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Unread 4th Apr 2018, 10:24 AM   #1
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"$42k in Under 2 Days!!!" Check Out The Most Insane Sales Letter Deal Inside Now!
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Finally! Back for a limited time only...

"J.Ortiz
Pulled Ticket Sales By
$42k
in Under 2 days!"


"I initially hired J.Ortiz to write a few promotions for my fashion line during 2013 NYC fashion week. I've wasted money hiring copywriters in the past but her work proved she's a straight shooter - this year, J.Ortiz pulled ticket sales by $42k in under 2 days! And that was at $8 bucks per ticket, so do the math. The venue met max capacity and we had to send some people away. Since then, I've hired her to write our investor proposals, contracts, promos, content for our Instagram and Facebook pages; I literally had a full calendar for months. Now I can't imagine her not involved in my events during fashion week EVERY YEAR. She's amazing, you'll see. Just don't steal her away or you might have a gang of angry models at your door step."

Naomi Wolf, WOLF NYC IG: @styledbywolf @wolfny_
"The consumer isn't a moron; she is your wife.
You insult her intelligence if you assume
that a mere slogan and a few vapid adjectives
will persuade her to buy anything."
– David Ogilvy


Let's make this super simple. I'm looking for a few eligible people to help write winning content asap. If you hire me to write your sales letter and conversions don't increase, I’ll personally:

Give You TWICE Your Money Back Immediately.


No gimmicks.

Either way you look at it, you’re winning.

That's free money, just for giving me the chance.

And I can 100% back it up with my iron-clad US Army Vet's code of honor. (Yes, I served and I would do it all again, too.)

It's Really Simple.


I mean, isn't that the point of writing copy for you... to put in the very deep work and research needed to build a sales letter that outperforms your current control?

Will you let me take your copy and make it even better?

Tell me you love to WIN like I do!

Listen, it's pretty obvious this is an insanely good deal.

You're pretty smart, so I'll level with you.

You're not going to find a Copywriting offer this sweet. Why? Because the risk is way too huge.

Only an INSANELY awesome copywriter will want to assume this kind of risk.

Imagine the security you'll feel knowing that you're gonna benefit HUGE from this deal.

What will it take for you to consult with me?

Wait.

I'm J.Ortiz, and I got sucked into the land of Copywriting 11 years ago.

Out there in the heart of the Middle East during Operation Iraqi and Enduring Freedom, I did a lot of fiction novel writing. I taught a class for Fiction Writers dying to break into publishing.

One of my students asked me to ghostwrite an information product in the real estate market. I gave it a shot. Returned it in 3 days. Excited, he offered me a gig writing his sales letter copy.

I didn't know shit about writing sales letters haha.


"Copy is a Direct Conversation with the Consumer."
– Shirley Polykoff

He told me to visit the Warrior Forum. Like a golden aura of light that glows the digital library from my laptop screen, I studied the heavyweights in copywriting like: Halbert. Caples. Ogilvy. Schwartz. Sugarmen. Carlton. Kern. Abraham.

I took advice and rewrote the best sales letters by hand. Literally hundreds, hundreds of times. By far the best advice.

After honorably discharging a year later, I placed my focus on web design and copy.

The first sales letter I wrote was a promotion for my web design business in 2011. It converted crazy well the first week, bringing in a $7k deal for a 2 week project with -- get this --- a Victoria Secret Model, in the last place I thought she'd find me:

Craigslist!


With this letter:




Is there a secret formula? I couldn't be the one to tell you. It's really not rocket science.

But the other guys will like to make you think it is.

Rascals.

Now, there is a science to writing copy. Strategies are made based on factors too boring to lay out here for you. And let's face it, if you really wanted to know the bare bones of copy, you'll write it yourself, no problem.

But... I'll let you in on my secret since you're awesome and you "get it".

The art is really in the storytelling.

"When I write an advertisement, I don’t want you to tell me that you find it ‘creative.’
I want you to find it so interesting that you buy the product." – David Ogilvy


Ogilvy, known as the "Father of Advertising", knew the consumer only cares about one thing: "What can you do for me?"

So, lets get right to it.

Niches I will work with:

Financial
Academic (Includes essays, research papers, etc)
SEO
Social Media
Relationship
Self-Help
Home Biz
Survival

This list is not obsolete. Contact me with your project and we'll see if I'm your Copywriter.

Sellers I will NOT work with:

It goes without saying, but if your product/service is demoralization/racist/offensive in any way, we're not the best fit.

Now...

If you're product is BRAND NEW, no sales, still fresh out of the printer, WE MAY still be able to work together.

Otherwise, I'm really fair game. With my guarantee, it includes:
  • REAL TIME TRACKING- See when I'm on the clock! You'll NEVER be in the dark with access to project milestones in progress and/or completed, daily.

  • TEST! TEST! TEST! - I won't leave YOU hanging! Once you're project is done, it's not over. Time to "mold" your copy with what works and improve what isn't.

  • DOUBLE YOUR MONEY BACK - IF your product/service is on track to increase your conversion goal(s) AWESOME, but IF if your numbers go low low low... your money is returned back to you, PLUS double, no questions asked!

LIMITED SPOTS ONLY

I'ma one woman show. You hire me, you get me. Period.

Chef Gordon Ramsey knows there's no chef on the planet who can do hundreds of dishes well.

This is why he cuts the menu nearly in half.

With that being said, content I write for:

Homepages
About pages
Contact pages
Consultation/quote squeeze pages
Webinar pages
SaaS landing pages
Kickstarter sales pages
Upsell/downsell pages
Autoresponder series
Newsletters
Cold emails
Promotional emails
Product launch emails
SEO content
Case studies
Review blog posts
Video script
YouTube sales script
Facebook/Instagram scripts
Amazon listings
Craigslist listing
LinkedIn email copy

Prices are competitive and
start as low as 5 bucks!


Questions? Ready to get started?

We can FaceTime, Skype, have a voice chat, whatever is your preference, please ask.
EMAIL: jortizcopywriting@gmail.com or you can PM here on the forum.


We can discuss quotes and any questions to start this work relationship smooth, smart and solid!

Cheers to your results

J.Ortiz

P.S. You see, you're a very smart person and I won't negate (<---- ooooo I used a million dollar word, breaking the rules! haha) what your gut is telling you to do. So, by all means, let's talk.

P.P.S Payments accepted: Paypal, Cash App, Apple Pay, Venmo

P.P.P.S Samples upon request

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Unread 5th Apr 2018, 04:52 AM   #2
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UPDATE: Only 4 spots left by 04/15/2018. Best price and offer no matter what!
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How much do you charge?

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Originally Posted by snehil kamal View Post

How much do you charge?
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I'm wondering do you have any examples of sales letters you've done available?
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Is this offer still open, or not?
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Originally Posted by GlenH View Post

Is this offer still open, or not?
did you email the poster and ask?

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