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Forum: Copywriting 23rd April 2012, 10:40 AM
Replies: 25
Views: 2,099
Posted By DrLegend
Re: Please critique my sales letter

thanks a lot for the feedback! Yeah, I notice that my mathematical brain is always in the way. I keep making up complicated sentences, boring statements and logical rather than emotional...
Forum: Copywriting 22nd April 2012, 07:19 AM
Replies: 25
Views: 2,099
Posted By DrLegend
Re: Please critique my sales letter

Ok, here's the new version. I still need to include the graphic, which is being made for me now.

Hypnosis | Masculine Freedom | Masculine Freedom (http://www.masculinefreedom.com/hypnosis/)
...
Forum: Copywriting 21st April 2012, 09:59 AM
Replies: 25
Views: 2,099
Posted By DrLegend
Re: Please critique my sales letter

Thanks Mr. Witty.

I already implemented some changes you suggested. I was just very tired yesterday and decided to take a break from all this.

I'm gonna order a CD cover from fiverr.com -...
Forum: Copywriting 20th April 2012, 12:14 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 2,099
Posted By DrLegend
Re: Please critique my sales letter

By the way, what do you guys think about the audio sample that I included (and about the idea of including it)?
Forum: Copywriting 20th April 2012, 12:10 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 2,099
Posted By DrLegend
Re: Please critique my sales letter

Thanks! I REALLY appreciate the help. I'm glad to be part of this forum. Actually, I'm really thinking about writing a super honest letter, as opposed of this "solve all your problems in 20 min."...
Forum: Copywriting 20th April 2012, 08:32 AM
Replies: 25
Views: 2,099
Posted By DrLegend
Re: Please critique my sales letter

Hi,

THANKS for the detailed reply. I really appreciate it! And of course the reason I came here was to learn and improve my copy writing skills! You reply has already given me lots of clues about...
Forum: Copywriting 19th April 2012, 01:49 PM
Replies: 26
Views: 1,021
Posted By DrLegend
Re: YOU Are a Major Factor in Whether or Not Your Copy Converts

This is very interesting! I find that when I put more energy into my site, I suddenly make more sales! Although the traffic stays the same! I think it's the same principle at work here!
Forum: Copywriting 19th April 2012, 01:45 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 2,099
Posted By DrLegend
Please critique my sales letter

Hi guys,

I haven't been active in a while here. Just putting my attention towards different aspects of life.

Now I have decided to offer a new little product on my site and already sold some...
Forum: Local Meetups, Mastermind Groups and Warrior Events 25th October 2011, 08:23 AM
Replies: 0
Mastermind Group: Berlin, Germany
Views: 551
Posted By DrLegend
Berlin, Germany

Hi every one,

I recently moved to Berlin in Germany and I'm looking to create/join a powerful mastermind group round internet marketing. Meetings should be rather frequent (weekly or bi-weekly)...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 28th September 2011, 01:37 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 408
Posted By DrLegend
Re: possible legal issue with website content

I'm not asking for legal advice. Obviously if I am really concerned I will go to an attorney. This is just a thread about opinions.
anyway, I've seen a few websites on the same topic and they all...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 28th September 2011, 12:31 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 408
Posted By DrLegend
possible legal issue with website content

Hi,

This is something that has been bothering me a bit. I am thinking of creating a micro niche website around a very good keyword. It can become very profitable. However, the topic could be quite...
Forum: Search Engine Optimization 28th September 2011, 11:04 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 518
Posted By DrLegend
Combining adsense with clickbank

Hi guys,

I'm new to this topic, so I'll just do what I found extremely effective so far: ask every (possibly stupid) question that I have about this :).

So, I'm planning to create a micro...
Forum: Search Engine Optimization 28th September 2011, 09:43 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,080
Posted By DrLegend
Re: do dashes in domain name influence SEO?

Thanks guys!

