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please give your opinion in my website and video

by karental
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hello my name's nala. me and my team currently running a start up in car rental in bali and indonesia.

this is our website and video that we created for pitching in incubator program

can you give us your opinion and critique , thank you

bali.karental.id
#give #opinion #video #website
  • Profile picture of the author munir ahmed
    Hi,
    I find the videos are great, but the first video i cannot really hear or understand what his saying as the volume of the music is louder then his voice....

    I do not know if that is my computer speaker or the video itself... Other then that video looks great, may be try turning the music lower and the speaker need to sound a little more excited...

    Maybe other Warriors in this group have other opinions....
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  • Profile picture of the author Brent Stangel
    I do not know if that is my computer speaker or the video itself...
    It's the same for me.
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    • Profile picture of the author DenniseTan
      Hi. Just finished watching the videos and I currently have your website up on my monitor.
      I find the videos very interesting and straightforward. The animation looks great and how you explained the business is clear. Tho I agree with Munir and Brent that the BG music is louder than the actual script. Good job on the videos!
      For the website, I also find it very appealing. The color palette you've used is not dull. Really clean interface also. Noticeable navigation bar, that's a plus when creating a website. I also appreciate the clip in the middle of the page. Everything a viewer needs to know is already on the homepage. The website is responsive as well. I've checked the website on my phone and I have no problems viewing it.
      All in all, you've done good!
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  • Profile picture of the author karental
    thanks for your opinnion
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  • Profile picture of the author Attie
    Banned
    Because faulty voice so clearly hear not . You can adjust it .
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  • Profile picture of the author bojan92
    Find a better speaker. No offence but you must do that i am not native as well but you can find British accent lady online so it can do your intro for you. Otherwise i like the idea with you lots of success with this. But the voice its gotta go )
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