Finally done with the site, i wanna hear you voice/opinion.

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Finally done with the site, a big thanks to those whom critique. Hence i was able to improve the website. Please do check it out i want to hear your voice/opinion. Took me forever.HMM but i think it was worth it.



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  • Profile picture of the author trickshot
    Originally Posted by ProductVendor View Post

    Finally done with the site, a big thanks to those whom critique. Hence i was able to improve the website. Please do check it out i want to hear your voice/opinion. Took me forever.HMM but i think it was worth it.



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    The design and format is very good.

    The only issue I think is the bits where there is a lot of dense text, needs have more buzzwords bolded, highlighted, and in different colours, as it is difficult to read. You've done it on other paragraphs so why not in those sections too.

    Just my 2 cents...
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    • Profile picture of the author ProductVendor
      Originally Posted by trickshot View Post

      The design and format is very good.

      The only issue I think is the bits where there is a lot of dense text, needs have more buzzwords bolded, highlighted, and in different colors, as it is difficult to read. You've done it on other paragraphs so why not in those sections too.

      Just my 2 cents...

      Thanks a lot guys, i was able to improve the site because of the feed back from you warriors. For that i truly appreciated it. Your feed back has been noted thanks a bunch
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  • Profile picture of the author King Manu
    I like it! It's cool, it's clean, slick, look very profession and really caught my attention. But i would really loved to see a video presenting the product. I don't know if all the people are like me, but i am much more directed to pay attention when hearing the presentation of the product rather than reading it.

    Hope this helps, cheers !
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  • Profile picture of the author Josh Mayers
    Originally Posted by ProductVendor View Post

    Finally done with the site, a big thanks to those whom critique. Hence i was able to improve the website. Please do check it out i want to hear your voice/opinion. Took me forever.HMM but i think it was worth it.



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    Hey ProductVendor

    This is a very well put together site!

    I really like the middle of it, and how you can scroll down through the content, while the background image stays put.

    Definitely a very unique website :-)

    -Josh
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  • Profile picture of the author ZoroBlaze
    I like it. I think that it has alot of the elements of a good sales page although sales pages tend to have a video on them as well(People like this). Also to be honest when I started reading from the top I wasn't really sure what you were trying to get at until I saw your product below and then I was like... ok now I get it.

    Also you need to focus on ONE call to action and that is to BUY your product. Honestly You have two possible actions the BUY action and the SUBSCRIBE for help. What should I do as a potential buyer? And how am I going to subscribe after I have bought your product and I am lead away from your sales page?

    Just things that I noticed. Overall I think your sales page looks unique with a good feel to it.
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  • Profile picture of the author ibugu
    It took a long time to load, but not very long to reload.
    I like the centered text style.
    The Here Is The Story section is a manifesto that should be broken down.
    An old MLM saying went something like this:
    When 3 sentences have come and went, indent.
    Poor English, maybe poor writing, but inviting to the eye.
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    • Profile picture of the author ProductVendor
      Originally Posted by ibugu View Post

      It took a long time to load, but not very long to reload.
      I like the centered text style.
      The Here Is The Story section is a manifesto that should be broken down.
      An old MLM saying went something like this:
      When 3 sentences have come and went, indent.
      Poor English, maybe poor writing, but inviting to the eye.
      Thanks, hence i'm not a foreigner my writing skills is really bad, but thanks for the critique i'll work on fixing it.

      And how about the introduction video any feed back on that ?.
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  • Profile picture of the author jackie2011ws
    Looks great sales page.
    You can considering add time constraint or limited copies... something like that.
    as well as limited bonus for extra conversion.
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  • Profile picture of the author Member8200
    Originally Posted by ProductVendor View Post

    Finally done with the site, a big thanks to those whom critique. Hence i was able to improve the website. Please do check it out i want to hear your voice/opinion. Took me forever.HMM but i think it was worth it.



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    I like it! It looks very professional, simple, and it really caught my attention. Although it takes a few seconds to load but not that long. You nailed it. Nicely done.

    Best of luck.
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