Actually, I don't know if any of you know Site Build It! (Ken Evoy). They have a whole tutorial for how to create a website and do keyword searches and which domains to pick. They...
Forum: Search Engine Optimization 28th September 2011, 09:23 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,080
Posted By DrLegend
do dashes in domain name influence SEO?

Hi,

I have a domain that I used to have a website on, but I have taken it down. Now I want to use it again to create a website where I will make money with adsense and affiliate products.

The...
Forum: Mind Warriors 27th September 2011, 12:54 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 451
Posted By DrLegend
Re: Your first reason why you failed and fall down, but did not give up?

Well, right now I'm in the middle of getting up :). I must say that my approach is WAY different now. I changed the way I'm thinking. More benefit oriented. More structured. More centered.

Also,...
Forum: Search Engine Optimization 27th September 2011, 12:45 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 489
Posted By DrLegend
Average Price per Click?

Hi guys

so, I'm totally new to PPC or banner ads or any other ads (although I've done some facebook before). I know that in google the price usually depends on the keyword.

My question is:...
Forum: Copywriting 26th September 2011, 06:52 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,049
Posted By DrLegend
Re: yet another squeeze page critique request :)

Yeah! After receiving amazing help from some people on this forum, it is now in a state that can get me a good conversion rate. Thanks every one. I'll keep you updated on how well it does.

Ivan
Forum: Copywriting 24th September 2011, 05:47 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,049
Posted By DrLegend
Re: yet another squeeze page critique request :)

appology accepted, mrs Countess ;) btw. where did you find out that I have a doctorate in math (did I write it some where on my page? I don't even remember lol)
Forum: Copywriting 23rd September 2011, 03:55 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,049
Posted By DrLegend
Re: yet another squeeze page critique request :)

Hi,

yes that's an interesting point. You're right, I am a doctor :) and yes, it's not a medical title. Actually my official title is Dr. rer. nat. which makes it sound even more serious lol. But...
Forum: Copywriting 22nd September 2011, 10:06 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,049
Posted By DrLegend
Re: yet another squeeze page critique request :)

lol thanks. I have an issue with typos. The "change" part I knew about and left it intentionally (as in "chance to change your life") but maybe it's too far sought.

I'll correct the mistakes.
...
Forum: Copywriting 22nd September 2011, 05:31 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,049
Posted By DrLegend
Re: yet another squeeze page critique request :)

LOL, I was JUST modifying it in this moment. :). anyway. It's back to the first version that I had (with some minor changes). It should be better now. Any new remarks?
...
Forum: Copywriting 21st September 2011, 06:07 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 836
Posted By DrLegend
Re: How Does One Slip a Crowbar Into the Copywriting Door?

I really like John Carlton's "Simple Writing System" it covers the basics of copy writing and you'll here stuff you might not here from other places. It's a bit pricy though!
Forum: Copywriting 21st September 2011, 06:02 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,049
Posted By DrLegend
Re: yet another squeeze page critique request :)

The page we were talking about here is: Approach Anxiety Annihilator Audio (http://www.cureapproachanxiety.com)
Forum: Copywriting 21st September 2011, 06:01 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,049
Posted By DrLegend
Re: yet another squeeze page critique request :)

Oh, which site are you talking about?? The one in my signature?
Forum: Copywriting 21st September 2011, 06:00 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,049
Posted By DrLegend
Re: yet another squeeze page critique request :)

thanks, as I said, this is a completely new design that you saw. Before I had something else that was more colorful and sophisticated, but after the comments above I decided to change it. The current...
Forum: Copywriting 21st September 2011, 01:42 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,049
Posted By DrLegend
Re: yet another squeeze page critique request :)

Ok, I changed my design yet again. This time to something completely different.
Forum: Copywriting 20th September 2011, 02:12 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 757
Posted By DrLegend
Re: The dilemma of hype vs. stuff that really works

YES that's actually exactly my plan :)

Thanks
Forum: Copywriting 20th September 2011, 01:43 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 757
Posted By DrLegend
Re: The dilemma of hype vs. stuff that really works

I'm actually thinking of positioning myself in such a way, where I list all the standard "promises" and approaches of the gurus out there and prove how my system is actually BETTER (and even faster)...
Forum: Copywriting 20th September 2011, 12:26 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 757
Posted By DrLegend
The dilemma of hype vs. stuff that really works

Hi,

So, lately I've been having a lot of thoughts about my branding and the way I position myself and I am constantly bumping into the above dilemma.

