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Sales Page Design/Critique?

by ahakimi
3 replies
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Hi all,

Just looking for some feedback on my Sales Page.

Both copy, design, offer, etc. Feedback on all of it would be even more highly appreciated.

It's right here

Thanks!

PS. I think design definitely needs work, but I'm kinda having trouble finding a designer who is great at marketing as well (both design and marketing aspect).
#design or critique #page #sales
  • Profile picture of the author alvinchua91
    Wow there's way too many words without any breaks (in the form of images etc).

    Way too much information on one page, you might want to break it up into several pages. (You can just check out Mike Chang's page since that guy's spent a whole hell lot of money on conversion optimization)
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  • Profile picture of the author profitmentor2015
    Agree with the above. Maybe cut it off so the top black section is the 'home' page and then add links to break the other information down into more readable sections.

    At the moment it seems too text heavy and I personally would have given up not very far down.

    These two points may seem picky so apologies in advance.

    But the t part of your logo could do with looking more like a t. The rest of the logo text is in capital letters so not sure why the t is lowercase?

    Another minor point is having one word on a line isn't very good from a design point of view. For example on the top part. 'Missing.' and 'Everything.' are sitting on there own line. Drop some of the other text down so it's like this:

    Think Powerlifting and Bodybuilding are
    Mutually Exclusive? Buddy, you don't
    know what you're missing.
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  • Profile picture of the author antarastudio
    Hi, iam kinda new to comment. Just my opinion,

    Website
    Should be more userfriendly as such sticky header

    Content
    Too many words, can make people boring even they interest with your product, i suggest to create something more easy to read such as accordion, devide by section so visitor could read things they want to know most first.

    Hope this can help you a little.
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