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Forum: Copywriting 3rd July 2015, 06:50 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,105
Posted By chillheart
Forum: Copywriting 21st June 2015, 03:16 PM
Replies: 86
Views: 5,714
Posted By chillheart
Re: 4 postcards mailed, which was the winner?

This whole thread is a lie! Ewen made this stuff up as a case study for the Zeigarnik Effect (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bluma_Zeigarnik#The_Zeigarnik_effect)!




:P
Forum: Copywriting 19th June 2015, 03:32 PM
Replies: 86
Views: 5,714
Posted By chillheart
Re: 4 postcards mailed, which was the winner?

Heh. No one is saying #3 :D

#1 is plain but it's the most clear in its message—no images as a distraction, better readability, and CONTACT INFO right to the side. Plus the headline doesn't have...
Forum: Copywriting 16th June 2015, 07:13 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,450
Posted By chillheart
Re: Puh-lease, "Killer Copy" — Let Me LIVE!

Agreed. Despite her prose being... otherwordly :P... I could easily see that transferring to certain niches that would make the copy POP like a fire cracker.

Princess B, no foul was meant in my...
Forum: Copywriting 16th June 2015, 03:10 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,450
Posted By chillheart
Re: Puh-lease, "Killer Copy" — Let Me LIVE!

All right, I just got to know...

What's your background, Princess Balestra?

I'm guessing a long time honing Creative Writing skills? Specifically, novels or poetry maybe?

Not trying to diss,...
Forum: Copywriting 13th June 2015, 09:00 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,236
Posted By chillheart
Re: Sales Page Critique?

■ Everything at the top looks like something for a squeeze page... then it goes straight into a sales pitch from there. One or the other, brother.

■ Next up is this thing...
wut?

Exhibit #458...
Forum: Copywriting 6th June 2015, 04:13 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,747
Posted By chillheart
Re: Please critique my sales page when you get a spare moment

Oi. The whole thing needs to be scrapped and rewritten.

* The headline you have right now is actually just a pre-header/call out.

* Is it "FINISHED in 3 months" ...or... "FIRST DRAFT in 3...
Forum: Copywriting 19th May 2015, 11:37 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,578
Posted By chillheart
Tip Re: here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

1) The pic at the top-left... That's a pretty jarring disconnect from where they are now to where they (might?) want to be. A simple before-and-after would work better. Also, get rid of the website...
Forum: Copywriting 3rd May 2015, 09:58 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,927
Posted By chillheart
Post Re: Critique - Hold nothing back - Meetup Group

It sucks.








Okay okay, I'll be helpful.
Forum: Copywriting 3rd May 2015, 08:39 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 1,973
Posted By chillheart
Tip I got a bad feelin' about this...

Is this Wagenheim 2.0?


tooleyweed,

The most important elements to a sales page...

Are the elements that come before a word of copy is written.

Like, for example, figuring out if there...
Forum: Copywriting 3rd May 2015, 07:21 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 2,459
Posted By chillheart
Lightbulb AHA!

So that was his name... Mel Martin.

I thought for SURE there was a copywriter known for ads that are mostly bullets.

This was haunting me for MONTHS. :eek:
Forum: Copywriting 24th April 2015, 01:24 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,931
Posted By chillheart
Tip Re: Titans DVD Sales letter. Your opinions requested

Roy Furr wrote it.

“There’s a reason I was chosen to write the sales copy for Titans — the biggest direct response event of the decade.” Source....
Forum: Copywriting 23rd April 2015, 11:03 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,249
Posted By chillheart
Post Cops need to step up their ad game

http://i.imgur.com/T8AbMr3.jpg

Apparently it's from a real police department in a sleepy part of Georgia.
Forum: Copywriting 22nd April 2015, 08:28 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,576
Posted By chillheart
Re: Who is your Jimi Henrix of copywriting?

*Jimi Hendrix. You spelled his name wrong three times.

Also: John Carlton.
Forum: Copywriting 22nd April 2015, 05:33 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,264
Posted By chillheart
Re: Financial / Bizop Copywriter Needed

Hey wizard,

First person who popped into my mind was Len Bailey. Don't know if he still posts here or not.

If you need someone who hits a bit harder, try contacting Doug D'Anna. I KNOW he's...
Forum: Copywriting 11th April 2015, 10:39 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,523
Posted By chillheart
Lightbulb Re: How do they not catch these things?...

Giving this thread a second look. All I have to say is--

Ohhhhh, okay.