You see, my site IS about dating and...
Forum: Copywriting 20th September 2011, 10:11 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,049
Posted By DrLegend
Re: yet another squeeze page critique request :)

I have changed the page a bit. Any new critique is highly appreciated :)
Forum: Copywriting 9th September 2011, 04:45 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,049
Posted By DrLegend
Re: yet another squeeze page critique request :)

well, we are actually using ads on Plenty of Fish (dating site), so that might be different from standard PPC (I'm not an expert).
Forum: Copywriting 9th September 2011, 04:43 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,049
Posted By DrLegend
Re: Yet another question on where your traffic comes from...

Good points!!! Thkans.

I guess I was too much taken away by the "global picture" (where you become attractive to women and then the right one come along, which is how it works in reality), however...
Forum: Copywriting 8th September 2011, 03:27 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,049
Posted By DrLegend
Re: yet another squeeze page critique request :)

you have only two friends? ;)

no worries. I'm sure there will be another generous soul on this forum that will be so kind to say a few words about this page.

Ivan
Forum: Copywriting 8th September 2011, 02:37 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,049
Posted By DrLegend
yet another squeeze page critique request :)

Hello fellows,

I recently started a squeeze page that I use for a PPC campaign. It did already give some results, but I want to ask you before we spend more money on testing it. What do you think...
Forum: Search Engine Optimization 8th September 2011, 11:05 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 414
Posted By DrLegend
when to make conclusions about conversion rate

Hi,

me and a friend are currently testing a squeeze page (using PPC) (Approach Anxiety Annihilator Audio (http://www.cureapproachanxiety.com)).

My question is: in your experience, how many...
Forum: Website Design 7th September 2011, 10:02 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 945
Posted By DrLegend
Re: squeeze page integrated in Wordpress blog?

hm, none of that php stuff is working. I guess I'll have to hire a programmer soon :)
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 7th September 2011, 07:58 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 334
Posted By DrLegend
Free newsletter vs. free gift opt in

Hi,

I'm currently thinking about what to offer my visitors for free when they come to my site. I can either offer them a free newsletter, OR I can offer them a valuable gift (like an info product)...
Forum: Website Design 7th September 2011, 03:48 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 945
Posted By DrLegend
Re: squeeze page integrated in Wordpress blog?

I think I got the hang of it now. THANKS!
Forum: Website Design 7th September 2011, 03:46 AM
Replies: 26
Views: 662
Posted By DrLegend
Re: I need your opinion on my design

Ok, I guess we shouldn't start discussing these topics here, since it's an IM forum :).

One thing I can say: there are tons of websites out there that teach you "how to get a woman" and mine is...
Forum: Website Design 6th September 2011, 05:05 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 945
Posted By DrLegend
Re: squeeze page integrated in Wordpress blog?

Hm, how do I protect my download page?
Forum: Website Design 6th September 2011, 04:03 PM
Replies: 26
Views: 662
Posted By DrLegend
Re: I need your opinion on my design

Thanks!

a lot of information here :).

First of all, my domain name is a BRAND. Masculine Freedom is a very profound concept that I have "invented" (although I think it might already exists in...
Forum: Website Design 6th September 2011, 03:55 AM
Replies: 26
Views: 662
Posted By DrLegend
Re: I need your opinion on my design

I am really reluctant to making her smaller....maybe because I like looking at her too much LOL
Forum: Website Design 6th September 2011, 03:31 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 945
Posted By DrLegend
Re: squeeze page integrated in Wordpress blog?

