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Forum: Copywriting 22nd May 2009, 07:42 AM
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Posted By dadeon
Re: Help. My best tagline is also the meanest!

I would pick the first one, but take away the first sentence.

"Fire your webmaster." works because it's emotional and creates curiosity.

As for the rest, I would say it's back to the drawing...
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