UPDATE: New site redone~!

by TomVa
10 replies
  • WEB DESIGN
  • |
Hey folks, first want to thank you all from the bottom of my heart for all the help you have given me, With this new design I think it will work out a whole lot better. I know I have some more work to be done on it, touch up's a/b testing etc.

but NOW please take another look at https://hpthost.com and let me know what you think. Thank you all so much once again.
TOM
#redone #site #update
  • Profile picture of the author SchoolofKA
    It looks fine. I just don't get what the medieval style logo has to do with anything. I would probably design a logo which fits the rest of the site more.
    Signature
    School of Kick A** | Make Money Like a Hustler [COMING SOON!]
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[9934958].message }}
    • Profile picture of the author TomVa
      Originally Posted by SchoolofKA View Post

      It looks fine. I just don't get what the medieval style logo has to do with anything. I would probably design a logo which fits the rest of the site more.
      Was testing it, but to be honest I liked it lol but I see your point.
      Signature

      Do you need stable WEBHOSTING? https://hpthost.com HEY folks, for a limited time get the first month of service For only $0.01 That's 1 cents. At checkout use coupon code 1cent. This is only for web hosting, and only applies to the monthly services.

      {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[9935021].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author UMS
    I didn't see the old version, so these comments are based on seeing your site for the first time.

    1. The logo looks like it belongs in an Elizabethan Romance novel.

    2. While the site is responsive, the image with the globe isn't and takes up almost the entire display on small screens.
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[9935354].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author magic
    Hey Tom!

    I subscribe to what the previous warriors said about the logo. You need to give it a more technical/modern look.

    Also, on my 1900px wide screen, the website is all over the place (as you can see in the attached screen shot). Maybe you should consider adding a max-width of 1200px to the main container.

    The logos/images on the site look like they are taken from different sources and do not vibe together.

    At the bottom, your address is made as a bullet list and it does not look OK.
    Signature

    Get Your Own Covers That Sell Like Mad:
    http://www.AbsoluteCovers.com

    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[9936411].message }}
    • Profile picture of the author TomVa
      Originally Posted by magic View Post

      Hey Tom!

      I subscribe to what the previous warriors said about the logo. You need to give it a more technical/modern look.

      Also, on my 1900px wide screen, the website is all over the place (as you can see in the attached screen shot). Maybe you should consider adding a max-width of 1200px to the main container.

      The logos/images on the site look like they are taken from different sources and do not vibe together.

      At the bottom, your address is made as a bullet list and it does not look OK.
      For some reason it wont open

      I redid my logo, now going to work the other things you all have suggested thanks so much folks. I did get two new sales, with the last design I GOT NOTHING!
      Signature

      Do you need stable WEBHOSTING? https://hpthost.com HEY folks, for a limited time get the first month of service For only $0.01 That's 1 cents. At checkout use coupon code 1cent. This is only for web hosting, and only applies to the monthly services.

      {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[9938953].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author ColorVila
    Actually I don't think it is good enough. Why not use WordPress? You can find lots of better free themes on WP's official site.
    Signature
    PREMIUM WORDPRESS THEMES ON A BARGAIN: COLORVILA.com (70+ themes total for $58)
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[9936445].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author TomVa
    Is there anyone else out here that can view my new look and feel? If you see something that should be changed please let me know. I really do thank each and everyone that has helped me. Thank you
    TOM
    Signature

    Do you need stable WEBHOSTING? https://hpthost.com HEY folks, for a limited time get the first month of service For only $0.01 That's 1 cents. At checkout use coupon code 1cent. This is only for web hosting, and only applies to the monthly services.

    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[9942615].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author clumsy
    Please proofread. I can't stress enough how unprofessional spelling and grammar mistakes look on a website that is trying to sell something...
    Just by looking at it breafly I was able to find 2 spelling mistakes.

    As for desing, it's getting thre but still needs more work. It looks a bit odd on an iPad mini. The top menu doesn't all fit on a single line.
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[9943461].message }}
    • Profile picture of the author TomVa
      Originally Posted by clumsy View Post

      Please proofread. I can't stress enough how unprofessional spelling and grammar mistakes look on a website that is trying to sell something...
      Just by looking at it breafly I was able to find 2 spelling mistakes.

      As for desing, it's getting thre but still needs more work. It looks a bit odd on an iPad mini. The top menu doesn't all fit on a single line.

      WOW REALLY? dang it, ok thanks for letting me know, can you tell me which words were misspelled? Awe shoot nm I know which ones they are.. grr Thanks for the heads up.
      Signature

      Do you need stable WEBHOSTING? https://hpthost.com HEY folks, for a limited time get the first month of service For only $0.01 That's 1 cents. At checkout use coupon code 1cent. This is only for web hosting, and only applies to the monthly services.

      {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[9944825].message }}
    • Profile picture of the author TomVa
      Originally Posted by clumsy View Post

      Please proofread. I can't stress enough how unprofessional spelling and grammar mistakes look on a website that is trying to sell something...
      Just by looking at it breafly I was able to find 2 spelling mistakes.

      As for desing, it's getting thre but still needs more work. It looks a bit odd on an iPad mini. The top menu doesn't all fit on a single line.

      Hey I Think I fixed the ipad mini iPad Mini Website Simulator

      please take a look with it https://hpthost.com let me know if it is fixed on yours as well sir.
      Signature

      Do you need stable WEBHOSTING? https://hpthost.com HEY folks, for a limited time get the first month of service For only $0.01 That's 1 cents. At checkout use coupon code 1cent. This is only for web hosting, and only applies to the monthly services.

      {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[9944856].message }}

Trending Topics