Thanks man!

so if I understand it correctly: the first line should go on top of my thank you page (since I give them something they can download).
And the sedond pair of lines I put on the...
Forum: Website Design 5th September 2011, 06:03 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 945
Posted By DrLegend
Re: squeeze page integrated in Wordpress blog?

Thanks guys,

yes Arwen you are completely right! One needs to use cookies. But I don't have enough experience with this to implement it properly. I guess I'll have to do some research :)

Any...
Forum: Website Design 5th September 2011, 01:37 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 945
Posted By DrLegend
Re: squeeze page integrated in Wordpress blog?

Hi,

well, actually by "signed in" members I mean signet into my opt-in to my mailing list, which is in Aweber. So, I guess your tick won't work.

Again I refer to the example of David...
Forum: Website Design 5th September 2011, 11:49 AM
Replies: 26
Views: 662
Posted By DrLegend
Re: I need your opinion on my design

Hi,

Can you please be more specific about the other parts? What is that needs imporvement? The site bar? The nav menu?

also note that I just started designing this site and it will change...
Forum: Website Design 5th September 2011, 11:46 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 945
Posted By DrLegend
squeeze page integrated in Wordpress blog?

Hi guys,

I have the following problem: I want the landing page of my wordpress blog to be a squeeze page. HOWEVER, I want my sidebar, header and nav menu to be visible AND I want the squeeze page...
Forum: Website Design 5th September 2011, 03:01 AM
Replies: 26
Views: 662
Posted By DrLegend
Re: I need your opinion on my design

Thanks to everyone's advice here, I decided to migrate my site toa new server, where I have full control over everything. I think the new one looks a bit better :) (check it out by following the link...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 2nd September 2011, 06:36 AM
Replies: 256
Views: 8,884
Posted By DrLegend
Re: Do Academics Make Good Entrepreneurs?

I'll have to partially agree. I come from a VERY acedemic environment (have a PhD in math) and I am still struggling with making good money with my business. I think one of the main reasons is a...
Forum: Search Engine Optimization 2nd September 2011, 03:24 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 759
Posted By DrLegend
Re: Duplicate content

Thanks guys for all your replies,

so my conclusion is: avoid duplicate content :).




This explains the second part of my question: how much different should the two articles be. You say...
Forum: Search Engine Optimization 1st September 2011, 12:50 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 759
Posted By DrLegend
Duplicate content

Hi guys,

I recently had a discussion with a friend and that brought up an important topic. How does Google behave towards duplicate content. By that I mean, one article posted on two (but only...
Forum: Search Engine Optimization 30th August 2011, 11:46 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 420
Posted By DrLegend
Re: Moving to a new site - SEO concerns

Hi guys,

I guess this post got lost in the sea of other posts :) I'd really appreciate some more feedback!

Thanks!!

Ivan
Forum: Website Design 28th August 2011, 04:31 AM
Replies: 26
Views: 662
Posted By DrLegend
Re: I need your opinion on my design

Thanks guys!

Thats the thing: I can NOT change the header because the wordpress environment I'm using comes only with predesigned themes (it's a multiuser worpress environment). In principle I...
Forum: Search Engine Optimization 28th August 2011, 04:26 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 420
Posted By DrLegend
Re: Moving to a new site - SEO concerns

Thanks for all your replies guys!
Just to clarify: my domain will stay the same: masculinefreedom.com However, the separate URLs for the blog posts will be different. Since my permalinks were sert...
Forum: Website Design 27th August 2011, 03:40 PM
Replies: 26
Views: 662
Posted By DrLegend
I need your opinion on my design

Hi,

for about a year, I;ve been running a site on dating and confidence for men. I was using a reprogrammed wordpress environment (multi-user) provided by some seminar organizers. The advantage...
Forum: Search Engine Optimization 27th August 2011, 03:34 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 420
Posted By DrLegend
Moving to a new site - SEO concerns

Hi,

for about a year I've been running my site on a specially reprogrammed Wordpress environment, which is multi user and not that flexible (although esy to work with). I'm thinking about moving...
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