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Unread 16th Dec 2012, 07:37 AM   #1
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I was looking to get some reviews for this new report before I start to record videos that go along with it. Not sure if I'm going to make this a WSO, or just a free offer with an optional OTO upgrade (videos). Also looking for possible affiliates!

Let me know what you think!!
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I got dizzy for only seeing it from top to bottom, I cant catch anything except the headline. sure you should add some space between paragraphs.

as for images, you can insert image with print-screen button > paste to your microsoft word > edit it (crop, resize). it's easy, and it catch more attention.

I suggest you to give this as free download or if you want to sell it, sell it cheap. too much affiliate link inside. but if you think to still put your affiliate link, please cloak it.

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Hi,

I have looking at your .pdf. First,you must edit and change it into paragraph. Change the font.
Need the introduction and need table of content.

If you change it into video,it is good idea.But edit the over all .pdf as well.If you're going to WSO, I think you could include both. .pdf & video. Add some value there.

If you give link suggestion of certain website.If that is your affiliate link,make sure you tell reader that is affiliate link.

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Hi Ctutz21,

I have looked over your report "The Hit List" and I agree with with the suggestions of the previous reviewers. I would add one thing to all of their suggestions.

Use a different font that is easier to read, such as Verdana or Tahoma. In the middle of your report the font changes for a few paragraphs that suggests to me that you cut and pasted something and did not write that section yourself.

That being said; you have a great deal of good information in your report!

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i guess you are updating it? keep us posted

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Originally Posted by spamcat View Post

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Use a different font that is easier to read, such as Verdana or Tahoma. In the middle of your report the font changes for a few paragraphs that suggests to me that you cut and pasted something and did not write that section yourself.

That being said; you have a great deal of good information in your report!
Actually those were notes I took while attending an online event. I used 'Notes' on my Mac to write them out...but yes I did copy and paste it from there. I can change it up...I just liked the way it looked.

I put my affiliate links in there because this is most likely going to be a free ebook. I am definitely going to add images as well...but having it be free, I added my links. I will add disclaimer at the bottom.

But I don't know whether I want to have the OTO be just the videos, or a membership site wher eI drip the videos, plus add other materials.

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Originally Posted by khaiez View Post

Hi,

I have looking at your .pdf. First,you must edit and change it into paragraph.
Change the font.
Need the introduction and need table of content.

If you change it into video,it is good idea.But edit the over all .pdf as well.If you're going to WSO, I think you could include both. .pdf & video. Add some value there.

If you give link suggestion of certain website.If that is your affiliate link,make sure you tell reader that is affiliate link.

May success be with you

Hi

I agreed with the above and all the paragraph is not align properly.
I think they is a lot of affiliate link in your .pdf and it is everywhere
in a paragraph.

One look at your book I will know that u are trying to advertise your affiliate
or make some sale. What you need to do is to give your affiliate link a
sentence instead of a direct link.

You can look at my blog link below and u will know what i mean.

My 2 cent advice.

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