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Unread 21st Jan 2016, 10:50 PM   #1
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Hiya

I have just published a book titled Copywriting Essentials For Content Marketing: How to write engaging copy that sells without selling.

I'm getting a ton of good feedback about the content - but on the title not so much (apparently its boring and too technical). I created the title for SEO optimisation with my SEO bias (which I tell people not to do in the book (ignore my big red embarrassed face).

I am happy people are getting a lot out of the content but I'd like to get some ideas for a better saucier and more suitable title which is why I need your feedback.....pleeaase.

My slightly left field (and goofy like a lot of online entrepreneurs) way of looking at the emotional and logical reasons people actually buy things comes through in the book so any thing a bit quirky, wacky or fun is great too - don't be shy :-)

You are of course welcome to download a free Kindle copy for the next couple of days here: Amazon.com: Copywriting Essentials For Content Marketing: How to write engaging copy that sells without selling. eBook: Mia Gordon: Kindle Store

or a PDF copy from here: (please don't share the PDF link publicly).

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0Bz1...ew?usp=sharing

Thanks a bunch,

Mia

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You have a great title there. But I don't really feel it is worth buying with that title.

Why not make it

How to write engaging copy that breaks your bank


Something that will raise the curiosity, something that makes me think i will be missing if i don't get this..

I am a copy writer and a sales page creator, i know how to use the curiosity in your visitor to make them buy your product.

Your market wants to make money and they need something that will make it possible for them to make some good cash. So using that as a bait will improve your product sales.

I will be reading your book soon.

If you need a good sales funnel or sales page that converts for your product, please do contact me on my facebook page

https://www.facebook.com/salespagecreator

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Please add skype, we will talk more

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Here a couple of titles that come to mind.

Sell Without Selling

Moneymaking Copywriting

Guerrilla Copywriing Tactics

Secrets Of Selling Without Selling

Sneaky Selling

Hope one of those helps!!

Good luck
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Great suggestion thank you, and good to know you are available thanks :-)

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I subscribe to Kbook promotions. It's an app that gives you the most marketable keywords in your niche.
The book should have a good title, but more importantly should be riddled with keywords directly from Amazon, if that's your market venue. Kbook promotions will help you with that. I am not an affiliate, but love to use it. Saves me time and heartache trying to figure out this stuff.
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Thanks thats really helpful!

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What do you guys think of " Convert!: How To Turn Interest Into Sales? " This is another option that was suggested to me. Everyone is giving me great feedback about the usefulness of the content which is awesome, just trying to finalise the title now. Thanks for all your help.

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Hi Mia,
How about just removing the 'without selling' at the end and putting an exclamation mark after '...that sells'.
The thing is personally I think your title is good, just a little long and I think a lot of people go onto Amazon and type in keywords and maybe if you didn't have 'content marketing' or 'copyright essentials' etc etc..
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