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Review my landing/squeeze page

by Nicheguybob
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Just wanting some feedback on my landing page,

I think there are some things I could change or improve

What do you guys think?

http://www.postpregnancydiets.com/
#landing or squeeze #page #review
  • Profile picture of the author savidge4
    Would say for the most part a train wreck. sorry

    the white space on the top of the page? that has to go.

    this text " Are you struggling to lose that excess baby weight prior to giving... " uh really?

    the color transition from the soft brown ( which I would consider a good color choice ) to the harsh green is way off target. Yes I understand the concept of contrast. BUT you need to learn the color concept of tint and shade. You can use the green that's fine, but I would suggest a tint of green lighter on the color scale.

    If you were to keep the image where it is. place your "headline" where a headline belongs, and then directly below to the image introduce the bullet points. then next to introduce the optin.. that might work better for you.

    --- HEADLINE ---
    optin | image and bullets

    The social indicators at 0 are not helping you.. remove them

    the link to the blog can be introduced in the thank you page.. but right now it is what I would call a "traffic bleed" you are giving an option other than opting in.. and the question is why?

    Originally Posted by Nicheguybob View Post

    Just wanting some feedback on my landing page,

    I think there are some things I could change or improve

    What do you guys think?

    http://www.postpregnancydiets.com/
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    • Profile picture of the author monkeyfunky
      I'd have to agree with Savidge4.

      Some other points:

      In your second section you are using a background image that is 1600 pixels wide. Why? You can achieve the same effect using an image that is 10 pixels wide and repeating it horizontally. Doesn't it come to the same thing? Actually no. Right now you have it set to not repeat and my monitor is 1680 pixels (and probably these days most people have widescreens) so I see 1600 pixels of that pleasant soft brownish color then a sudden and horrible cut off to white that doesn't belong. It looks like an amateur made this.

      Your page looks like a scam. When I visit your page it looks like you are either trying to harvest emails or something more malicious.

      I couldn't find a single Heading tag. It's all divs. The page is not structured well at all.

      I like the green checkmarks, but the text above that the green text doesn't belong and the change in font size is distracting. Further it's not like this is paper so why use the ampersand instead of using the word and.

      When I click on your blog link my company firewall denies my request saying it's phishing.
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  • Profile picture of the author topnichewebsites
    Might want to consider hiring someone for the job and give it an expert look

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