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Forum: Copywriting 3rd July 2015, 12:14 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,105
Posted By The Copy Nazi
OTOs out the Wazoo

https://www.facebook.com/ryanleemarketing/videos/10153084144692991/
Forum: Copywriting 26th June 2015, 04:51 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,608
Posted By Testos
Re: Squeeze Page - Critique Please

In case you haven't noticed, there is a sticky in this subforum that gives a great checklist to go through before asking to be critiqued.
...
Forum: Copywriting 23rd June 2015, 02:28 AM
Replies: 86
Views: 5,714
Posted By ewenmack
Re: 4 postcards mailed, which was the winner?

Here's my thinking why the first 3 got the most no's.

First comes this statement...

"The Public Sort Their Mail Over The Waste Paper Basket".

Gary Halbert said something like that.

So...
Forum: Copywriting 22nd June 2015, 11:26 AM
Replies: 86
Views: 5,714
Posted By splitTest
Re: 4 postcards mailed, which was the winner?

Great thread, Dr. Vile. Sparked some interesting discussion & got the brain cells flutterin'.

Here's what I think was missing from the other three:

#1 misses all the people who don't have much...
Forum: Copywriting 22nd June 2015, 09:16 AM
Replies: 86
Views: 5,714
Posted By MontelloMarketing
Re: 4 postcards mailed, which was the winner?

There you go.

More proof of why you should test, not guess.
Forum: Copywriting 22nd June 2015, 08:25 AM
Replies: 86
Views: 5,714
Posted By NickN
Re: 4 postcards mailed, which was the winner?

The "no trigger" in the first three could be caused by the question in the first line of body copy.

"Would you like me to come banish all the mosquitoes in your yard for the next 3 weeks for...
Forum: Copywriting 22nd June 2015, 04:51 AM
Replies: 86
Views: 5,714
Posted By ewenmack
Re: 4 postcards mailed, which was the winner?

Drum roll...

LADIES AND GENTLEMEN, THE WINNING POSTCARD IS...

#4

Dean Jackson was the man who engineered them all.

Here he talks about the thinking behind why he chose
those approaches.
Forum: Copywriting 21st June 2015, 07:48 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,207
Posted By Jason Kanigan
Re: Anybody Know What This Sales Page's Headline Font Is??

Take a sample image of the font you want, and upload it at

whatthefont (https://www.myfonts.com/WhatTheFont/)

or

fontspring (http://www.fontspring.com/matcherator)

I did and got several...
Forum: Copywriting 19th June 2015, 02:08 PM
Replies: 86
Views: 5,714
Posted By splitTest
Re: 4 postcards mailed, which was the winner?

I'm kinda torn between #4 and #1. (The other two seem to target smaller "niche" demographics.)

Number one has the clear benefit in the headline, complete with "guaranteed" ...and segues right...
Forum: Copywriting 19th June 2015, 10:52 AM
Replies: 86
Views: 5,714
Posted By shawnlebrun
Re: 4 postcards mailed, which was the winner?

I remember this same type of "choose the winner" in Gary Bencivenga's
retirement seminar, where he had people guessing the winner of A/B split tests.

And since every single frickin guess I had...
Forum: Copywriting 19th June 2015, 06:58 AM
Replies: 86
Views: 5,714
Posted By RickDuris
Re: 4 postcards mailed, which was the winner?

These are really well thought out. I'm going with #1.

But for the life of me, I think the silent objection is the public trend against pesticides, in general. If the company is spraying or laying...
Forum: Copywriting 18th June 2015, 10:27 PM
Replies: 86
Views: 5,714
Posted By ewenmack
4 postcards mailed, which was the winner?

Can you guess right?

Best,
Doctor E. Vile

http://i62.tinypic.com/35a3sdv.jpg

http://i57.tinypic.com/o00wle.jpg

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Forum: Copywriting 16th June 2015, 09:45 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,450
Posted By Princess Balestra
Re: Puh-lease, "Killer Copy" — Let Me LIVE!

*rubs sleep from eyes*

*pulls sporran from dry mouth*

Ok, Rick, seemes we're re-inflating 'goober' for a new generation.

And yeah, you're right on the Balestra deal, only I figured in the...
Forum: Copywriting 13th June 2015, 11:56 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 3,186
Posted By angiecolee
Re: WF copywriting forum dead?

I try to check in but honestly it's the same troll threads being bumped up, an old post from years ago being resurrected with "thanks, good post!", or the endless critiques.

I'll chime in on a...
Forum: Copywriting 8th June 2015, 03:55 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,365
Posted By RickDuris
Re: Need help getting this one time offer to convert!

