6 {{ upvoteCount | shortNum }}
6 {{ upvoteCount | shortNum }}

Help Critque My Squeeze Page

by jompert
4 replies
  • WEB DESIGN
    • |
Hello Warriors,

I just change the design the squeeze page of my web consulting video course. I will appreciate if you can spare me a few minutes to review the page.

This is the landing page

Thanks for your time.
#critque #landing #page #review #squeeze
  • Profile picture of the author littletoot
    Originally Posted by jompert View Post

    Hello Warriors,

    I just change the design the squeeze page of my web consulting video course. I will appreciate if you can spare me a few minutes to review the page.

    This is the landing page

    Thanks for your time.
    the design are very nice!
    but the idea ..sorry but their so many of this
    0/10
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[9946544].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author Ron Killian
    Of course this needs to be in test mode. You could get 100 opinions, but only testing will tell the truth.

    Big problem I see right off the bat, your headline. So blah, not compelling. It's more like a statement, than something to draw people in to read more. This of course is where you need to grab them, to make them want to read more. It could be your only chance before they leave your page.

    Sorry, but I am finding it odd that "life skills" are mentioned. What does that have to do with web consulting. Just don't make sense.

    Over all, just need to beef up the copy. I am not copywriter, but "Highlights" is not compelling, for example.

    Of course it should all be about what they will get from your product. What's in if for them. Benefits, not features. Sure you know that.
    Signature
    PLR Affiliate Program Has Launched! Easily Promote Over 5,000 PLR and MRR Products.

    Largest Selection of PLR Articles on the Planet! PLR Ebooks, PLR Video, PLR Websites and more with Private Label Rights
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[9947726].message }}
    • Profile picture of the author DanielBlue
      I did not read the copy. It looks nice but loads very slow.

      And the button "click to register now" has to be above the fold.
      {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[9951651].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author Justin Tyme
    You need a call to action above the fold. The copy could definitely be a little stronger.

    But testing is the only way to see what's going to work for you. The opinions of others aren't what's going to help you increase the conversion, and solid and raw testing data will.
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[9951668].message }}

Trending Topics