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Forum: Offline Marketing 8th September 2011, 03:33 PM
Replies: 40
Views: 2,281
Posted By midasman09
"Quick Cash" - $360 A Day Taking Pictures

I just had lunch with a guy who wanted to show me the results of his last 2 weeks "venture". Whala! Success!

A few wks ago, he phoned and asked me if I could help him earn some money. He said he...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 2nd September 2011, 04:03 AM
Replies: 48
Views: 1,520
Posted By Mike Baker
Re: Serious help needed - real problem

A lot has been said here that has surely been helpful to you Bill, but the one thing I think is most important is to prioritize the things that matter most to you and concentrate on them. If you...
Forum: Website Design 13th February 2011, 03:12 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 641
Posted By Steve Wells
Re: Give me a midstream critique, if ya' would

Greg, to be honest, you want your site to looks as professional as your video, and in my honest but respectful opinion, your sales page and graphics are not even close to matching the quality of your...
Forum: Website Design 13th February 2011, 01:58 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 641
Posted By iZame
Re: Give me a midstream critique, if ya' would

It is a train wreck to be completely honest. Your logo's background doesn't match the blue background that is on the rest of the page. The blue background looks terrible. Your fonts look like...
Forum: Copywriting 12th February 2011, 02:35 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,071
Posted By Warren.Richards
Re: First Clickbank Sales Page/Letter - Critiques appreciated

@ SwiftKickMedia,

I have seen your copy and your starting line is good.

Some points I would like to share

1) Emphasis on torment more than the whole sentence by bolding it and leaving rest...
Forum: Copywriting 12th February 2011, 01:53 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,071
Posted By AlexDawson
Re: First Clickbank Sales Page/Letter - Critiques appreciated

The design is going to make most people click away immediately. The colours are much too harsh, and the Impact font is downright painful. It's as though you opened a door and had a large mob of very...
Forum: Copywriting 11th February 2011, 11:54 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,071
Posted By ASCW
Re: First Clickbank Sales Page/Letter - Critiques appreciated

You are focused on the wrong things.

You need to stop thinking about banners, vids, or software. And start focusing on the actual bulk of your copy.



Ditch the video, because it doesn't do a...
Forum: Copywriting 11th February 2011, 10:05 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,071
Posted By AnneE
Re: First Clickbank Sales Page/Letter - Critiques appreciated

I liked the first little bit of the video, but then it became repetitive in terms of watching the patterns -- too much style and not enough substance.

I would need to understand how what you are...
Forum: Copywriting 11th February 2011, 07:40 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,071
Posted By sean-john
Re: First Clickbank Sales Page/Letter - Critiques appreciated

took the words out of my mouth, if you dont know how to create good looking pages its much better to either outsource or get a good template to work on.
Forum: Copywriting 11th February 2011, 07:36 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,071
Posted By Collette
Re: First Clickbank Sales Page/Letter - Critiques appreciated

Greg - Before I say anything, what is it about this page that you like? It's obviously not the usual Clickbank-style letter, and I'm curious to know what your thought process was behind some of these...
Forum: Copywriting 11th February 2011, 11:05 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,071
Posted By Oxbloom
Re: First Clickbank Sales Page/Letter - Critiques appreciated

Mal's dead bang here.

I'm only quoting him instead of re-writing exactly the same things myself. Hope you give it a little extra credence with another voice chiming in.
Forum: Copywriting 11th February 2011, 10:47 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,071
Posted By The Copy Nazi
Re: First Clickbank Sales Page/Letter - Critiques appreciated

Horror-show. Complete nightmare to read. Glaring blue background. Hard-to-read shadow font on a dud headline. Body copy bolded. Topped off with a jumble of banners competing with each other to be...
Forum: Copywriting 11th February 2011, 08:52 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,071
Posted By AdwordsMogul
Re: First Clickbank Sales Page/Letter - Critiques appreciated

Hello Greg,

Congratulations on getting your first product out.

Here are some tips I think you will find useful.

1. You said you wanted to try something different... that may not be the best...
Forum: Copywriting 11th February 2011, 08:40 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,071
Posted By Net66
Re: First Clickbank Sales Page/Letter - Critiques appreciated

I think the biggest issue right now is that unless I maximise on my wide screen the page doesn't fit. Not a problem if you have a machine with high resolution but you'd be surprised how many users...
Forum: Copywriting 11th February 2011, 06:12 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,071
Posted By abs007
Re: First Clickbank Sales Page/Letter - Critiques appreciated

hi - ive just checked your site - i think the wording is fine - jut maybe change the font or the color for eye catching areas such as - traffic is cash - traffic is king

i think it would also be...
Forum: Copywriting 10th February 2011, 08:51 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,061
Posted By AdmiralGloom
How The Salvation Army Can Help a Load In Copywriters Rear (Pocket)

So while doing my usual rounds at the thrift store yesterday I said, "Oh, what the hell I'll check out the book section"...