Edwin, can you share with us the entire funnel up to the point the offer is presented? An upsell's conversion success is predicated on what came before it.

We need specifics.

If you do that, we...
Forum: Copywriting 27th May 2015, 01:14 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,350
Posted By Harti
Re: Honest and Objective Review of Sales Letter Please

Lol. Are you trying to use hypnosis on the audience with the video?

"Read eeeeeevery single wooooord on this paaaage."

about 5 times in 2 minutes..

If that's true.. Instead of using douchy...
Forum: Copywriting 4th May 2015, 06:59 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 1,973
Posted By tooleyweed
Re: I got a bad feelin' about this...

It is obvious to me now that I need do clarify exactly what the product is. Believe me, I want honest hard hitting critiques. The product is a graduated walking fitness program that will have a...
Forum: Copywriting 3rd May 2015, 12:57 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,927
Posted By LivingstoneM
Re: Critique - Hold nothing back - Meetup Group

I'm going to suggest that you hire a professional writer to articulate what it is you are trying to say.

You're not really trying to sell anything directly here (except, I suppose, persuading...
Forum: Copywriting 2nd May 2015, 07:20 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 2,459
Posted By ewenmack
For The Copywriter Who Doesn't Settle For Being Average

One of the tested and proven patterns in advertising
is calling out who the message is for.

One of the most respected creator of print ads that
asked for money was Mel Martin, would do it.
...
Forum: Copywriting 29th April 2015, 01:25 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,365
Posted By Memetics
Re: remembering the fundamentals

"Neuro-magic" is exactly what it is. Once a person has learnt to write without having to "think" about the strokes they're making on the paper, then the writing has become an unconscious process; the...
Forum: Copywriting 28th April 2015, 01:50 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,161
Posted By LivingstoneM
Re: What do you think about my squeeze page?

There's a lot that could be improved here. Regardless of any shortcomings of the layout, the copy doesn't really snap-like-a-firecracker in my mind.

"You're one step away from changing your life"...
Forum: Copywriting 24th April 2015, 07:53 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,874
Posted By max5ty
Re: How to write for local business on website

Hopefully you can find someone to work with.

I've worked with tons of businesses from major to mom and pop on loads of marketing campaigns.

Things are not always a good fit and occasionally...
Forum: Copywriting 24th April 2015, 07:32 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,249
Posted By Kay King
Re: Cops need to step up their ad game

I've been to Quitman, GA - that ad probably works pretty well. The 'trade' in some of those towns is very competitive.
Forum: Copywriting 24th April 2015, 07:28 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,249
Posted By Synnuh
Re: Cops need to step up their ad game

There's going to be a drug dealer stupid enough to do it. That's pretty crafty.
Forum: Copywriting 24th April 2015, 07:18 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,249
Posted By Harti
Re: Cops need to step up their ad game

I'm loving it.

The headline got my attention, the body makes me smile and the offer is incredible. Everything written in simple, clear words.

Would be interested in the response rate. ;D
Forum: Copywriting 22nd April 2015, 02:48 AM
Replies: 62
Views: 9,363
Posted By The Copy Nazi
Re: Gary Bencivenga --- I'm not impressed!

I don't know why you bother debating this guy. Obviously has no idea and is not prepared to listen and learn. Just wants a blue*.


* "blue" - Australian slang for "fight" or "argument".

p.s....
Forum: Copywriting 22nd April 2015, 02:14 AM
Replies: 28
Views: 2,478
Posted By ewenmack
Re: The 5-Minute Copywriting Challenge - Do You Know Which Ad Is Better?

Were the images the same apart from the fourth one?

You know, the fourth one could of having something weird
like Dracula wearing one!

Images can be the biggest determiner of response
in some...
Forum: Copywriting 11th April 2015, 09:32 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,523
Posted By TimothyW
Re: How do they not catch these things?...

Yes, YOU read it that way -- but I count *at least* one professional copywriter *in this thread* alone, who read it the "other" way.

To my way of thinking, that's proof enough it needs to be...
Forum: Copywriting 5th April 2015, 05:16 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,701
Posted By sethczerepak
Re: So you want some advice...

Key phrase, "if it is really great.."

In my experience, more than 99% of the clients who are paranoid about being ripped off have a distorted perception of how innovative their "idea" really is....
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 30th March 2015, 06:52 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 618
Posted By BudiT
Re: The Big Bonus War

Yeah that's just funny! There should be a limit to these kinds of stuffs. A sweet spot of ratio between perceived value over perceived cost.

And there's also a difference between actually purchase...
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