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Forum: Copywriting 26th August 2013, 12:00 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 749
Posted By KitchenTableWarrior
Re: Looking for feedback on autism site

Wow, this is interesting, and the feedback so far is great! I see that you are an autism parent and can appreciate what you are doing on the site.

As an person who worked for many years at an...
Forum: Copywriting 24th August 2013, 02:43 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 749
Posted By staceythewriter
Re: Looking for feedback on autism site

(1) It appears to be a for-profit site (e.g., ".com"), but you are asking for donations. As a copywriter who works with nonprofits, I associate donor acquisition with ".org" or ".edu."

(2) Your...
Forum: Copywriting 23rd August 2013, 03:29 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 749
Posted By NNNNNN
Re: Looking for feedback on autism site

I agree with Ray. You need to connect with your visitors and nothing does that better than a personal story. The only reason I looked at this is that I have a family member with autism. But, I...
Forum: Copywriting 23rd August 2013, 02:29 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 749
Posted By AnabelleFlorida
Re: Looking for feedback on autism site

I know you're trying to do a good thing, that's awesome and I wish you the best of luck, but the site does need help.

I would suggest incorporating charity support (autism), because right now,...
Forum: Copywriting 23rd August 2013, 10:49 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 749
Posted By Raydal
Re: Looking for feedback on autism site

You are dealing with a very emotional issue and yet there
is no "humanness" to the home page. You need a STORY,
readers need to know that you understand their pain, frustrations.
You need a lot...
Forum: Copywriting 21st May 2013, 08:17 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 670
Posted By Peter Michaels
Re: Looking for feedback on mobile app landing page

The headline needs to be more striking... the one you have is pretty ordinary.

And the offer isn't really clear. What exactly do I get when I fill in the form? One box says "get started" (doing...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 4th July 2010, 04:36 PM
Replies: 65
Views: 2,982
Posted By David Jackson
Internet Marketing is a Joke!

Internet Marketing is a joke! At least, that' s how a lot of people coming online treat it. They come online totally unprepared, no money and no clue. Many of them treat forums like some kind of...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 19th July 2009, 02:37 AM
Replies: 34
Views: 1,698
Posted By pratibha
The thrilling success story of an Indian ghostwriter

Hi everybody,

I am 60 years old young man. As a retired scientist, I was looking for a way of making some money to overcome my family economic problems. I was a part time associate as a chemical...
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