Creating a spectacular looking site. Make all the recommendations. What do you think now?

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What do you think of my site now I made all the recommendation?
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  • Profile picture of the author agmccall
    The site looks good, but, the articles need to be re-written. They are so keyword stuffed I could not keep reading. I tried reading the article on wordpress contact form plugins and that keyword was used 5 times in 2 or three sentences.

    You should learn to write for the reader and not the search engines, or make sure who you hire to write is a content writer and not a SEO writer

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    • Profile picture of the author JohnMcCabe
      Originally Posted by agmccall View Post

      The site looks good, but, the articles need to be re-written. They are so keyword stuffed I could not keep reading. I tried reading the article on wordpress contact form plugins and that keyword was used 5 times in 2 or three sentences.

      You should learn to write for the reader and not the search engines, or make sure who you hire to write is a content writer and not a SEO writer

      al
      The site does look good. The content sucks.

      Al found one article so keyword-stuffed as to be unreadable.

      I found an article that appears hundreds of times across the web, at least the snippets I checked via Google did, with no attribution.

      If you stole those articles, shame on you. If you paid for original articles, you got cheated.

      Along with the broken English on the home page, this spells trouble for you.

      Now that you have a working design, it's time to go to work on the content.
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  • Profile picture of the author visimedia
    The design part is no problem I think here, the problem is the 'call to action', I mean it's better if you have the goal with your website, maybe to contact you, get trial, demo request, callback request of anything...

    I think you have to optimize this site in that part..
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  • Profile picture of the author Kherk Roldan
    Great site for city directories, but where is the About us page? Also don't forget to add the "blog"page and post consistently
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