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Critique my Website

by Mattush
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Good Afternoon.

I'm new here so hopefully I am the right place for this post.

I'm building a website for my travel service. When I say building, I mean putting colourful blocks together using a wordpress theme and visual composer.
Now I've had some friends and family look at the website and their reaction has been promising, however I need a slight less biased view on the design of the website.

It's not 100% finished yet and I've got an editor to give me some feedback and help with the consistency of the text, so I am aware of these issues.

But I would be so grateful if you could look at my site and tell me where I'm going wrong and where I am doing things well.

As a bit of background, the business is a simple travel booking service in a niche I specialize in. Essentially its marketed at 40+ year olds with disposable income and a taste for a bit of luxury and adventure.

The Domain is

Home - BookMyTrail

Thanks for your help!

Matt
#bookmytrail #critique #holidays #walking #website
  • Profile picture of the author iseultmca
    Overall, I think the site is good, with a nice clean layout. However, the colour of red you're using isn't quite right with the background photo. I'd recommend choosing another colour, perhaps a more true red.

    Hope that helps,
    Iseult
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  • Profile picture of the author askmarcus
    the website loading kinda slow for the background image... do take note on the size of the background... so that the website are able to load quickly...
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  • Profile picture of the author Cruella D
    The website looks good.
    You need to brand it more like creating logo?
    Homepage has needs more info and social icons isn't working.
    Add space in the form page button (between the form and button).
    Other than that its great!

    Goodluck
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  • Profile picture of the author waynmeyer
    Clean simple and effective, the only thing i would add is that font is a little large, cut down the size just a little, and make sure that on the services page you have a container that's not full width, this will help with legibility and focal width.

    Good luck friend
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    • Profile picture of the author AboutTown
      It's a good responsive layout. Will work well for all devices/platforms. I would consider adding a favicon.
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  • Profile picture of the author RolandNR
    I like it, however, I do agree with iseultmca
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    • Profile picture of the author ashiktpi
      the website loading kinda slow for the background image
      do take note on the size of the background...

      so that the website are able to load quickly...
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