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Please critique my first landing page

by Dave O
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I've spent the last few hours working on my first landing page.

I've chosen to promote a dating site for golfers.

https://dorozco.leadpages.net/golf-mates-3/

It took me a long time to find a template that I thought would work. Apparently Leadpages isn't as flexible as I thought it was.

My biggest gripe so far is that the main image is so small. I can't figure out how to make it bigger. I downloaded the raw html and played around with a couple settings but no joy.

Thanks folks,

dave
#critique #landing #page
  • Profile picture of the author hometutor
    Get your own domain from namescheap, then redirect it to this one or preferably design your own webpage or forum.

    Rick
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    • Profile picture of the author Dave O
      Originally Posted by hometutor View Post

      Get your own domain from namescheap, then redirect it to this one or preferably design your own webpage or forum.

      Rick
      Thank you for looking however I do have my own hosting and domain. Just using the Leadpages page to test.
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      • Profile picture of the author hometutor
        Originally Posted by Dave O View Post

        Thank you for looking however I do have my own hosting and domain. Just using the Leadpages page to test.
        Then add a redirect and frame. Redirect on top or else it won't work (ask me how I know ) Add tracking on the page so you can track where people hit the page. That way if you switch lead generation pages all you have to change is two lines in one redirect page and frame instead of going everywhere you posted the lead generation link.

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  • Profile picture of the author Dave O
    Played with the fonts and had to jerry rig the title to get it centered.
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  • Profile picture of the author Sneakers26
    Honestly I think it is a bit too wordy. I'd ditch the second and third sentences. They really just repeat what you said in the first sentence. The bullet points underneath spell it all out. I like the logo.
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  • Profile picture of the author Dave O
    For some reason my offer link takes me to some sort of app offer page when using my iPhone.
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  • Profile picture of the author Slade556
    I think it looks nice, although a bit too much text, like someone already mentioned.
    And, yes, do use your own domain and hosting! It's always a good idea not to rely on something that's not really yours.
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