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Feed back on my new website, comment, anything

by ProductVendor
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Hi eric here, i've been working on this site for awhile and i want some feed back from the community. Marketing suite
#back #comment #feed #website
  • Profile picture of the author JakeM1
    The site works well and does encourage you to keep reading down the page. It's also got a nice clean design which gels well with the idea behind this website. All the information available is in quite short sections which is perfect for a website.

    In terms of what to improve:

    The first main image is really out of focus. It's a good composition, but being so blurred does not look professional and will drive some people away before they get a chance to scroll down, especially due to how prominently displayed the photo is. If you haven't got a photo you can use, look at stock photography websites and buy one.

    Make the logo a lot bigger if possible. Maybe consider changing its layout so as the logo is longer, with the text over one line instead of three - to better utilise the space you have available.

    All in all though, a nice site!
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    • Profile picture of the author phils917
      I think it looks pretty good BUT I'd say ditch the whole header that scrolls with you thing. It just takes up precious vertical space on my laptop and bothers me, distracts from product, etc.. Aside from that it seems pretty well done.
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      • Profile picture of the author SarahL
        I like it. I think the header could go - even though it gets smaller when you start scrolling. I personally find it a little bit annoying.

        The website is clean and easy to follow. There is enough information but not too much - hate lengthy sales letters. And most importantly sales letter says what you are actually buying. Remember all these sales letters saying what this product is NOT about? I hate those too.
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  • Profile picture of the author Christian Grey
    This site looks good to me, because I view it from mobile. I think it looks more professional if was mobile optimized.
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  • Profile picture of the author ProductVendor
    Thank you for your feedback and your critique. I believe that fee backs are essential to online marketing.

    Improvements


    New header. A new background was added, please due check it out, and critique
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  • Profile picture of the author Ridwan Sugipranyoto
    It's a nice site..,
    but the sales letter formatting is not good,
    too many font style..., and so many blurry headline and image ...,
    why you use image for the sales letter (text) ?
    and i agree with the logo.., make it bigger
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  • Profile picture of the author heinzTheBarron
    I'm very straight ahead when I talk to people, too honest and often it will offend people. But, they know what my stance is and there is no guessing and no bull shit. So I'm gonna be honest with you. The site looks Mickey Mouse. It's looks like someone built it on WIX in a half hour. The text and pics are too large and the red text looks like shit. Maybe that's what you want. Sorry, keep learning and editing.
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  • Profile picture of the author ProductVendor
    Improvement made: Fixed the blurry picture Adjust the background, delete the red text image and typed them instead. Enlarge the logo size to it maximum allowed. Btw i'm looking for a partner with online marketing skills like getting tragic tot the website. Pm me if you're interested.
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