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Unread 16th Aug 2012, 11:30 AM   #1
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I beat a billion-dollar copywriter—and when I win you win! 94% of unbeatable copy—[SOLD OUT]
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PROMO SOLD OUT! THANKS FOR THE INTEREST.

Dear Fellow Warrior,

Here’s the story. And I won’t keep you long.

Yes … I did beat a billion-dollar copywriter! And I did it more than once.

He’s a modern day legend in the direct marketing business. But, I can’t tell you his name just yet. Why?

…Because I work for the publishing house where he’s the de facto copy chief. And frankly, I don’t want to tick him off.

Also, we don’t know each other … yet. But, by the time you’re done reading this you’ll know more about me. And I’ll be on my way to learning more about you … your product … AND your sales goals.

The simple truth is this—my sales copy beat a billion dollar copywriter’s control.

In head to head split tests, I beat his control by anywhere from 10% to 25% … or more. And on one test I beat the control by DOUBLE.

This test was so good; one of the Senior Marketing Managers sent me an email saying …

“…Yours killed it, almost double the number of orders!”

And just to be clear on the results. The number of orders was ALMOST double—but the money on those orders was MORE THAN double.

It turned out that not only did I get more people to buy … the people that did buy spent more money!

Of course there’s no guarantee on exactly how much money you’ll be able to make, but I can guarantee you this …

Based on my ridiculously low price for your sales copy … your potential return on investment is ASTRONOMICAL!


Bottom line—my copy wins!

And if we decide to work together … when my copy wins … YOU MAKE MONEY. PERIOD! It’s just that simple.

Let’s face it, the only real reason you need better sales copy is to make more money in your business. And it’s a proven fact that the success of any business comes down to just one thing … positive cash flow!

I know this all too well from real world experience. I’ve run my own businesses for over 10 years.

I’ve had sleepless nights over cash flow issues and profitability. I’ve sweated payroll. Heck, I even went out and got an MBA to make sure I had every tool possible for business success.

So when it comes to generating more sales … and earning more money … I can help you do it with copy that sells!

I have proven results against one of the legendary copywriters—results that show my copy can make money. And when you see what I’m prepared to do for you, you’re going to be shocked.

You see … a good sales letter, depending on the experience of the copywriter, could run you anywhere from $5000 to $15,000 plus royalties.

And a billion-dollar copywriter might charge you as much as $50,000 to $100,000, with royalties of 2%-3% … or more.

I certainly wouldn’t be wrong in charging new clients any of the above. But here’s the shocker …

For FIVE new clients ONLY, I’m offering a complete sales letter for $1000! …With NO royalties and NO additional charges. That’s nearly 94% off the starting rate for a quality, high-end sales letter.

But here’s the catch—only 3 people will get to take advantage of this special offer. There were 5 spots but 2 were filled. And after the 3 remaining spots are gone ... the offer expires.

Why am I doing this? Why am I offering billion-dollar-quality sales copy for ONLY $1000?

Two reasons…

First, I’m ultimately looking for one product or service with significant longevity—one where I might be able to provide long-term client value.

I’ve seen my copy chief do this and he’s made a fortune for his client and himself. This is why I’m LIMITING this offer to only 3 more selected clients.

It gives us both a chance to get to know each with very limited risks.

This way, you get a winning sales letter at the unbelievable price of $1000 … with no royalty payments. And I get paid $1000 to learn more about a great product or service with the potential for a longer-term client relationship.

It’s a win-win!

And now for the second reason …

We just had a baby and I need to buy diapers! No, I’m not kidding. The cost of diapers is outrageous. And it wouldn’t hurt to get the college fund started early.

The point is … I’m ready to burn the midnight oil for YOU … and for my daughter.
And for the record, I WILL be burning the midnight oil for you. I have a day job as a professional copywriter with a large publisher. And yes, the billion-dollar copywriter is the copy chief!

So, you can rest assured I'm not some guy sitting in an internet café throwing up neat graphics and getting you to pay nearly nothing for some auto-copy!

