Tony Laroche

Hello guys,

My name is Tony Laroche and i have a product called Radical Inner Game.

The audio program "shortcuts" men’s confidence problem and help them relax their mind in a meditate state with suggestive audio to help them GET the confidence to go out there and talk to women.

We simply took all the existing products on the market, reviewed them, distilled and boiled down their core ideas and beliefs and turned them into hypnotic suggestions.

You can take a look at the sales copy HERE.

Currently the text sales letter is converting ok, but frankly we can do a lot better.

I´m looking for a full revision or a rewrite of the current sales letter.

I want a new video sales letter which should complement the current text sales letter.

I need an experienced copywriter who can deliver killer script and boost conversion.

If you´re interested send a mail at: tony@radicalinnergame.com or reply to this post.

Be prepared to provide examples of previous work, your insights of the dating niche, completion time estimates, as well as your rates.

Also, i´ll require a copy-critique of the current sales letter.

Regards,

Tony

Radical Inner Game
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hatewriting

Looked through your sales page and have this suggestion to increase the subscriber rate.

Delay the popup by around 10 more seconds and make it such that it appears in the MIDDLE of the copy. And a little less wordy + proper formatting (Right now some words are 'justified' while some doesn't appear to be).

P.S. Not a copywriter but I own a converting product in a similar niche - and we've tested these things.

premiumonlinewriting

Hi Tony,

Just sent you an email from sales@premiumseo.co.nz, let me know if it came through.

I have a few ideas about how the page could be improved, perhaps we can discuss that via email or Skype.

Cheers

Tom