Please Review My Startup Site | Designsation [dot] com

20 replies
  • WEB DESIGN
  • |
Hi every one, nice to meet you, and thanks for checking out my post.

I would really appreciate some feedback on my startup site.

located at designsation[dot]com

please give me your feedback about my design, navigation, image, icon, etc.

thanks
#designsation #dot #review #site #startup
  • Profile picture of the author FreeMeal
    I think it looks nice, but the text is so thin, I can barely read it. I had to squint. I'm using a retina screen so i don't know if that affects it.

    Some of the English usage looks a little bit off too.
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[9967168].message }}
    • Profile picture of the author arwanfiles
      Originally Posted by FreeMeal View Post

      I think it looks nice, but the text is so thin, I can barely read it. I had to squint. I'm using a retina screen so i don't know if that affects it.

      Some of the English usage looks a little bit off too.
      Thanks for your feedback.
      Yeah, I need to change used font.

      and, I am so sorry, my english was bad.
      {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[9969941].message }}
      • Profile picture of the author FreeMeal
        Originally Posted by arwanfiles View Post

        Thanks for your feedback.
        Yeah, I need to change used font.

        and, I am so sorry, my english was bad.
        No need to apologise mate
        {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[9971254].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author nRehman
    Site looks great but fonts specially used over dark background looks difficult to read, although your site also feels there is someone creative behind but still missing something you have in your mind to do next. Anyway, as a digital designer will you also look at Get Your Ex Back How To and tell me some positive and negative points according to your experience.
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[9967512].message }}
    • Profile picture of the author arwanfiles
      Originally Posted by nRehman View Post

      Site looks great but fonts specially used over dark background looks difficult to read, although your site also feels there is someone creative behind but still missing something you have in your mind to do next. Anyway, as a digital designer will you also look at Get Your Ex Back How To and tell me some positive and negative points according to your experience.
      Thank for your feedback
      {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[9969943].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author JaMoke
    The clean, modern feel looks good. The text on the white background is to light, it needs to be darker.

    I would also say maybe some more content, like an about us section, it would Make it feel more real.
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[9967951].message }}
    • Profile picture of the author arwanfiles
      Originally Posted by JaMoke View Post

      The clean, modern feel looks good. The text on the white background is to light, it needs to be darker.

      I would also say maybe some more content, like an about us section, it would Make it feel more real.
      Thanks for feedback.
      I will improve that soon.
      {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[9969946].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author zeyfah
    Indonesian? too much whites and not so great font choice. sakit mata ngeliatnya
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[9967985].message }}
    • Profile picture of the author arwanfiles
      Originally Posted by zeyfah View Post

      Indonesian? too much whites and not so great font choice. sakit mata ngeliatnya
      Terimakasih sarannya kakaaa...
      Saya akan memperbaikinya segera.
      {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[9969948].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author princy91
    The website looks too much simple, you need to change the font color and type,the white background color is very catchy to eyes, also the content in the website is very less, you need to add some more content to website.
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[9968287].message }}
    • Profile picture of the author arwanfiles
      Originally Posted by princy91 View Post

      The website looks too much simple, you need to change the font color and type,the white background color is very catchy to eyes, also the content in the website is very less, you need to add some more content to website.
      Helpful feedback.
      thanks in advance.
      {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[9969951].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author chillheart
    Okay, that font choice is horrible for readability.

    HORRIBLE.

    Please change it.

    Also, under the title and "UI/UX Designer", you don't need to Make Every Word Title Case <- like that. It too is also bad for readability.


    P.S. WHO do you mean when you keep saying "We"? Show your handsome selves. Make an About Us page. Link to a blog. Something. But right now it's a skeleton site.
    Signature
    Chillin' hard...
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[9969920].message }}
    • Profile picture of the author arwanfiles
      Originally Posted by chillheart View Post

      Okay, that font choice is horrible for readability.

      HORRIBLE.

      Please change it.

      Also, under the title and "UI/UX Designer", you don't need to Make Every Word Title Case <- like that. It too is also bad for readability.


      P.S. WHO do you mean when you keep saying "We"? Show your handsome selves. Make an About Us page. Link to a blog. Something. But right now it's a skeleton site.
      Thanks for your feedback and correction to my writing.

      Yeah, I am still preparing blog and portfolio.
      {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[9969953].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author blackbodhisattva
    Hey Arwan - nice and clean design but it would be nice to see some hints of your previous works on the landing page.
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[9969924].message }}
    • Profile picture of the author arwanfiles
      Originally Posted by blackbodhisattva View Post

      Hey Arwan - nice and clean design but it would be nice to see some hints of your previous works on the landing page.
      Thanks in advance.
      I'll upload my portfolio soon
      {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[9969955].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author Startup10
    Hello, some examples on your site of the work you have already done should help.
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[9970021].message }}
    • Profile picture of the author arwanfiles
      Originally Posted by Startup10 View Post

      Hello, some examples on your site of the work you have already done should help.
      Yeah, I am currently looking for suitable font.
      {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[9970027].message }}
      • Profile picture of the author chillheart
        Originally Posted by arwanfiles View Post

        Yeah, I am currently looking for suitable font.
        I'm no Font Fu master, but try a clean sans serif font for a site on web design.

        You can Google web design font and see what you like.

        Here's one I found: Top 10 Fonts Web Designers Love
        Signature
        Chillin' hard...
        {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[9971665].message }}
        • Profile picture of the author arwanfiles
          I have changed my font on light background.

          thanks all
          {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[9977659].message }}
          • Profile picture of the author chillheart
            Originally Posted by arwanfiles View Post

            I have changed my font on light background.

            arwanfiles,

            The font at the top (and bottom) of the page looks great.

            The middle of the page? Not so great.

            Please look at the attachment I've made for you in this post. It's the exact look I'm getting in my web browser.

            Beyond pointing this out, I can't help you any further...

            Hope you can sort this out soon.
            Signature
            Chillin' hard...
            {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[9978962].message }}

Trending Topics