Now usually these are filled with crappy romance novels and 15 copies of...
Forum: Copywriting 8th February 2011, 01:10 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 939
Posted By Bruce Wedding
Re: So I Got This in My Mailbox...

(with apologies to Bill Brasky)

You saw Frank Kern? I know Frank Kern...

"Frank Kern is a son of a bitch!"

"Frank Kern is the father of every noobie in this forum!"

"One time I was with...
Forum: Copywriting 7th February 2011, 09:43 AM
Replies: 26
Views: 1,908
Posted By lvraa
150+ Headline Templates, faster and smarter Headlines!

Hi Warriors

I have created a list of 150+ Headline Templates that you can use to speed up and improve your headline creation.
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Forum: Internet Marketing Product Reviews & Ratings 23rd November 2010, 08:38 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,085
Posted By Janet Walker
Re: Are there any Press Release Distribution Services?

I just bought this "http://www.magicsubmitter.com" not an affiliate link. It like Senuke but cheaper and better. It has a press release submission module, article directories, blogs, bookmarking,...
Forum: Internet Marketing Product Reviews & Ratings 22nd November 2010, 06:29 PM
Replies: 41
Views: 10,891
Posted By MikeAmbrosio
Re: Mike Filsaime Franchise model secret

Tracey,

Your descriptions is ALMOST perfect. Just would like ot clear up a few things...

Upsells - There are 4 options. A MRR package that you keep 100%, an upsell to a Mike Filsaime package...
Forum: Copywriting 16th September 2010, 03:32 AM
Replies: 34
Views: 1,655
Posted By deannatroupe
Re: WTF - How 'bout you!? Warning: This is a RANT!

LOL LOL LOL

1 & 2. Agree. I hate it when grammar is used incorrectly. I used to critique my ex boyfriend's love letters when I was in high school. I wasn't in AP English by accident. My friends...
Forum: Copywriting 15th September 2010, 03:33 PM
Replies: 34
Views: 1,655
Posted By ewenmack
Re: WTF - How 'bout you!? Warning: This is a RANT!

Greg,

Something else to consider...

Solving other peoples problems is
ONLY GOOD if you are doing it for
your clients/customers.

They are the ones paying for your living and lifestyle.
Forum: Copywriting 15th September 2010, 03:26 PM
Replies: 34
Views: 1,655
Posted By hawkhill88
Re: WTF - How 'bout you!? Warning: This is a RANT!

I am SO on your wavelength with all the items on your list, except for the "gorgeous" graphics, a term I'm still mulling over. Maybe it's the alliteration they like? Can illiterates alliterate? I...
Forum: Copywriting 14th September 2010, 09:17 PM
Replies: 34
Views: 1,655
Posted By CurtisN
Re: WTF - How 'bout you!? Warning: This is a RANT!

1 & 2: Bugs the hell out of me too. I'm a stickler for speling and grammers.

3: This kind of stuff is really lame. The people who use these types of headlines probably don't care too much about...
Forum: Copywriting 14th September 2010, 10:05 AM
Replies: 34
Views: 1,655
Posted By RickDuris
Re: WTF - How 'bout you!? Warning: This is a RANT!

Greg, you can be relieved to know the broken toe you suffer from IS NOT YOUR FAULT and you have a legitimate personal injury claim against whatever (or whoever) you hit your toe against.

It's cost...
Forum: Copywriting 13th September 2010, 07:37 PM
Replies: 61
Views: 4,531
Posted By Dan Axelrod
Re: good copy outside the 'make money'/IM niche?

Hey Dave,

Ross Jeffries (of SpeedSeduction.com) had a legendary one for his home study course ten years ago. His new copy is ok, but his old sales letter was dynamite. I had to search for it,...
Forum: Programming 6th July 2010, 05:30 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 490
Posted By pmrc
Re: HEY, COULD I GET SOME HELP HERE? Track, Rotate, Shaken not Stirred!

That is easy to do with a good script like LFM on your side. It will track the affiliate or referrer throughout the process and automatically pays them based on the commission you set.

I can help...
Forum: Programming 11th August 2008, 12:27 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 26,776
Posted By admin
Programming Discussion

Ask your programming questions in this forum and some Warrior will know the answer...
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