This is the real deal for 3 more awesome people and their product or service! It’s a limited offer so I can give each one of you the professional attention you deserve.

And who knows … you may actually have that next killer product or service … and I want to be there to help it take off!

But you DO need to act fast! The final 3 spots will not be available for long.

So, if …
  • You’re frustrated with your current sales copy
  • Your conversion rates are flagging
  • Your current sales letter is aging or tired
  • You need more revenue from existing sales channels, or …
  • You just need a smart, fresh sales letter to crank up your traffic money machine

Reserve your spot NOW … before it’s gone! To get started, send me the following SIX items for review …
  1. Your current control copy if you have one. Or a competitive sales letter that may resonate with your message.
  2. Two to three sentences on the ONE UNIQUE BENEFIT your product/service provides
  3. Other benefits you deem relevant for review
  4. A Link to your website and any competitor sites I should see
  5. One or two sentences that concisely states how you different yourself from your competitors
  6. Two to three sentences that describe your ideal client

And after I receive all of the above, I will let you know within 24-48 hours if you’ve been selected!

So don’t wait another minute … ONLY 3 MORE REMARKABLE PEOPLE ARE GOING TO BE SELECTED!

And if YOU are one of them, here’s what you can expect …
  • Winning copy that could MORE THAN DOUBLE your sales
  • Prompt delivery on an agreed deadline
  • A one-time payment with no royalty payments
  • The potential for future projects with a winning copywriter, and …
  • One dry, happy baby.

But you have to act now! Send me the SIX items outlined above and you could be quickly on your way to more sales … and more money!

One last thing, I promise every submission will get a full and fair review until the final 3 spots are filled.

And a spot will not be considered filled until there is a written agreement with the newly selected client and payment has been received.

Send in your submission via PM ... or via email to ecrivaindumonde@gmail.com. But don't wait ... do it now before its too late.

To Mutual Success …
Nicholas

P.S. After your submission and selection as a client … I’ll tell you who the billion-dollar copywriter is! And whatever else you want to know about me. By the way … her name is Annabel and she’s 8 weeks old … if you were wondering!

Best,
N

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Unread 16th Aug 2012, 12:47 PM   #2
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Nicholas really shouldn't be doing this.

I work with him closely at one of the largest publishing houses in the business... and I can tell you, most people are not ready for the quality of copy he can produce.

Everyone would rather have boiler-plate copy, generating mediocre results, while paying some flamboyant kid who hasn't ever written a real lick of copy.

Not Nicholas.

He works in the most brutal, aggressive field of the direct response business in existence...

A place where he has to go head to head with living legends - people who have written copy for as long as some of the people reading this have been alive.

And yet, he has beaten one of those living legends in a head-to-head test.

That alone could catapult his fee to at least $10,000 with a 2% royalty - hell, people with less accomplishments charge that!

So frankly, I think it's silly for Nicholas to do this. But regardless, if you're one of the five who get the chance to work with him... well done. You made a smart decision that will pay off in $$.

Also, Nicholas didn't ask me to do this. When he told me about it I just felt compelled to throw in my two cents.

In short: don't be an idiot. If you have a product to sell, it pays to have someone who has played in the big leagues in your corner.

best,

Angel
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Do you have any sample of your writing? What niches you are expert in?
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I am a professional financial copywriter. But I also have a significant background in technology commercialization, telecommunications, eCRM, consumer products/brands, banking, fraud prevention, and others. I used to work as an investment banker so my industry experience is both broad and deep.

The important point is that winning copy is easily summed up in the Bencivenga Persuasion Equation: Urgent Problem +. Unique Promise +. Unquestionable Proof +. User-Friendly Proposition = Persuasion. And the most important of all of these is proof.

So as long as I can get to the "proof" elements around your product or service ... the rest is usually easy. So the more information you can provide in a review. The better I can assess if I can help you make money.

I will PM you with a link to some live copy. As well as additional information on my background.

Cheers,
Nicholas

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Please send me samples of your live copy also -

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Will do.
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Interested pm me rates and live demos

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