Yeah, that IS confusing. :(

AARP made it seem like it's two different companies. WTF.

Good catch, Timothy.
Forum: Copywriting 9th April 2015, 04:07 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,448
Posted By chillheart
.....

Oh come on max5ty. I mean, he used three exclamation points in a row. Twice.

Doesn't that prove he's the real deal?
Forum: Website Design 8th April 2015, 02:47 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 845
Posted By chillheart
Re: Please take a quick glance at my site

DAMN THAT FONT IS HUGE

Okay... getting that out of the way...

Move those social media icons elsewhere, 'cuz they get in the way of your article.

The copy for your newsletter needs some...
Forum: Website Design 6th April 2015, 10:46 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 764
Posted By chillheart
Re: Please review my website

boba,

It looks pretty. It is pretty.

But the function, the substance, the essence... made me go "Huh?"

Let me explain.

First of all, the chef analogy fell flat. I could see it working if...
Forum: Copywriting 4th April 2015, 03:19 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,701
Posted By chillheart
So you want some advice...

Provide a detailed outline on what you want from your writer(s). Tone of the article, estimated length, keywords, and so on.


Then don't expect them to write for cheap.

Going by your first...
Forum: Copywriting 4th April 2015, 12:40 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,701
Posted By chillheart
Re: How to get optimal results from the copywriter?

Joe,

Please read the sticky: http://www.warriorforum.com/copywriting/47866-tips-if-youre-looking-copywriter-difference-between-copywriter-article-writer.html
Forum: Website Design 4th April 2015, 12:01 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 655
Posted By chillheart
Re: Website Review Please?

It crashes my browser...

I use NoScript in FireFox. When I allow javascript on your site, the whole thing gives me a "(Not Responding)".

Tried it twice; happened twice.

I mean, I know my...
Forum: Conversion Rate Optimization 2nd April 2015, 09:27 AM
Replies: 30
Views: 3,986
Posted By chillheart
OMG OMG ***L@@K***!!!!

Then get better copy.

Gimmicky "buy it now" tricks aren't going to help.
Forum: Website Design 2nd April 2015, 09:07 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 655
Posted By chillheart
Post Re: Kindly Review My Short Guy Website.

Everything monkeyfunky said. It's a dull and depressing color scheme... No call to action... No clearly defined goal of the page (dating? fashion?)... The ads clearly aren't for short guys but for...
Forum: Copywriting 30th March 2015, 08:56 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 962
Posted By chillheart
Re: 3-star content quality on Textbroker

Wrong subforum. Try this place: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum (http://www.warriorforum.com/main-internet-marketing-discussion-forum/)

Also, just an idea, but you get what you pay for.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 29th March 2015, 11:35 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 618
Posted By chillheart
Re: The Big Bonus War

If the offer is strong, good bonuses will strengthen the offer.

If the offer is weak, good bonuses can save it from the scrap heap.

Adding a zillion bonuses would just make the offer look like...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 29th March 2015, 11:12 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 389
Posted By chillheart
Re: .help domains

Nothing will challenge the power of a .com for a looong time.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 29th March 2015, 01:41 AM
Replies: 53
Views: 4,624
Posted By chillheart
Re: What are some sustainable online business ideas?

1. Email marketing.
2. Offer an evergreen service.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 29th March 2015, 01:37 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 769
Posted By chillheart
Re: Incentive VS non-incentive

Incentive means you're gonna give them something if they complete a CTA (sign up, order form, whatever).
Forum: Conversion Rate Optimization 29th March 2015, 01:22 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 2,455
Posted By chillheart
Re: 0 Conversion Rate

peterfor, just a reminder but you can have 1 landing page for each product.

It would take longer to set up though. . . but it would certainly outpull merely sending people to the same old home...
Forum: Conversion Rate Optimization 29th March 2015, 12:15 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 2,089
Posted By chillheart
Re: How to find CRO optimized websites from Google?

I'd say your best bet is to study web design, landing pages, home pages etc... and try to gain a decent knowledge of knowing where to start. You don't want to split test bad design ideas, for...
Forum: Off Topic Forum 24th March 2015, 06:24 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 689
Posted By chillheart
Re: 14 Ridiculously Creative Printed Banner Ads: #10 –Hot & Spicy (Pringles)

A few were pretty meh.

#4 –Get In Shape (Volvic)
The first thing I thought of was "what happened to the apple on the left?" and not symbolism about something (or someone) being out of shape.
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