- the experienced medical professionals at West Point Hospital...
Forum: Website Design 6th April 2015, 10:46 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 764
Posted By chillheart
Re: Please review my website

boba,

It looks pretty. It is pretty.

But the function, the substance, the essence... made me go "Huh?"

Let me explain.

First of all, the chef analogy fell flat. I could see it working if...
Forum: Website Design 6th April 2015, 09:38 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 479
Posted By chillheart
Re: How can i make a sales page like this?

That's not really a traditional sales page. More like CPA (Cost Per Action).

You can try asking the Warriors here: Ad Networks (CPM/CPL, Display, SEM)...
Forum: Conversion Rate Optimization 6th April 2015, 09:10 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 1,590
Posted By chillheart
Re: redirect by CTR

You mean how to stop poorly performing ads from running?

You can do that in Google Adwords, for example: https://support.google.com/adwords/answer/2497710?hl=en

(Ctrl + F or search for "low...
Forum: Copywriting 4th April 2015, 03:19 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,701
Posted By chillheart
So you want some advice...

Provide a detailed outline on what you want from your writer(s). Tone of the article, estimated length, keywords, and so on.


Then don't expect them to write for cheap.

Going by your first...
Forum: Copywriting 4th April 2015, 12:40 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,701
Posted By chillheart
Re: How to get optimal results from the copywriter?

Joe,

Please read the sticky: http://www.warriorforum.com/copywriting/47866-tips-if-youre-looking-copywriter-difference-between-copywriter-article-writer.html
Forum: Email Marketing 4th April 2015, 12:26 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,023
Posted By chillheart
Re: LOW CTR

It's (probably) not Aweber's fault if you have a low CTR :smilies_rolleyes:

Look at TakenAction's list and go from there. Sure hope you already have at least some of these questions answered...
Forum: Website Design 4th April 2015, 12:01 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 655
Posted By chillheart
Re: Website Review Please?

It crashes my browser...

I use NoScript in FireFox. When I allow javascript on your site, the whole thing gives me a "(Not Responding)".

Tried it twice; happened twice.

I mean, I know my...
Forum: Website Design 3rd April 2015, 11:26 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 564
Posted By chillheart
Re: AMAZING WEBSITE TEMPLATE SQUEEZE & BLOG DESIGN

Go post this in the WSO section.

Also, that's a weak and overpriced sales proposition.
Forum: Conversion Rate Optimization 2nd April 2015, 09:27 AM
Replies: 30
Views: 3,986
Posted By chillheart
OMG OMG ***L@@K***!!!!

Then get better copy.

Gimmicky "buy it now" tricks aren't going to help.
Forum: Website Design 2nd April 2015, 09:07 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 655
Posted By chillheart
Post Re: Kindly Review My Short Guy Website.

Everything monkeyfunky said. It's a dull and depressing color scheme... No call to action... No clearly defined goal of the page (dating? fashion?)... The ads clearly aren't for short guys but for...
Forum: Website Design 2nd April 2015, 08:36 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 929
Posted By chillheart
Arrow Re: Please Review My Startup Site | Designsation [dot] com

arwanfiles,

The font at the top (and bottom) of the page looks great.

The middle of the page? Not so great.

Please look at the attachment I've made for you in this post. It's the exact look...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 31st March 2015, 10:15 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 537
Posted By chillheart
Re: Selling an ebook with business professional contact info? Legal?

The Book Of Lists have been doing this for a long time.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 31st March 2015, 09:54 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 883
Posted By chillheart
Re: Clickbank new rules for lottery products.

Came here to say that. Spot on.

How people fall for that crap is beyond me...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 31st March 2015, 09:46 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 598
Posted By chillheart
Re: Interesting Stats I Read

[citation needed]
Forum: Copywriting 30th March 2015, 09:11 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 2,460
Posted By chillheart
Re: Resources to Improve Email Followups?

You can give podcasts a try. I personally prefer listening than reading.

John McIntyre runs a podcast series dedicated to email copywriting: Email Marketing Podcast | Drop Dead Copy...
Forum: Copywriting 30th March 2015, 08:56 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 962
Posted By chillheart
Re: 3-star content quality on Textbroker

Wrong subforum. Try this place: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum (http://www.warriorforum.com/main-internet-marketing-discussion-forum/)

Also, just an idea, but you get what you pay for.
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