my first squeeze page help

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As a beginner i started to promote cdkeys and game codes, it has
been 3 months since i started and earned 350 EUR.
I decided to invest little bit money for a website
i have done my page(for free on wix) u can visit it here smitegems
before i add .com
I wanted to you warriors tell me what you think before i publish it
and any help for driving traffic, my page promote sales in-game Gold (Smite , gems , if anyone who know the game)
(its like any free-game that sell "gold" for real money, i promote that gold)

Thanks very much warriors!
#page #squeeze
  • Profile picture of the author JenniferGiacoppo
    I think it is a good beginning. I would make the Gems 4 kids at least twice the size if you can. I would also change the new price from green to white (it's better visually)...sort of like the sold out sign...red and white looks great. From a marketers point of view people see these as sale signs and makes people want to buy....so if you can change it to a sale tag of some kind with red and white would be good.There is one thing I was confused about. you save 15% 25% every purchase......which is it? you need to separarte these. Other than that you are doing a great job and good for you for getting started. To drive traffic you might want to start a blog on how you created your site and blog every week. Then you can create a buzz about your site....you must be consistent with it though....keep going don't stop,,,,Jennifer
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    • Profile picture of the author littletoot
      Originally Posted by JenniferGiacoppo View Post

      I think it is a good beginning. I would make the Gems 4 kids at least twice the size if you can. I would also change the new price from green to white (it's better visually)...sort of like the sold out sign...red and white looks great. From a marketers point of view people see these as sale signs and makes people want to buy....so if you can change it to a sale tag of some kind with red and white would be good.There is one thing I was confused about. you save 15% 25% every purchase......which is it? you need to separarte these. Other than that you are doing a great job and good for you for getting started. To drive traffic you might want to start a blog on how you created your site and blog every week. Then you can create a buzz about your site....you must be consistent with it though....keep going don't stop,,,,Jennifer
      thanks for your comment, u right about the gems4kids size
      ill replace it with my own nice logo ill make later, and about 15% 25%
      its cheaper then the original gems store 15% to 25%
      about the traffic i think it will be hard to get traffic for this kind page
      because its an sales page so i think ill try lilbit with ads first all tips are welcome
      and of course ill keep research
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  • Profile picture of the author heruma
    Hi littletoot,

    First of all, kill the adobe flash. It makes your site slow. I do not think you need it, or is it a must for wix site?
    Second, I do not know if this is just my browsers (i use firefox and chrome) or everyone else too.
    Your products are below the fold, it means visitors have to scroll down to see what this is about.

    Third, "You Save 15% 25% every purchase" is too small.
    It has to be above the fold and BIG!!
    This is your selling point right?
    My opinion is put a "SAVE 15%" OR "SAVE 25%" ribbons Above the price, or below the price and above the shopping cart.

    Do you track how many visitors and what is your conversion rate?

    As for traffic :
    1. Buy banner ads in games forums. (Require Money)
    2. Join forums or facebook groups and be active in it, share tips and tricks. (Require time)
    3. Find out what social media gamers use, and leverage it.

    Best Regards,

    Heru Muskita
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  • Profile picture of the author YourBizAid
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    I think you should invest $10 in a domain and $6/mo in hosting. It will make you more money than the free site you're currently using.

    Also invest in a good and professional Squeeze page service to enable you build your list fast.
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    • Profile picture of the author littletoot
      Originally Posted by YourBizAid View Post

      I think you should invest $10 in a domain and $6/mo in hosting. It will make you more money than the free site you're currently using.

      Also invest in a good and professional Squeeze page service to enable you build your list fast.
      did u read the whole post?
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  • Your page misses focus. Simplicity can take your site to another level altogether. There are too many elements on your page which you could do away with.

    I don't see a singular CTA anywhere, and that's the most important thing. It should stand out ( use a different color and an action verb as microcopy?
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  • Profile picture of the author AntonioSeegars1
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    • Profile picture of the author littletoot
      Originally Posted by AntonioSeegars1 View Post

      Since your site is just a squeeze page, I think it looks nice. I think you could get a lot of organic traffic to your site if you made it an authority on everything Smite. I did a basic Google search, and their don't seem to be any independent authority sites on it. I found a low content wiki page, and a few weak ranking forums, but no authority sites.
      what is authority website?
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  • Profile picture of the author littletoot
    what is authority website?
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