Hello Gentlemen. I'm doing some very basic social media marketing for a student club I'm starting at my university.
Critique my FB personal message to prospects
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Hello Gentlemen.
I'm doing some very basic social media marketing for a student club I'm starting at my university.
I have a FB group page with a professional info video designed to inspire audience to join the club.
I'm directing traffic to our group page by finding prospects that go to my school and sending them a personal message telling them about the club with a link to the group page.
I want your critique on my message. This is obviously the first thing they see and I've found that the more personal messages get more hits.
Here is my current cold call FB message.
What would you do differently here?
If you need more background info I'll be happy to share.
Thanks for you time.
-Robert
I'm doing some very basic social media marketing for a student club I'm starting at my university.
I have a FB group page with a professional info video designed to inspire audience to join the club.
I'm directing traffic to our group page by finding prospects that go to my school and sending them a personal message telling them about the club with a link to the group page.
I want your critique on my message. This is obviously the first thing they see and I've found that the more personal messages get more hits.
Here is my current cold call FB message.
What would you do differently here?
If you need more background info I'll be happy to share.
Thanks for you time.
-Robert
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