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Forum: Copywriting 5th December 2011, 09:10 PM
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Posted By abugah
Re: Feedback on this headline?

What exactly is it all about? I don't get it on first reading. Shorten it, be more specific straight to the point.

How about this...

At last!
Top Experts Reveal A Breakthrough Strategy
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Forum: Copywriting 4th December 2011, 06:04 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 816
Posted By travlinguy
Re: Feedback on this headline?

Waaaaay too long. Stop at 'Services' and you might have something. Good luck.
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