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Honest review needed

by aligator510
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Hello Warriors!
I just finished (for the moment ) my new "Money Online Key's" site, "Affiliate marketing resources, articles and advice".
I wil be glad to hear from you any honest review or advice.
moneyonlinekey.com

Thanks in advance
#honest #needed #review
  • Profile picture of the author ChrisNosal
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    Originally Posted by aligator510 View Post

    Hello Warriors!
    I just finished (for the moment ) my new "Money Online Key's" site, "Affiliate marketing resources, articles and advice".
    I wil be glad to hear from you any honest review or advice.
    moneyonlinekey.com

    Thanks in advance
    This website is very ambitious, and definitely it has a lot to offer.

    The one thing I could say it it is to organize it and and give it some hierarchy and structure.

    When I land on this page my brain is all over the place, it's looking for something to focus on, and struggling to take everything in, because it looks like everything was slapped onto one page.

    See if you can create things in more submenus, figure out what the top five things that 75% to 90% of your customers would be looking for, and focus on placing those things on the front page, so that when a person lands on your site they find exactly what they're looking for.

    You've got make money online on the same page right next to dating advice.

    This website is good, and definitely ambitious, and it's almost there-it just needs a little bit of focus.

    And to put this in context, no matter how good you get, there's always going to be something to improve.

    This page does a lot more right than it does wrong, there's just a few things you could do to improve it.

    Check out the Interface on my website, or even better for something with so much content check out Apple's website, and notice how it is an organize hierarchy, we are presented with an organized set of options to find exactly what you're looking for, and everything else gets out-of-the-way.
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    • Profile picture of the author bobafett999
      I will be honest here. In general I do not like sites that promote lazy way to make money. Most of them are scams. I also do not like websites that have too many flashing banner ads.

      And finally, I do not like websites that uses cookies.
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      • Profile picture of the author boringman
        I didn't spend a lot of time there, but the first thing I notice is that your main page has no clear and obvious mission or objective. I don't know what your message is. I think that should be clear, in the forefront. People should know right away what you offer and why they're there. I know I can improve this on my own site. WHAT IS YOUR MISSION? And will your visitors know?
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        • Profile picture of the author ChrisNosal
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          Originally Posted by boringman View Post

          I didn't spend a lot of time there, but the first thing I notice is that your main page has no clear and obvious mission or objective. I don't know what your message is. I think that should be clear, in the forefront. People should know right away what you offer and why they're there. I know I can improve this on my own site. WHAT IS YOUR MISSION? And will your visitors know?
          What this site says is you're thinking, "me! me! me! I don't care about quality, or making a difference, just give me what I want (money)"

          There's no passion, spirit, purpose, or care for quality, and, thus, no substance - all of which people can sense the INSTANT they land on your page.

          If you cared your articles would've been very carefully chosen to what would help your users, and give them the best possible experience on your site.
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        • Profile picture of the author aligator510
          Originally Posted by boringman View Post

          I didn't spend a lot of time there, but the first thing I notice is that your main page has no clear and obvious mission or objective. I don't know what your message is. I think that should be clear, in the forefront. People should know right away what you offer and why they're there. I know I can improve this on my own site. WHAT IS YOUR MISSION? And will your visitors know?
          In the head of every page you can find the main objective of the site. Anyway thanks for sharing your impressions!
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      • Profile picture of the author aligator510
        Originally Posted by bobafett999 View Post

        I will be honest here. In general I do not like sites that promote lazy way to make money. Most of them are scams. I also do not like websites that have too many flashing banner ads.

        And finally, I do not like websites that uses cookies.
        Cookies fixed now. You're right!
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  • Profile picture of the author johnben1444
    I will opt for a completely different theme and let it have a home page
    and separate blog.
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  • Profile picture of the author chaotic squid
    Site looks plain, boring, and congested.

    Your homepage has a menu, 2nd menu, left sidebar, center content, and then a right sidebar. Not to mention the site is boxed, so everything is squished in the middle.

    No branding, social media links, or credibility. Also, your stock photos are very generic.

    Sorry but your site is extremely boring and if I were a visitor, I'd leave within the first 3 seconds.
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  • Profile picture of the author pennya08
    It's a good starting point. Maybe if you tighten it up a bit an make it more personal to the visitor maybe that would help. Not to hip on the header graphic maybe there's something else you can do to make it pop?
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  • Profile picture of the author hashila
    too much adds on the page may be harmful to your site's user-friendliness
    and why did you choose that domain for affiliate marketing guide website.
    you must add a favicon, the favicon that you used is from genesis theme.
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  • Profile picture of the author IMHound
    I agree with everyone and will add..

    You can use a better lead capture system.
    Looks like you have a lot of content available, so why not create a quality affiliate marketing report to motivate your visitors to opt in?

    Kill the banner ads, consider text ads before and/or after article body. Test your placement for best response.

    Mobile wise - your site is responsive. So that's good.
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    • Profile picture of the author aligator510
      Originally Posted by IMHound View Post

      I agree with everyone and will add..

      You can use a better lead capture system.
      Looks like you have a lot of content available, so why not create a quality affiliate marketing report to motivate your visitors to opt in?

      Kill the banner ads, consider text ads before and/or after article body. Test your placement for best response.

      Mobile wise - your site is responsive. So that's good.
      Thank you for your opt in idea. I will work on it.
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  • Profile picture of the author TygraOlympia
    I am looking at the site right now and it just feels very spammy. Too many articles popping up on the front page. I see ads and ambiguous topics. Overall, it's not the worst site i've seen, but it definitely could use some decluttering!
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