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Please review my new site

by jamesi
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I've just built a new website: DentalWebsiteDesign.com. I would like any feedback on the style, structure or lead gen boxes please!

I've also just secured a partnership with a medical website designer for 20% commission on every successful lead. I'm new to the lead gen field, so what is the most effective way of generating leads?

Is it by simply using SEO to improve the site naturally, or would you advertise on AdWord, Facebook etc?
#review #site
  • Profile picture of the author georgeweb13
    Nice and modern design!
    Really good work!
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  • Profile picture of the author DWaters
    The first two things I notice - there is no picture, some type of professional looking dentist office would make someone think "hey I could have a site that looks that nice". Also I think the opt-in box has too many fields. It is often thought that the fewer fields that are needed to be filled out will increase responses. Are phone, zip, website URL all really needed? There may accutally be a dentist looking to have a site who does not have a URL. Personally I would never give out my phone.

    Also when I view it on my browser the main content text is below the fold. If I do not scroll down looking for I I will never start to read it. The explantion content is good but it has to be noticable.

    Those are my thoughts. Best of luck
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  • Profile picture of the author jamesi
    Thanks, that's interesting to know. I may make the main slider area & opt-in box smaller to make sure the text is visible above the fold.
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  • Profile picture of the author Ron Killian
    I think it looks nice as well, but as already mentioned, it's a little blah. Think maybe pictures of your self or your team could build trust as well.

    Also, agree, the optin box is asking for quite a bit of information. But don't know if you really have much choice, it's all pretty much required information for this kind of project. Just might not covert well, but leads should be better. And if your selling leads or getting commissions, you'll probably need all that information to pass it on anyways.

    Although, it would hurt to test different titles for the optin box. "Get A Free Website Analysis" might not work as well as other copy. You should also test the optin button, Send Your Request is not a very strong or compelling call to action.

    Just my thoughts
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  • Profile picture of the author sunoy14
    Looks good and the information provided is detailed. You should get a signature on forums like this to increase visibility of your services
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    • Profile picture of the author Enfusia
      The design looks good.

      Here are a few things.

      1. You need a more powerful offer. That's not enticing at all. What's your big promise? Pit it up there to get opt ins.

      2. If you want to get local leads sure you can do SEO but your be there a while and will invest a lot with little return for a bit.

      You can location target paid ads such as face book, some PPV's, and of course videos on YouTube.

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