I would love some feedback for my website

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Heya,
I have designed my website not a long time ago and would like to know what people think about it. Constructive feedback would be very welcome!
www.dotentrepreneurs.com

I am also not sure about the domain name chosen here...
#feedback #love #website
  • Profile picture of the author nomaanali
    Your website is very well designed but just one question. Is it responsive on all devices?
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    • Profile picture of the author dotentrepreneurs
      Thanks for the feedback - glad you like it.
      It is mobile responsive even if sometimes I can see some glitch in the layout, I have tested it with google mobile checker and it is all green
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  • Profile picture of the author umadjawed
    dear it is not a complete responsive when you re-sizing the page why the horizontal scrolling shows check it out this is against the responsive standard
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  • Profile picture of the author leilani
    I took a look at the page by laptop and it looks really good. Love your layout.

    However, I checked on my iphone and it is not mobile friendly. Your opt in is stationery on the site and you FB, Twitter, thinga-ma-jigs are too. There is only a sliver where the rest of page scrolls up and down making it hard to read. Just thought I'd let you know.

    Again, love it by laptop.

    Leilani
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  • Profile picture of the author doublelq
    There's a LOT going on on your front page. I have no clue where to look.

    Technical Issues
    First, just a couple technical issues, not sure if you can custom code but the appsumo bar at the top is covering your logo, which is vital. If you can make it sit on top that might be better.
    The share icons on the right - preserve those for your blog only, it's distracting to the eye because that's the only thing with lots of color besides your yellow buttons.
    Comment box below, you have it on every page. Turn it off on your main pages and leave only for your blog or where necessary. Mobile responsiveness, this is important, it needs help in this area.

    The Journey
    You want people to enter on your site and stay long enough to be engaged and eventually opt in right? Give the visitor a focal point, focus on a main thing, then a few small things to empower that main thing. What do you want me to do when I first come to this page? Create a journey for your visitor. You want me to learn about the lifestyle and results of earning more and working less right? That's your main focus.

    Your Copy
    So let's focus on the copy on that first page to focus precisely on why it's not just about the money.
    Another question, you have an about me below but I don't get the feeling that you are the expert when I first open this. That's another thing you will want to think about. Do you want to come off as the expert on helping entrepreneurs in this realm? Or is this just an educational place? That's really important, it's one or the other or a good combination

    If you want to be the expert authority which I suggest you do, and from what I see on your "Start Here" page, you do, then make sure they see you in the beginning, OWN it!
    Be intentional about the copy on your front page. Get a really great image of yourself for the main section. Or a better image than the one that is cut off. Show them the importance of your mission.

    Call to Actions
    You need to have these on every page, preferably at the bottom. Give them a reason to want to read your blog, then in the blog give them a reason to opt in. So if you have several free things, offer each on every blog post that follows on the subject. Example: Blog post about Financial Freedom - CTA (Get My free Checklist on Finance... )

    Here are some sites you want to look at that will be helpful:
    Marie Forleo
    Live Your Message
    Chalene Johnson

    This is a recent client of mine I designed his journey, gave him a lot of great advice and we are still working to improve it. After he launched, he made 3 huge sales in his industry in the last week:
    Max Money Map

    I hope that helps, If you need designer and some help to speed up the process, PM me, I'd be glad to be of service!
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    • Profile picture of the author Underxman
      I like it. A little slow but overall its goood.
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  • Profile picture of the author bapple
    First thing that caught my eye - two sets of social icons (on the right and before comments section). I would go with one
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